Posting them

>>247924 Bibin?

>>247916 >Be Cool, Be Wild, Be Blobby Are you a child?

>>247935 He seems more lively then your boring ass

>>247916 That thread starter being a Sonic Adventure makes this peak you kick ass

Just a thought - maybe the schizo keeps harrassing your threads because you aggravate them? Just call it the salt thread and they might not schizo out. Guarantee they'll spam this thread more now you're irritating them

>>247964 >salt fans are autistic fetishoid sonic obsessed weirdos It tracks so well it's almost funny. Next you'll be posting Pro Salt memes that are like "When I get a drink from Salt's cock after I praise his mediocre comic" or "When salt decides to acknowledge us slightly and we all kiss his boots" or some other horribly unfunny shit>>247964

>>247983 Go back to the schizo thread, you depressing downer

>>248049 damn that beach seems like a common spot for the bws lore, nice. She's looking nice and round

>>248051 Where else would you find whales?

>>248056 Excellent argument Although I meant it in a narrative way, this would be Year 1 Sel and Beach Stuff takes place here as well, as you can see Year 4 Selene in the BG. So I find it interesting that they coincide

>>248049 Salt got bullied into cutting the inflation shit and giving her fat all around...

>>248049 Hold up, Salt just fuck up his own timeline

>>248062 And don't even get started on the mutant pretzel that is Serena & Nikume's alternate timelines >>248049 >Those lines to illustrate her butt juggles from her motion It's always the little details that add so much

>>248062 Technically he could save it he makes Brie lose weight, but I'm pretty sure 1. The cameo isn't much for him to think of and 2. It would just be an unsatisfying ending to this comic.

>>248061 Once again proving the age old argument that bullying is a neccessity to stop people making poor decisions The comic still sucks but credit where it is due I guess

>>248062 The only rational explanation is that they’re eldritch beings not shackled by the laws of time

>>248062 uh oh looks like there's another split in the timeline. Someone needs to update the saltverse timeline image now

why did salt use ai generation novelai in his latest comic

>>248116 Least obvious ragebait

>>248072 It's already an unsatisfying end, this and his previous two comics have sucked. He just needs to stop doing comics, clearly he's doesn't know what he's doing with them.

>>248120 Genuinely, what is wrong with the most recent one? It's all fanservice built around a theme. It's all about a girl being fat, trying to hide it, and getting fatter. Why does it suck?

>>248120 Also, if he doesn't do them he'll never get better. Experience is how people learn. At least he's doing short comics, and not trying to do a 500 page Pixi/Kip dumpsterfire

>>248127 Except he does one per year and already had the perfect formula in Couple Stuff, everything after that has been experimental dogshit

>>247928 didnt know there was a new chapter this is some hot stuff wowe

>>248127 He would probably only get better if his patreon became short-comic oriented but i doubt ill ever happen. I think most of this comics are poorly thought out ideas and the only ones he actually rached his brain were Losing Control and Couple Stuff. You can even tell by the panels amount, quality and attempts with the writing.

>>248062 That's it? That's how it ends? God, I wash I was a rich aristocrat that could pay him to draw anything I want, because I could do better than this ending.

>>248142 Good fucking lord, it's clearly just a reference in another comic and isn't canon. You people will cry over literally nothing

>>248129 The Zelda comic was his only good comic.

>>248143 salt: makes objective agrbage shit bws cock suckers: WAHHH ITS SO GOOD THOUGH ITS LITERALLY PEAK EYAH NOTHING HAPOENED GOT 12 YEARS BUT ITS OEAK PEAK BLOB OEAK"

>>248150 Cry harder faggot

>>248152 Sounds more like you whenever someone talks badly about BWS. You can't handle negativity.

>>248062 it's as easy as opening the psd and make her wider

>>248154 I can't handle negativity when it's retarded whining pretending to be objective. I've got plenty of negative opinions about Salt's art.

>>248049 I like the size she's at but I'm a little sad, I wish we got to see more of her trying to hold her fat back with shapewear. Oh well.

