Kayla's personality was somewhat pessimistic and apathetic from the start, so it works that she would fatten up. But I dont think the weight gain should feel like a punishment for her being a shit/not heeding her sister's warnings about red head. Also it's preferable for her to be less in denial about the gain as time goes on and just accept it, so she doesnt seem like she could be autistic. Maybe she'll find out about red head's intentions to fatten her and not even care that she's turning into a land whale. Overall I do think this comic is interesting bc the dynamics are different than usual. It was very slow to begin with, but picking up. Should be a new page tmrw