>>245908 Tessa gonna choke next page

>>245912 My distaste for this scene has definitely eased up now that I know Tessa's sorta into it. She's wanting Saiya to slow down, not stop. The crazy train has no breaks though, alas. Open wiiide. >>245916 I'm still holding out for Tessa to take the reins and see things through like a champ were Saiya to compare her to Aika over the course of this. Lest we forget that Tessa is also kinda batshit as well.

>>245908 We're finally getting to some elite fetish content and all anybody can do is whine about it.

>>245908 I don't think sticks of butter bend like that

Tessa rn

How long do i have to wait until Tessa reaches this size?

>>245987 Forever. She’s at kip’s max right now. >>245945 I still stand on business that eating butter sticks is gross. >>245908 The 3rd panel is nice. Kip could actually make this comic progress by having Saiya admit she likes doing this to Aika and Tessa, having fantasies about it until she actually decides to do it irl. I mean, this could’ve happened back at the eating contest between Aika and Tessa when Saiya was fondling both of them but whatever.

>>245987 In feederism fetish comic logic, this butter stuffing is going to also work out as a way for Tessa to catch up to Aika. Given Tessa's drive for stuffing herself on her own time (see pic), if she feels this is an arms race that she can win, I could see her wanting to overtake Aika as being "the biggest" in a bid to win Saiya, so who knows? Butter stuffing may have supercharged this race! Reminds me a little of Hayabusa's Sweet Debul when the crazy antagonist makes a return at the end.

Kips reply surprised me.

>>246024 Is it really that surprising? Long-form fetish comics are among the harder stories to write for because, precisely as Kip says, you're catering to two camps: the plot crowd and the fetish crowd. And sadly these two groups are at odds with one another. To illustrate: The plot crowd want to sit down and sink their teeth into a thirteen-course banquet; the fetish crowd are only here for ice cream. Indulging the banquet-goers drags things out for the impatient ice cream enjoyers, bored and uncaring about the dining experience; indulging the ice cream lovers with ice cream breaks further prolongs the dinner as a whole from the frequent interruptions and, at worst, can make the flow of the banquet muddled and confusing. Chocolate syrup and sprinkles over the salmon and whatnot. I'm not suggesting that one can't enjoy both plot and fetish content or that one is superior to the other, but it is an extremely dificult balancing act without a proper harmonious plan behind it. Reacting to the calls from either extreme creates a lose-lose situation wherein no-one is happy. Also, the longer a story goes on, the less planning there is behind it and as such there is less plot cohesion. As the story clumsily lurches between two gears of plot and fetish, they feel increasingly disconnected with one another, creating this meandering or cyclical feeling. If I had one piece of advice to tell comic creators and writers it would be this: tell the story you want and shut out the voices surrounding you, even if that means developing a thicker skin and telling people to shut the fuck up. Fanbases ae fucking poison when it comes to knowing what they want..

>>246024 By this logic Tessa should be twice her size by now, and Saiya also on the fat train. >Throws fans under the bus to justify the non existent plot. This is pure bullshit, seems like hell make any excuse to avoid ending his prized comic. And lets not forget how he treats anyone that does go with the herd. or even dares to whine about his writing.

>>246024 He's such a lying fucker. He knows this is bullshit, he's just too arrogant to admit he's 571 pages into one of the most inept story lines in fetish comics and has no idea how to get out of the hole he dug.

>>246025 It's weird that I, a fan of vore, vomit and scat, get put into the "wants plot but not fetish" bucket ! I like fetishes it's just...when you have a 600 page plot that starts to make no sense at all, it doesn't really seem like reusing the same characters for the same fetishes has any purpose. I agree that creators should generally ignore fans and pursue their own goals. You will see this advice everywhere in video game development forums. Fans are toxic by nature

>>246029 Oh yeah, I'm not defending Kip's more dubious plot or charcater decisions - there were plenty of ways to tie this story up much much sooner but we have slowly sailed past each mooring point down this wild river. The silver lining is that characters do end up going a bit wilder and extreme in more pointed efforts to impart upon the readers and to get the plot yanked back into line. We probably wouldn't have had "Aika eating back-to-back eating challenges" or "Saiya manically forcefeeding Tessa butter" in a saner story route. Flanderizing is normally not a good thing, but for a fetish comic? Eh, sometimes you get some fun moments in navigating the wild rapids. Enjoy the chaos.