>>248155 or just adding the "wider" tag to the AI salt uses to generate these images

>>248049 This ending is fucking sucks. It just completely abandons the theme of sucking your stomach, which the comic was based around, for a shitty lore page that doesn't even make sense. Generally I don't like purely story based pages, but if salt really wanted this ending he could have atleast dedicated a page showing she's accepted her weight gain and doesent feel the need to suck in anymore, this just feels jarring. Also the idea that Selene remembers a random girl she's seemingly never spoken to at the beach is dumb. Also two thirds of the page are either just a boring background shot or reused from the Selene sequence. All salt had to do was just a rendered page of her popping a button at work, and a page setting that up. Take me out ended to abruptly with no follow up, beach stuff had to much exposition leading up to the ending, and this ending is just confusing and abrupt. It can't be that hard to create a good ending.

>>248191 Sure it could've had a little more effort into it, but then you know how everyone reacts when there's more story elements to the further pages. Like, what kind of story do you want and how long do you want it to be? Don't forget, YOU ARE VIEWING THESE PAGES FOR FREE, SO WHAT IS THERE TO COMPLAIN ABOUT!?

>>248191 It’s actually fucking incredible how fucking retarded you are. >this ending fucking sucks The comic isn’t done, there’s still one more page >shitty lore page that doesn’t even make sense What doesn’t make sense? And what about this constitutes “lore?” >Selene remembers a random girl She’s the girl that inspired Selene to get thick, I think that’s someone you’d remember. >Two thirds of the page are a boring background shot and reused shots You mentioned wanting setup, but apparently you don’t actually if you get this pissed about setup This is why people don’t take anyone on this site seriously, your criticism is shit.

>>248198 Let's be honest, does anyone ever take anyone seriously on a 4Chan-esque site?

is this good? (art by @friend_of_bone on twitter)

I want to smack her ass

>>248198 two more pages though, i saw it in the patreon shill, unless the cover counts as page one

>>248207 Just in case y’all need some info

>>248198 >You mentioned wanting setup, but apparently you don’t actually if you get this pissed about setup I thought it was the final page (>>248118) so I thought it was a waste of space considering thiw was the final page, my bad. I still think her suddenly not concealing how fat she is was wack, but yeah I was being a dumbass lol.

>>248212 I meant to link >>248120 not >>248118.

>>248204 they posted a colored version 2 hours ago

>>24819 Never understood why something being free means you aren't allowed to complain or criticize it. If you gave me cookie with shit for chocolate chips for free, I would complain. Not thay anythinghere is real criticism besides one or two post. >>248198 >This is why people don’t take anyone on this site seriously, your criticism is shit. Buddy, you think people take a 4chan clone site about fat women seriously to begin with, you're out of it. >>248230 Hot.

>>248206 I want to be smacked by her ass. We are not the same.

>>248210 this comic is the critical moment where salt does an axel esque tip and goes full into inflation then comes the diapers and the pigs

Don’t think anyone posted this one

Damn, thread is still as toxic and as insane as Kip's thread

>>248264 at least people are being sometimes realistic here and pointing out salts objective flaws

>>248376 Nah, the criticism in here is as batshit insane as Kip's thread

>>248380 99% of the criticism here is legit, salt just has his simps out in full force

>>248381 How is it legit when half of the thread are at each other's throat and blurring the line between bait and genuine criticism.

>>248384 The "at the throat" part is because everyone flips out when something negative is said. And before ANYONE here says something about it not being actual criticism, when it is, the first thing you hear is "Why are you complaining? It's free!" These are discussion boards. If it wasn't, we wouldn't be able to send post. If you all ignored the assholes and actually accepted that Salt's work is subjective and people can have issues, the threads wouldn't fall off so quickly.

New page not ffte

So the ffte comic has ended?

>>248401 Why put a plush toy under her when we could have a actual person. Fuck Lucy guy + blob shit.

>>248403 nope, two pages left

>>248401 Time to see the Kip plague!

>>248404 or, hear me out, NATSU

>>248401 Somebody just needs to edit the hair to pink and noone will know it was that shitty self insert instead of Natsu.

