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Post stories written in the second person, where “you” are the one being fed (you feeding someone is also alright). Second Person POV Stories 11/05/2022 (Sat) 16:14:20 No. 5406
Looking for second person stories. Theres a lot out there but im betting theres stuff i havent seem yet: Stuff sort of like this is good: https://www.deviantart.com/hungrygaydragon/art/Everyone-s-Feeding-You-914913988
https://archiveofourown.org/works/41580918/chapters/104293053 this also has some groping and stuffing
https://www.deviantart.com/thespookyend This guy has a massive catalog when it comes to POV WG as well as some feeding
My new story is in second-person. "You" aren't being fed, nor are you exactly doing the feeding either. You're really just witnessing it. I have an idea for a sequel where that might change, though... Also, writing in the second-person actually really hard. Or at least it seems like it's hard to do it well. I'm not sure if I did it well this time. I feel like half the sentences starting with "you" gets pretty old, but I was having a hard time wording things any other way. As always, I appreciate any feedback that anyone has. https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-SSBBW-WG-972327701
https://www.deviantart.com/bouboulover https://shrubberylogistic.tumblr.com/ these 2 are my fav in the pov category
>>7458 This story is pretty good. When you say you have some ideas for a darker follow-up story, what were you thinking about? I was personally imagining a story where she falls down, injures her leg, and is unable to get off the floor.
>>7478 I'm not sure exactly how far I want to take it. There will definitely be a focus on Madeleine's mobility struggles. But I don't know if I want to leave it at that or go even further with health issues.
>>7478 Oh yeah, and thanks for reading by the way! I'm glad you liked the story.
https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Sheena-484930901 I used second person POV in Sheena, yjen I continued it with its sequel Rebecca (TW, https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Part-2-734986312 -1-734984781/scat)https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Part-3-734988201https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Final-734988729 There's also an on going spin off called Samantha is also Second Person, to carry on the theme.
>>7458 I'm back with two sequels to this story. It was originally going to be one, but the third part gets pretty dark and I figured I was better off keeping it separate. Let me know what you think! https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-Chapter-2-XWG-Immobile-973357945 https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-Chapter-3-XWG-Health-Issues-973358674

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