>>246024 WHAT PLOT? No actually, what is the fucking plot of this comic? A dipshit trying to get with 2 girls way out of her league? Kip has been looping this comic for 572 pages straight, nothing has been actually happening, there’s been zero progress. Even the fucking “sexy-times” are the same thing over and over, it’s are starting to get old. Like this scene with Tessa right here is either going to end with one of them crying, or Saiya crying at home. How do we know? Because it happens every. single. time. Saiya always regrets what she does with Tessa yet for some unknown reason keeps going back. (The ‘unknown reason’ is likely Kip trying to find any excuse to use Tessa again since she’s the ‘fan favorite’) And PLEASE don’t tell me the plot Kip is talking about is that stupid shit with Saiya’s childhood. Because no one cares. It’s such an ass plot point that doesn’t even make sense. I don’t even have to talk about the fan service because everyone knows Kip is lying out of his ass. Aika and Tessa would be doorframe wrecking huge by now if he was being truthful.

>>246031 The romance plot is clear inasmuch as it's about the lovelife of Saiya and the choices presented with the two girls - will she settle on Tessa? Aika? or some altenate third option altogether? The narrative, the journey, aka "what we do along the way to get there", has been a meandering mess, true. One wonders how much the narrative could have bene had Kip stuck to their guns and not caved into pressure at the time, but what's done is done. While the current story is probably a far cry from what Kip had initially envisioned, it's been at the very least interesting to see Saiya lose her mind, Tessa become a freak and Aika become this dommy glutton. It's not good but it's entertaining to just see things go off the rails for this strange trio.

>>246033 >...how much the tighter the narrative could have been had...

>>246024 >keep up the pace of the plot lol lmao, even nobody would be complaining about a lack of fanservice if plot points actually resolved and led to some closure or catharsis, they would be glazing kip for being an "amazing deep fetish writer"

>>246024 Kip seriously thinks he's moving the plot anywhere? The plot has essentially been frozen for over 3 years now. Page 38 from July 2021 you find out Saiya likes Aika's fat body but respects her. Tessa jealous of Aika. Page 45 is the Saiya goes over Tessa's house and Tessa self soda bloats. Saiya liked that, now she's conflicted. Boom, exposition was over. Somehow, this same exact exposition being told again over the last 500 pages has been moving the plot, really? What has changed in even the slightest plot wise? Even fat wise, Tessa looks like she's gained 50 pounds tops. Aika gained none, I think? A series of random characters proofed in and out of existence with no bearing on the plot. Church man, gym trainer girl, Saiya's sister, bitch girl who got written out of the main cast. Kip's writing is equivalent to a grade schooler copy and pasting his introduction paragraph to pad out the length requirement of his paper.

Page 573 up.

>>246188 If it hasn't already been said a million times Saiya is actually mental this is just hard to read. Gonna keep reading tho :)))

>>246188 I do lowkey hate how it's rewarding Saiya's insane and selfish plan, but damned if these two degenerates weren't perfectly made for one another. Tessa being on board with this brings this to a whole new level, maddeningly so!

>>246188 Legally it's questionable, morally it's unpleasant, personally I like it.

>>246188 Nothing is gonna happen, next or next chapter Saiya will feel guilty for Tessa and the plot will again start to repeat in a circular loop. Atleast Kip is still is still keeping the weight gain going around on Aika and Tessa, but it's super slow. Honestly, this comic is now like "Rent a Girlfriend" of fat fetish comics. I wouldn't even be surprised if a one day Kip just drops a full Saiya cuck scene.