>>248414 >>248401 EDIT THREAD PEOPLE!!!! PLEASE FIX THIS SHIT AND MY LIFE IS YOURS.

>>248388 As someone that mostly has no issues with bws' art, I agree. Most of you are some dickriders that knee jerk at the tiniest bit of criticism.

>>248452 Yes anon, everyone in this thread believes you're not a drooling schizo.

>>248404 Its not even blob, what are you even on about??

>>248049 Hear me out, final page: We realize she was actually still holding it in, then she not only lets it all out, she pushes it out even further

>>248600 Yeah she has like defined limbs, and can move freely lol. Anything above 200 Ibs is blob shit I guess

>>>>248531 Trans people on your mind a lot, eh anon?

alright which of you fuckers in here got the civil discussion thread dusted?

She'd shock too if she knows what happen to her

>>248670 something about this feels incredibly deviantart autism-coded and i mean that in a really really good way. this should be the new meta.

>>248650 That would be wild

>>248661 theres no need for it anymore, the schizo thread is fine for it, half the discussions in it anyway were schizoposting about salt

>>248650 i could see that, her stomach in the newest page is a lot less pronounced compared to the rest of her body than it is in the rest of the comic

>>248661 If you want a general discussion then go to the general discussion board, dumbass

>>248401 Edit out the god awful self insert and this would be great

>>248650 Core strength of a god and the body of a goddess.

>>248905 This was a waste, of all of our time…

I'm mostly disappointed that the failed date scene simply got dropped. Salt loves humiliating his characters, so odd that he didn't follow through this time.

>>248906 Fuck off, don't speak for others you loser.

>>248905 Mid, feels like even Salt didnt believe this shit was gonna work. Look at the recycled page...

>>248905 the end? i thought it was 12 pages i really like that last panel for some reason tho

She would have been way more entertaining than this girl>>248905

>>248917 either we get a bonus page like Beach Fuckup or he really axed this one.

>>248905 wow that was disappointing. I love the 'hiding how fat you are' trope, but no one seems to know how to write it worth a damn. Really would love a redux of this concept with a better plot

>>248905 Honestly, I expected her to be fatter.

>>248917 >>248920 It's two pages you empty headed morons, use your fucking eyes! It even says "page 11-12" on the file name!! HOLY SHIT

>>248917 it is. The last page we got is a double page, combining page 11 and 12 together. It's not the first time Salt did this. Just look at the last page of Lucy's stuffing. That one's an example of him using double pages.

>>248905 Are you kidding me? All of this junk about "people seeing I'm fat" and she just RANDOMLY decides it's okay within two pages where the ONLY PERSON looking at her is the girl with blue hair? What. An. Abysmal. Comic. Easily just as bad as the beach comic, no, worse.

>>248925 Thats why i say bonus page(since is over) or axed by combining pages. Seething dickrider

How are people saying this is worse than beach stuff? The main problem's with beach stuff was the shit paneling, the amount of boring and redundant page's, the fact it felt like nothing happened, and even if I didn't mind it personally I know people wanted to see wg and there was none. There was actually some pretty good moment's in this comic, and while the ending feels a bit lackluster since we're at the beach for like the 5th time in a salt comic and it's just Selene ogling Brie, it has been pretty good over all and atleast has a more satisfying ending than Take Me Out. (Salt did that comic dirty man.)

>>248905 Each of Salt's last 3 comics have sucked ass. He needs to get his head out of his ass and know when to step back from doing comics.

