/elite/ - Erotic Literature

>>7022 Got you, it’s not exactly like an exchange student type thing but it’s an Asian girl moving to America after being adopted https://www.deviantart.com/adipose-rex/art/Welcome-to-America-part-1-880217996

>>7027 Honestly the concept is so godlike, first chapter alone was very intriguing, but the rapid wg bugs me off and then the main girl gains like 70 pounds of food in a day or so. If the writer decided to take it more time and explore more the siblings this could be much better.

>>7051 This is a really good narrative, especially if unrealistic weight gain timelines annoy you (as it does me too tbh). Probably not the part of Asia you were thinking, but still sounds like you might like it: https://www.deviantart.com/dania201/art/F-ck-America-Chapters-1-2-887402425 (and subsequent chapters)

I'd love to write something like this sometime, I adore the angle since given how they'll be completely blown away by the sheer amount of food available to them and unaware of just how calorific it all is. Love that sort of corruption angle too, like they're supposed to be these honour students who are aiming for high ranking jobs and they end up settling for shitty fast food worker jobs because it means getting free food.

>>7065 Yeah it's slmost like they're a nation of whores, right? It's sad.

>>7065 Did you draw this? It's pretty good.

>>7068 I didn't, it's a really old sketch from a tumblr account from around 2014. It might've been from kawaiidebu's but their tumblr is long gone now.

>>7059 that was really good, do you have any idea if they’re still working on parts 11 + 12 or if they’ve abandoned it >.> really good characterisation and lack of filler/generic character interactions that plague most fattywank (getting invested in characters improves the fap but the character has to be interesting, idc about the development of stock characters which is 90% of fattywank MCs). also liked how they showed the MC’s struggle with their WG (i.e the author understands how massive weight gain works and that it greatly impacts people’s daily lives) without it becoming extreme slob or misery porn

>>7083 They say that they're busy and that they're gonna finishing the story at some point. Don't know when that will be though.

>>7022 I'm not into Asian women but this is a great idea. Might have to try it out myself, though my unfamiliarity with Asian culture might be a hindrance. FWIW I live close to a huge Chinese/Korean neighborhood and the difference between the immigrants and their US-born offspring is dramatic.

>>7059 OP here, this is dank as fuck, still works but from a different angle. Especially cool considering how I've been to Amman a couple times, so this is not too dissimilar from a few fantasies I've had before.

>>8101 In fact, I had been looking for a story to translate into Arabic as a practice exercise. This may be a winner...

https://www.deviantart.com/shamelessrps/art/True-Taste-of-The-American-Way-WG-Slob-Immobile-1021793640