>>246196 It's donald trump levels of this amount of evil and stupid shouldn't keep working yet it does

>>246188 Why Tessa has two navels in the second panel? Is he fucking tracing AI?

I think the 2 navels is a lazy edit of the type we've noted here in the past. also, check out the DeviantArt page, there's at least 10 people agreeing that the plot is going nowhere and getting frustrated

>>246202 It might denote that Tessa's getting that double-belly sag going on, though I admit it does look a bit odd here.

>>246188 every new page makes me want to see the tables turned on Saiya even more

A fun idea: While going down the throuple route, Aika learns about the butter-stuffing escapades and gets oddly jealous of the extra attention lavished on Tessa. She wants the same ridiculous treatment too, insisting upon it! Just funny to me that Aika would domineer Saiya to insist that she be stuffed with butter too. She has to assert dominance as the best eater of the three after all~

>>246218 same, I want to see saiya get dominated very hard and rough. Problem is we are running low on characters who could do this, with aika and tessa both being useless blobs. Maybe stacy?

My cursed brothers, I'm just gonna groove with this insanely hot page until sunday when Saiya starts feeling bad.

>>246188 Saiya has rabies confirmed.

>>246188 *537

>>246235 Nah, that was Kip's goof. Definitely 573 pages.

>>246188 Saiya: It's a win, win Benson: Actually, It's a LOSE, LOSE, CAUSE YOU'RE FIRED!

>>246024 Yeah didn't he use this excuse before with BWS/LWS/DWS? Could've sworn he said he cut a side character's arc out and ended up doing more fanservice "which caused people to complain"... which is bullshit because no one was bitching about fanservice in a Kip comic at that time. >>246025 >To illustrate: The plot crowd want to sit down and sink their teeth into a thirteen-course banquet; the fetish crowd are only here for ice cream. I'd argue you've got the analogy backwards. The point of a fetish comic is to be a fetish comic, with the plot being something that's sprinkled in that keeps it fresh and interesting and keeps things moving. Any time he has gone back to the plot, it mostly feels like a redo of what's been established before. >>246188 I'm sure sticks of butter come in other shapes but I can't help but think Saiya is feeding her soap... It also occurs to me just how dumb the "feathers fall out" thing is because it ruins one of the only unique things about Kip's characters. >>246211 Nah he messed up. Belly folds rarely (if ever) develop under the bellybutton, Kip doesn't do other shapes, and belly clefts don't look like that.

Two things are apparent now. If DA is any guide, 60% of the audience is now annoyed with either the protagonist being a complete cunt or the plot going in circles for 2+ years. On Patreon it's more like 30% annoyed, but there may be a buffer band of people holding their tongue there. The second is that, with this plus NLB, I feel we can clearly say that Kip does like dark, edgy, crazy girl characters that do weird shit. Any further worked by Kip should be expected to contain this type of content.

>1337 neat

>>246276 To your second point, I'd say that's a safe bet. Can't forget Grace from the sister series also being darkly unhinged.