>It was a bit experimental in terms of being more exaggerated than a lot of my stuff, and I had a lot of fun making it! Well that explains alot, but Salt should consider going back to the Couple Stuff-Zelda comic formula. If it ain't broken, dont fix it

At this point you morons have just decided every comic he makes is bad before its even made so you will never be happy regardless of what he makes

>>248956 These people really expect a hentai artist for a really specific fetish to draw a fucking "Berserk" level masterpiece of art

>>248946 Yea, Salt mentioned the magic word here. "Exaggeration" - it's just not a good fit for this fetish. The art in comics lives or dies by consistency of character sizing through the panels. Silly exaggerations throws off the size consistency which might as well be an instant 0/100 score on a weight gain comic scoring rubric. It's not trash or anything, but violating the most important rule was a sure fire way to upset people. Which, Beach Stuff shitting started from Salt violating multiple core rules of how comics function in general. Order of dialogue bubbles, where they're placed, foreground elements eclipsed by background elements, weird mini panels. And also just focusing in on slice of life instead of delivering weight gain, too. Not sure why he wants to experiment like this. He's done more format following content before, both in delivering readers exactly what they want for the fetish, and adhering to basic comic format.

Goddamn. Still as cancerous as Kip's thread

>>248905 I don’t understand all the hate. Like this comic and his others are just an outlet to draw fat chicks in different situations. You’re the moron if you go in expecting master class level writing and story telling like bro it’s a porn comic

>>248959 If I may randomly but into this thread just to bitch about something I notice, considering youre talking about the usual format that weight gain sequences are usually made. I been seeing a trend with some artists now who do sequences, doing a comic or a 3 page thing where the chick is getting fatter each page. Now these bastards are using the final page to allude that they get even bigger but not actually drawing it. Am I greedy for wanting to be shown everything instead of playing with the idea of what they would look like?

>>248963 the reason is the ai most artist use as a reference when tracing (photoshop ai among others but mostly photoshop) fails to draw certain sizes so they dont do it >>248961 if you wanna just draw fat chicks do a pinup that doesn't need to justify why it's happening, if you are going to make a comic you better have a good reason >>248956 nobody was complaining before the comic retard, its almost as if salt released a bad comic then people reacted to it being bad i think salts flaws with this comic are a combination of his heavy investment in the ai industry for story and art purpsoes, his normalization of transgender people (the character in the newest comic is), and his general disconnect from anything outside the sphere of israeli influence

>>248957 Berserk is entry level tier trash with a few big splash pages. As art it's technically mediocre and the quality takes a huge nose dive after Golden Age.

>>248905 disappointing end, but I hope we get a character sheet of her

>>248976 even 4chan psyops are less obvious bait than this

>>248978 Then you should be able to muster an actual argument instead of just >le 4chan Which worships Berserk btw.

>>248938 He defo needs help writing or at least someone who tells him whe to reel it back. >>248956 If that was true, I wouldn't have like any comic he made, dipshit. Just because I'm not consuming and shitting my pants happily means i dislike everything Salt makes. These past 2 comics were incredibly weak. >>248957 1. Salt isn't a hentai artist lmao. 2. No one here expects or has asked for that. >>248976 I don't agree with anything that you said up until Golden Age. Jesus does Berserk become near dogshit after Golden Age.

BWS is one of the best wg artist atm the only problem with his stuff is that when he does sequences or comics he draws the before and after and never the in between which everyone wants to see the most. people wanna see the characters gain weight in the same pages instead of every new page being "2 months later" and the character being bigger. In their Lucy comic for example the character got bigger every panel in the same page, but the most recent one it was just time skips.

>>248963 Hahaha yea, that should get an official name like the "Weight Gain Paradox". The gain will never end for a food addicted glutton, any page it ends on there would still be more to go.

>>248965 This actually makes so much sense, The artists I'm getting pissed at never go beyond a certain size or body shape.

>>248959 This is so fucking stupid. Just because she’s sucking it in doesn’t mean the character’s size is inconsistent. When she isn’t sucking in, the progression is perfectly fine.

>>248938 Yeah. This one seriously stunk. >inconsistent size/proportions >comical at times Funny stuff has its place. But I think I speak for the majority of people when I say most just spank their monkey to his art. >poor/unclear direction >no detailed progression >stupid hiding belly trope I think Salt struggles with fitting a good comic in less than ~20 pages and making everyone like it. Lucy's Growth, Couple Stuff, Losing Control, TotW were all good comics but had length to them. Recent quality of pages has also decreased compared to these comics. Also I notice Salt is generally fitting less stuff on a page. This comic has individual actions take up more room at it's fastest pace than the other comics. This means he has to "rush" more which means less detailed progression and less than happy patrons. Wonder if he'll ever start a good long comic with these qualities again? Salt should host a poll on his patreon.

