>>295013 >>295019 I wish we saw her getting bigger in the page itself and not just through timeskips like SDC did before in this example:

SDC honestly looks so lost right now. And I mean using Google to search for Google levels of lost Ever since NEB ended I feel like shes been chasing that same high to find a unique concept that no one or very few have done until now and while searching for it shes done nothing, but make the most basic slop possible. - The Dougnation comic? Directionless and gives the feeling that SDC herself doesnt know where to go with it. - Ordered to maid? Basic and theres nothing to make it stand out. - Too Many Skip Days? Just sad. A new and hot concept isnt that hard to make when its something fictional and you have so many themes to choose from. It can be something futuristic, historic, scifi, fantasy ect....even if you want stuff to make something slice of life there are still a lot of options avaliable, but SDC does none of them....why? Even me right now while writing this I have 5 story ideas in mind that are WAY more interesting than what SDC is doing right now and im sure im not the only one. Why is SDC acting like she has done every single comic idea possible when that cant be further from the truth? Has SDC said anything about her future plans? Or asked the audience for help or what they want to see? Does she not care and just ignores everyone?

>>294586 >And by "dont have porn in it" i mean this type of fat girls fetish porn. Some romance stories also have sex scenes in them. agree. that's like a difference between full-on porn and erotica (which i consider to be a regular normal romance story with sex scenes like you said). SDC should look into making the latter and promote it as such because it seems that's what she wants at the end of the day. that way, everyone would be satisfied.

>>295045 To be fair, she's an excellent artist, but it's clear her strength isn't writing, but to be fair even these recent stories are being shadowed by the much more succesful stuff she has made. Comparing 7/10 with 9/10 makes the prior look shitty, had you seen the superior work they've done

>>295070 Her art isn't bad I'm not saying that, but when you combine it with her shitty writing and storyboarding it just gets brought down a long with it and her recent comics haven't been close a 7/10 at all. Sure for those who prefer vanilla it could be but for me whose reading their work is to see fat girls get bigger they are 5/10. Some could say that "because the comic only has 5-10 pages she cant cram a lot into it so she can only do timeskips" when that just isn't true. A lot of others artists I've seen have done the same short comics, but with much better pacing and paneling which you can see in the given examples and SDC either lives under a rock and doesn't know these better examples exist or she's too lazy now with trying to improve after her ego boost from getting popular from her JOMB and NEB series. SDC just needs to hire a writer and storyboard artist if she lost those abilites and if she can make 5k a month just from her patreon sales then I'm sure she can save a couple bucks from that into hiring some people.

Does anyone have archives of sweetdreamcoffee

>>295243 You could check them out on kemono their stuff dates back to when they were doing male content

>>294799 The whole grooming aspect of this still rubs me the wrong way.

>>295259 Damn legit didn't realize it until now....that's fucked up. A stalker following a streamer and then meets them irl, but hides thee fact the stalker knows them.

>>295259 >>295262 SDC usually puts a groomer character or adjacent in her comics. Liz, the stalker character in Doughnation Dependency, and the maid in Ordered to Maid. I mean groomer in the sense that the character Transends just being a feeder or enabler. By also trying to phycological change the character. Although I really wouldn't take it too seriously, the entire point of these stories is to just a fat girl doing cute fat girl things and a character that either drives the plot and or can act as a self insert for the reader. Some of you guys try reading into fat fetish comics like they are Shakespeare and then get mad that the story sucks narratively when the post nut clarity kicks in.

>>295455 Thats why I refered to the redhead as a stalker and not a enabler or feedee like the rest because at least they already know the person they want to make fat or just met them and develop a relationship with in the end while the redhead doesnt care about that and just moves on to the next girl when she gets bored.

>>295455 So SDC has a rape fetish just like Vivziepop?

>>295472 I don't think so. I think its more so she doesn't know how to write a character that doesn't come across that way. Not that is really a bad thing for he characters to have these tendencies, since the feedee character is always into it or accepting of it and they have other qualities. Also these are the characters that usually drive the weight gain in SDC's art.

>>295476 SDC just decides to give the feeders the personality of a mastermind whose always 2 steps ahead instead of just someone who likes fat girls and wants to be in a relationship with one. Like Liz in JOMB and NEB always had a smug and calm expression before she folded and became a glutton and we then actually saw her get horny.

Anyone else on the patreon, because I'm extremely confused by the two "winners" of the polls. There were two polls, yet both winners were from one, and neither had more votes than Ann from Persona 5 on that poll. The other poll was a tie between Invisigal and Aqua, so... is SDC just lying and hoping no one notices or am I missing something?

>>295686 There's a carryover system, where a portion of the votes they got from past polls are counted. Cordelia has been there for years, so she likely had loads going in.

Can someone make a thread or tell me a thread that has this artist https://www.patreon.com/wishroll

>>295814 okay wait hold on I think I’m starting to see the vision

>>295835 The manipulative stalker feeder found her own willing feedee

>>295814 It should be mandatory for each page to have 6 panels so that more stuff happens in that one page

>>292558 what are the other pages?

>>295457 tbf she was portrayed as a "villain"/bad person from the very first page (unlike a certain kip's character) so i don't really see the issue

New comic cover page

>>296041 Could it be the mythical female reboot of One Chance Karma? We're probably not that lucky... pic tax.

It Finally starts to get nice, i wanna see how much she fills her

>>296873 Now that the stalker has the streamer giving into being a fatty, she can now slowly turn her into a willing feedee, now the only thing to wish now is that by proxy, the stalker herself will gain too due to something preventing her from getting hands on her fatty

Has she mentioned a continuation of Delinquent Girlfriend? She left off with this, but didn't say it was the last page.