>>243524 I will put in my viewpoint and see if this triggers the mods so hard that they delete my comment. >I dunno, it's pretty tactless of the questioner. The fuck? >> "Hey, the thing that you enjoy doing, when are you gonna stop? How much longer?" OK so let me write down my standpoint. I liked the early work of Kip the later ones drag forever and this is a problem. I simply started looking to other artists because of this. Kip can decide whatever however I am not obligated to love an artist forever especially that the changes are so obvious. For a example of a comic that I like now it is Never Enough Bites by sweetdreamcoffee Once more if my likes and dislikes trigger the mods they can feel free to delete my comment however I like to know why this is so. > "Hey, the thing that you enjoy doing, when are you gonna stop? How much longer?" This is a nonsensical statement. Like who thinks like this? >are you gonna stop? Seriously WHO? Lets go to Kips first comic for a good example. A story has a beginning middle and end. And a LOT of people like to see some conclusion. Simple story Sister A fattens up Sister B. However sister B gets Sister A to try the fattening food and she also gets fat. THE END. You can make more pages for this story however people want the conclusion to that story. Once more who the fuck will go > "Hey, the thing that you enjoy doing, when are you gonna stop? How much longer?" >are you gonna stop? Like who thinks like this? It is like asking >Oh yea if you like sex so much why do you want to ORGASM (it ends)? Stories for me have to have a conclusion. It is like being teased with a conclusion to the story and never seeing it finish. In contrast to littlepiece0fc4ke (an artist I recommend) Kip can not draw sex this is a bad thing and you needing to scroll 30 or more pages of RomCom is a bad thing. I see the same characters in the same situations for over 101 pages and the RomCom is the worst. Why can Kip not go back and do comics like in the start? Why is Kip getting worse? Can I voice my opinion on this? I for one will not consume Kips never ending story and go to other artists or only take the 1 page drawings who manage to tell a far more sexy story in words and implications then whatever is buried under 300 pages of RomCom. Lets see if I am allowed to voice my opinion on this subject on this website.

>>246188 >>246221 >>246222 >>246225 Minor note Manga characters have crazy hair to distinguish themselves since manga is in black and white and most of it has identical face characters. Anime does the same and simply color codes character hairs. Why did Kip not do the same for the characters? Color coding the hair only or inventing a crazy reason for them to have objects embedded in their heads is a great idea. Most of the characters look identical. And despite them having a in universe LORE exploitation why they have wings in their heads they never get any distinguishing hair or objects. Very strange. Also the head wing lore got abandoned or something. When was the last time when it was even relevant?

>>246311 I also find it odd that Kip can't draw sex. Nobody in OSC has ever put their finger into a vagina. We had like 1 or 2 cases of kissing a boob in 573 pages. What's up with that? It feels like Kip must be asexual.

>>246311 >Like who thinks like this? You will note from that post you're responding to that it in turns refers to a post that has since been removed. A janitor purged a screenshot of an exchange between a Patreon supporter essentially asking that pretty thoughtless question along with Kip's terse response. People were clutching at pearls along with choosing to read too much into Kip's defensiveness as somehow airing his own frustrations at the comic. Without the whole picture your post doesn't make a lot of sense as a result. You're tilting at windmills, mate. So to answer your question of who would ask such a nonsensical thing: a fan literally did. You just missed the boat on it by about 2-3 weeks. >>246314 The head wing thing is relevant right now with Tessa losing or having lost feathers.

>>246315 Deviantart rules please understand

>>246188 Plot twist; Saiya dies from rabies lmao. Boring ass page though. Also “Aika will never know?” Aika gets (reasonably) pissed off whenever Saiya has something to do with Tessa. She’s gonna know. >>246202 This conversation keeps coming up, and I genuinely wonder if Kip just doesn’t look at the shit he’s drawing or if it’s actually AI. There was a problem with the clothes constantly changing in that theme park scene too. >>246199 We’ve already seen this before. Saiya deciding she wants to do some crazy shit, then later on feels bad for being a piece of shit (as she should) but instead of fixing it she cries for like 20 pages before doing it again. I’m gonna be deadass, I’m only reading at this point because I want to see how Kip will actually end it.

>>246324 You're probably right, but there probably is a general reticence to draw explicit scenes since there are workarounds to such rulings ("for the uncensored version of this page, go to Patreon, SubscribeStar etc") so either it just doesn't interest Kip or he presumes that his fanbase, mostly comprised of specific deviants, aren't interested. It would be interesting if there is anysuch discussion or demand among his patrons for explicit content, if any, just as a rough barometer.

>>246327 >Boring ass page though. Naw, gonna have to disagree. The discovery of Tessa being in on this wild shit makes the scene way more interesting.

>>246327 Since the characters are now all clearly psycho , the only reason I'm still watching is to see if we hit darker kinks. Butter swallowing has already disgusted a few commenters as an escalation, i would enjoy continuing further down that disgusting path .