>>248959 Also forgot to mention, regarding Beach Stuff, people bitched endlessly about 3 or 4 panels and are now acting like the whole comic was poorly drawn. It wasn’t that well-written, but stop making up bullshit.

>>249002 https://take.supersurvey.com/poll5433396x3DCf4Bb4-162

>>249002 >Stupid hiding belly trope Holy shit taste >Recent quality of pages has also decreased I don’t see how people justify this one. Writing aside, which I agree has low points, His art had only improved.

>>248965 >nobody was complaining before the comic retard You fucking liar, people were complaining about how there won't be much weight gain again, blobshit, lesbians, etc >>248984 >He defo needs help writing He already gets help, Undertaker and his assistants have more experience writing than him and he has asked them for advice or to check his stuff before >>249002 >I think Salt struggles with fitting a good comic in less than ~20 pages and making everyone like it. But almost everyone likes his comics, his Patreon is at the highest it's ever been since Couple Stuff ended 2 years ago and it hasn't dropped below 9k again since Beach Stuff. People from here thinking the opinion of this site has any relevant weight whatsoever is always hilarious

>>249004 ignore, site sucks and doesn't work. here's a google form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSduCLQDeTgO8QK4pWqtSJlOSFUOd_SR--GjYOUXHIqaR1U0aw/viewform?usp=sharing >>249005 Less detail, folds, etc. Maybe I think it's worse because he keeps ruining the scene with the stupid "hiding belly" trope.

>>248976 >>248984 Leave it to the BWS cave dwellers to have the most midwit entry level contrarian opinion that they stole from some Reddit tier retard. Saying Berserk sucked after the Golden Age when right after is Lost Children and Conviction screams that you didn’t read it, or you didn’t even get Golden Age. So no wonder even a nothing fat fetish comic is too much for you people.

>>249007 >He already gets help, Undertaker and his assistants have more experience writing than him and he has asked them for advice or to check his stuff before If thats the case, the complains had only increased since then?. Salt is basically surrounded by a entourage of incompetent fags he for some reason puts up to, example: Lucy-guy. >People from here thinking the opinion of this site has any relevant weight whatsoever is always hilarious If is not obvious by now, every fucking artist of the community is aware of this place, heck the revision of the first pages of Beach Stuff presumably happened because of the bitching here. Since his patreon is a echo chamber, ready to gobble his balls sack at command.

>>249007 if you would please consult the graph. It's too early to call it. Looks like a cycle of new content bringing new patrons followed by some leaving after the content ends. This looks like one of those cycles. We'll have to wait and see if patrons drop after the latest comic.

>>249015 he will soon become a lucy guy salt needs to go back to basics, no ai, no slop, no comic, no blobs. just his old drawing types but with his upxated artstyle. before he becomes a diaper/pig/inflation artist he needs to save himself

>>249009 Because everything you don't agree with is from reddit. You consult opinions like a toddler. >>249015 Is there a way to directly contact Salt? Doesn't he have a discord server?

>>249020 go to your local synagouge

>>249002 I don't think the art is bad I'm just kind of disappointed that the really appealing stuff about the scenario wasn't explored. Really wish the shorts button popping had more build up and didn't happen off camera.

I'm genuinely curious, are y'all fucking complaints serious or are you just memeing in some weird way? I know it's a chan board but come the fuck on, I thought a bunch of fetishists would be less childish than

>>249001 I wasn't meaning sucking in, although that also conflates the issue. There were multiple over the top exaggerated panels in the comic where the sense of size is comically abandoned to deliver a WOW sorta deal. It's fun but it really dominates the comic and throws off the readers sense of consistency. Just flipping through the pages right now, the bouncing between the 4 states of sucked in / let out / stuffed / exaggerated actually really makes following the weight gained through out hard.