>>297149 I think that got abandoned

>>297125 More than 3 panels? No bullshit text covering half of the screen? Already gaining weight? Seems like a promising start

>>297149 >>297166 No that was the end. It wasn't abandoned because a continuation was never mentioned, it's a complete sequence.

>>297168 Oh ok sorry

Unrelated but Sweet’s panel layouts drive me crazy sometimes. They just kinda throw a square wherever and call it good, even if the gutter is inconsistent or the flow isn’t clear

>>297571 she's been taking notes from the goat

>>297877 oh i see this going the "i'm actually into it" route where she will slowly enjoy being a fatty more and more and by the time she finds out the red head is a manipulator she will give in, even if she disagrees

>>297877 This comic isn't just a "slow burn" in WG Comics terms; it's already lasted almost as long as five issues of traditional comics, and it still feels like a prologue. This is unbearable, and even if it gets good, I don't know how reading 120 pages of nothing will make it worthwhile

>>297887 You realize that this is exactly why she's started publishing 5-page comic sequences on the side, right? Best of both worlds. I think she has the best thought-out release schedule of the four horsemen (Kip, Belt, Pixiveo, SweetDreamCoffee I'm coining it right now) by far. you get The Odyssey with fun short stories on the side as opposed to just The Odyssey. It is significantly slower than the long comics she's run previously, but it's genuinely such a step up from all of them writing-wise that I consider it a good thing. Every other comic she's written (post-femboy) kinda just has cardboard cutout women eating themselves into obesity while feeding each other and whispering the corniest one-liners imaginable. There was progression, but there was never any sort of consistent plot pushing forward any interesting narrative, it was like keeping up with the Kardashians but we're at Liz's place where women just eat and become fat for 175 pages. Which, if that's your thing, more power to you! I liked it enough. This current comic is really fun though, I love just how stupidly in denial this main woman is as situation after situation crops up and she performs the most insane downplaying known to man, all while quite clearly entering chubby territory. It's pretty fucking hot, idk. I'm looking forward to seeing what sort of stunts the insane redhead pulls to continue enabling the main girl. I think it will really pick up soon, they've met in-person now so I can't imagine the payoff being too far away.

>>297887 No? The protagonist has been gaining weight steadily, we got shown different extra pieces of wg content from side characters, plus the whole point until now was that the manipulative red head finally got her scenario to finally introduce herself in person to the bottom heavy streamer, that's literally been the whole point until now

>>297890 I agree. I like what SweetDream's been cooking lately, and the plot of the main comic so far is honestly pretty engaging. Yes it's slow but the payoff always hits harder when the buildup is fleshed out, imo. The characters feel more dynamic than the last few big comics, SDC always excelled at character design but their personalities were generally so one dimensional. Getting shorter comics on the side is a great treat to keep impatience at bay.

>>297890 It’s nice to actually see a slow and more importantly consistant weight gain. The story hasn’t gone on getting distracted by some crazy side plots and remembers it’s a fetish comic first and foremost. Kayla’s weight gain hasn’t been massive, but she’s been getting good angles and actually showing off her gains while not rushing through them. It’s nice to see the chubby stage actually presant for longer than a page at most. Makes it hotter being able to dwell on it. Honestly my only real grip is that I wouldn’t mind seeing a bit more going into the pages again like when it first started. However it’s either this or scd taking more time with the pages or a break once in awhile. Like you said too, it’s hard to get pissed off about the speed of this one when you do have another short comic running alongside it with far quicker gratification for fat babes getting fatter.

>>297912 There's hoping she doesn't time skip her gains.

Ive noticed some weird "proportion mistakes" SDC has done on his two current comics. With the succubus one the girls hair highlights keep mixing between red and pink when in the first page they were pink, but now its sometimes red? Idk if this is intentional as a way to show the succubuses influence or SDC forgets what color her highlights are which is just lazy. Also her friends eyes feel too far apart and her face in general looks a bit creepy. In the 4th panel where shes taking a selfie there is a hand on the right side of her belly when there shouldnt be because both hands are occupied with one holding the phone and the other one behind her head. For the doughnation one I feel like the proportions are also an issue. The red girls forehead feels way too big and her tits look a lot more saggy than they should be and i drew in blue what I think it would look normally. The saggy tits for example feel intentional as a way to cover more of her body for SDC to draw less. One of her sleeves is also longer than the other which i drew in purple. The furniture also looks she drew it in one minute by not even making the chair parallel with the table for example.

>>297890 >>297887 >>297880 >>297892 >>297906 >>297912 In my opinion no comic is worth edging years to just to get one final sequence no matter how good the final sequence is. People just want to read something for 5 min, finds a hot scene, beat off to it and forget about it until next week until theyre horny again. People are saying his works before were slop and like this approach of more story when that just isnt true. Comics like Just One More Bite and Never Enough Bites are what brought SDC on the map and its the main reason anyone knows her for today. The comics also had actual interesting stories with showing Liz and how she got socialy pressured into becoming thin for the companies image and then she discovered her "magic word" and used it as an outlet for her stress. The way she kept using her power for more and more pleasure until she went over the edge and it backfired on her was also hot af. And then the sequel explored more of that by giving us backstories on Liz and other characters and showed Liz accepting for who she really was. The current stories that SDC does lack that. You can tell that just by looking at the view count from pages alone on deviantart. The comics are just boring and bring nothing to the table. The doughntion one is just a streamer becoming mindlesly fat. The food faster one was just a worker making a girl mindlessly fat. Those comics were and are actual slop. At least JOMB and NEB had a gimmick with the "magic word" and the current succubus one has at least a fantasy element with the succubus.