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Post stories written in the second person, where “you” are the one being fed (you feeding someone is also alright). Second Person POV Stories No. 5406
Looking for second person stories. Theres a lot out there but im betting theres stuff i havent seem yet: Stuff sort of like this is good: https://www.deviantart.com/hungrygaydragon/art/Everyone-s-Feeding-You-914913988
https://archiveofourown.org/works/41580918/chapters/104293053 this also has some groping and stuffing
https://www.deviantart.com/thespookyend This guy has a massive catalog when it comes to POV WG as well as some feeding
My new story is in second-person. "You" aren't being fed, nor are you exactly doing the feeding either. You're really just witnessing it. I have an idea for a sequel where that might change, though... Also, writing in the second-person actually really hard. Or at least it seems like it's hard to do it well. I'm not sure if I did it well this time. I feel like half the sentences starting with "you" gets pretty old, but I was having a hard time wording things any other way. As always, I appreciate any feedback that anyone has. https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-SSBBW-WG-972327701
https://www.deviantart.com/bouboulover https://shrubberylogistic.tumblr.com/ these 2 are my fav in the pov category
>>7458 This story is pretty good. When you say you have some ideas for a darker follow-up story, what were you thinking about? I was personally imagining a story where she falls down, injures her leg, and is unable to get off the floor.
>>7478 I'm not sure exactly how far I want to take it. There will definitely be a focus on Madeleine's mobility struggles. But I don't know if I want to leave it at that or go even further with health issues.
>>7478 Oh yeah, and thanks for reading by the way! I'm glad you liked the story.
https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Sheena-484930901 I used second person POV in Sheena, yjen I continued it with its sequel Rebecca (TW, https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Part-2-734986312 -1-734984781/scat)https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Part-3-734988201https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Final-734988729 There's also an on going spin off called Samantha is also Second Person, to carry on the theme.
>>7458 I'm back with two sequels to this story. It was originally going to be one, but the third part gets pretty dark and I figured I was better off keeping it separate. Let me know what you think! https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-Chapter-2-XWG-Immobile-973357945 https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-Chapter-3-XWG-Health-Issues-973358674
This is decent, rest of their stuff might not be exactly what you are looking for but same general idea https://www.deviantart.com/weisco/art/Feedee-wg-encouragement-The-perfect-feedee-963845526
these ones were rather nice https://www.deviantart.com/songbird567/art/Guilty-Pleasure-Glynda-Goodwitch-879863999 https://www.deviantart.com/songbird567/art/Guilty-Pleasure-Glynda-Goodwitch-Pt-2-1041235857