>>249020 Please do not attempt to directly contact Salt. He's a busy guy, but he'll read around and see feedback. He'll be posting up a feedback poll soon up on his Patreon. The best way to leave him feedback would be either on that end feedback poll or just in the comments in general on his Patreon. Alternatively and free, these comic pages will go up on deviant eventually and you can leave a comment there. But really, his Patreon is $1 a month, you should be subscribed on it if its at all possible. >>249031 They're fans of the work, it's really not a big deal to constructively criticize. People walk out of big budget produced movies ready to talk about what they liked and what they didn't. It's the same thing for Salt's art, it's not meant as a negative thing when people are doing it in good faith.

>>249033 Hello someone who works with Salt. Don't care much h if he's a busy guy. You can clearly content to the guy if you have pull in the community, which I don't. I'll do what I want to.

>>249015 >If thats the case, the complains had only increased since then? I would assume he always had their advice in the first place. >Salt is basically surrounded by a entourage of incompetent fags he for some reason puts up to, example: Lucy-guy Trash or not, they have more experience at writing than him hence why he looks at them for advice. It simply makes sense, most people aren't complaining so why should he not consult his friends that he considers are better writers than him? >If is not obvious by now, every fucking artist of the community is aware of this place Who's saying they don't? The point is that our opinions here don't matter, this site is completely irrelevant. Salt has 3,4k paid members on Patreon, this thread has 76 unique IDs (emphasis on IDs instead of posters because I have several posts here with different IDs lol) >heck the revision of the first pages of Beach Stuff presumably happened because of the bitching here Emphasis on """presumably""", there was a single schizo rambling about it here and he took credit for that but officially they simply uploaded incomplete versions of those pages and didn't notice until later. You're free to think otherwise but it's really insane to me that you actually believe Salt would take feedback from here, highly opinionated chan users that pirate his work, seriously >>249016 That doesn't change anything from what I said, it's still the highest its ever been in about 2 years, would you consider that negative reception? >>249020 He makes feedback posts on Patreon specifically for that once or twice a year if you care

>>249035 >they have more experience at writing than him You should probably feel some kind of shame or embarrassment typing this sentence. Areku and Lucytard are both worse than Salt is at writing despite having more time "writing" - you can do something for a long time and never get better at it and both of them are poster children for that. The former doesn't understand fundamentals like structure, characterization, word choice, brevity over verbosity, etc., and the latter is mentally stuck at 15 years old which is an entire problem in itself.

>>249131 Hello Areku. Please pay the fine of a sketch of either Niku or Serena. :)

>>249131 Take writing classes instead of trying to own retards over bbwchan?

>>249151 sadly kips thread actually took a dub recently with the latest page this one has been kinda meh comic wise for a while salt’s individual pieces are great but his comics can be hit or miss

>>249134 Sure

>>249129 >What I said "They have more experience writing and they're his friends so I'd imagine he looks to them for advice" How is this hard to understand for you? Do you have any friends?

>>249131 Anon's, let's give them a chance. What have you contributed to the comic's?

>>249131 give me the link to the BWS LORA along with the Nat, Sammy and Chloe loras and all your crimes are forgiven.

>>249160 Cute Serena

>>249184 Whoa mama, literally

>>249165 The gremlins on here cant fathom the concept that the artist they have a parasocial relationship with actually has friends and their own likes/dislikes that influence the stuff they create.

the end is a trash but damn

Personal ratings of Salt's comics. 10 is best, 1 is worst. >Lucy's Stuffing 4/10 >Losing Control 3/10 >Couple Stuff 5/10 >Tipping the Scales 5/10 >Beach Bod 9/10 >The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Wardrobe 8/10 >Take me out 2/10 >Beach Stuff 2/10 >Compress to Impress 2/10

>>249402 I agree. He peaked at and hasn't topped Zelda.

>>249402 How could you not like the Lucy or couple stuff comics? Lucy is literally on the floor reaching for more cake and in the other comic the 2 girls are feeding eachother

>>249409 Not a fan of girls with food all over their face or body. It’s a turn off.

>>249424 I like the streamer's design, she's cute

>>249424 This is a really weird way to end the comic. The previous page would've been a much better note to end on, I guess this is meant to build up another FTTE starring the streamer girl?

>>249426 I think we found are next ball of dough, so to speak. 👀

>>249427 >The previous page would've been a much better note to end on I mean, the last page literally said "The End", this one is called "Epilogue" and has a sequel hook

>>249424 Hmmmm….squeal? “Decompress to Impress?”

>>249424 This feels kind of rushed. Something tells me there's a reason to tack on a last page... Hopefully this next one is better.

>>249427 >>249428 >>249431 If that is what he's planning on doing, then he hasn't learned his lesson. >>249433 Most of his work for the last year has felt rushed. He's trying to do too much and it's showing.

>>249433 What do you mean "rushed?"

>>249424 Oh boi, Salt is going to keep bashing his head against the wall with this shitty comics...

>>249424 Also i can get over how stupid it looks the fact she can suck in: hips, ass and back fat, even her arms... may has well start calling Salt a comicalweapon copycat

>>249434 >he hasn’t learned his lesson I don’t think 15 people on a random chan thread saying a comic is bad really qualifies as teaching him a lesson

>>249440 Hey retard, the last one is literally in her head

>>249440 Media literacy is fucking dead. You guys are actually retarded.

>>249442 So he wasted 50% of the last page drawing her skinnier? Now im glad i didn't follow through this garbage If the art and the first few pages werent enough to deter me, now im convinced salt peak and were just in a down hill.

>>249433 The quality is literally the same as the rest of the comic, most likely he just got a new idea as he was making it. The comic was also going to be 9 pages at first >>249434 what lesson are we talking about here specifically? >>249437 He does like 1-3 comics every year, so yes he'll keep making them. As always >>249440 It literally says "REALITY" on the picture at the end, how blind/dumb are you bro

>>249444 In case you've forgotten, you literally see her at her biggest in that pose on the previous pages...

>>249446 Wank comic aint wanking

>>249440 whats funny is this anon isn't trolling, he's just an actual retard

>>249402 >Nintentoddler ratings

>>249435 like Salt drew the last page, then thought to himself, “ oh why don’t I tack on another to set it up for a sequel…”

>>249422 and just because of that it drops by 8 points?

has has to also finish remaking the Lucy comic

I really liked the before & after Salt had in the comic, so I made some up for Selene, mainly to compare the 2.

Uggghhhhhhh

>>249422 that’s the best part lol. unrestrained gluttony

I just think everyone wants a comic like Lucie's stuffing or couple stuff where its just a horny girl eat a ton of food or two girls feeding each other. You wouldn't need to make a complicated story or anything just "I wanna eat more food and get fatter" or "I wanna make you more fatter". The guy and that valentines girl could be used for example. We have seen the before and after but not the in between.

expected did not happen

No "everyone" (You) do not want that, Yes, there are a great deal of people that want simple mindless WG comics/sequences it's not "everyone". I think characters like Val could be better fleshed out than just another malibu barbie "she's a fat girl likes to eat it makes her horny", In her Bio it is stated she's a genius but we literally never seen her drawn or written that way, It could be fun to see her have some master plan of using her weight as some kind of way of getting her ultimate goal rather than being another run of the mill wg oc.

salt should draw a realistic fat comic next, accurate to the real life of a 500lb person - so they should struggle to walk, breathe, need help wiping their ass, be unhygenic, be too lazy to do anything, be squalorous, i think it would be realistic and a bit epic

>>249473 Sorry for asking, does anyone have all the chibbies that Salt has made?

>>249542 Fuck off!

>>249543 dont be mean :(

>>249491 ive tried reading tons of comics that focus on characters and their backstories and it just sucks. Pages are filled with text that just make no sense or the artist themselves didnt know what to write and now those comics have over 500 pages with no one having any idea in what direction the comic is even going. Im not against having well written characters at all I just dont need 10 pages of a character talking for it then to move on to another character doing the same thing. Even in a short format it doesnt work with the most recent examples being the BWS 2 beach comics where we saw nothing but just a characters from a different angle. These are suppose to be porn comics and not cute romance stories.

>>249554 here ya go pal. Just for you

>>249557 well….i like them, i think their cute and pretty nice

>>249557 The thing I don't understand, when it comes to a particular criticism of Salt's comics that kind of seems to be showing here, is why does it matter if every page isn't top-tier fanservice? I get that for someone like Kip, where 95% of their content is their comics. But Salt still releases at least one non-comic piece a week, sometimes two. Which is still more than most artists. So why is this something that gets on people's nerves so much? I understand some of the other criticisms, but not this one.

>>249443 >Media literacy

>>249564 >But Salt still releases at least one non-comic piece a week, sometimes two. Problem is, it's either some shitty OC commission or an explicit edit of an older artwork he's done. Both are boring as fuck, so that leaves the comics to deliver, which the last 3 have been failing to do.

>>249559 If you like em great. To me their just filler or slice of life chapters

>>249564 Salt does draw other stuff besides the comic, but I personally dont care about them. I just look at comics or sequences because you see a progresion. Why should I care of a random fat drawing of a random character idc about?

>>249570 The OC and old redrawings are commissions right?

I would much rather see a couple stuff sequel or smth else of two fat horny girls crawling on top of each other and stuffing each other with food than a slice of life comic of a fat girl going to a park and falling over or some other dumb shit

>>249570 Fair enough, but that doesn't answer why it's such a sin for a comic page or two to not have fanservice. If you want him to make comics, let him make comics. If every page is just fanservice, it might as well just be a sequence. >>249576 It sounds like you're just extraordinarily difficult to please honestly.

>>249579 A page or two is fine, but not 10-15 which im not saying he does, but alot of other artists do. Im not hard to please. All I want as a simple wg comic of a character or two and not a whole backstory for every single npc that appears in a comic

>>249582 Fair enough. That's pretty reasonable.

Heres an idea I had for a couple stuff sequel: Its been a couple of months after the end of couple stuff 1 and Shannon is now the that Courtney was at the end of couple stuff 1. shes walking home wheezing and huffing while carrying tons of food for courtney while thinking back to how much weight she and courtney have gained over the past few months. She comes home and goes to the living room where courtney is now immobile and using a feeding tube. Courtney says how shes been starving and says how she loves the feeding tube they bought recently but still misses shannon feeding her and then shannon starts feeding her all the food shes bought until courtney is full but then shannon is hungry but doesnt have any food cuz she gave it all to courtney and courtney says to shannon if she wants to try the feeding tube to which she says yes. the machine turns on and shannon starts eating and the courtney starts getting horny and speeds up the machine. Shannon tries telling courtney to stop but she just keeps speeding it up until it overloads and Shannon is laying there filled to the brim of the stuff that was in the feeding tube. Shannon says how shes too full to get up and will rest for a bit on Courtney and Courtney does the same. The End

>>249583 Thanks for understanding.

>>249579 >It sounds like you're just extraordinarily difficult to please honestly. You should see this spamming fucker's posts in the games thread on /alt/ or the schizo thread, it's impressive how annoying, uneducated, and entitled he is at all times. I can only hope he's underage, as that would explain his behavior at least.

There's a feedback post up on Patreon if you care >inb4 "but you have to pay" Well yeah the full comic isn't still public yet

Okay everyone, the Compress to Impress Feedback patreon post is up. Go vote and/or comment on it to let Salt know how you feel, good or bad. He does want feedback, and it's okay to be critical. I included some screenshots here of comments I liked but there's a ton in there already, go hop on and check them out. It's only been 2 hours of voting so far but I feel like as far as length goes, people were hoping for more length to it with almost 100% votes being "good length" and "could have been longer". And looks like people don't want a mindless WG sequence of a comic and hoped for more story in there.

>>249597 How bold of you to assume anyone in this thread is a patron

>>249597 that 2nd response is perfect

>>249468 not 8 points, but I can't jerk it to a women covered in food

>>249597 Overall fair comments but >"I really didn't like that the main character was so fat-phobic" comment I find people like this in the community quite irritating. I absolutely loathe weight gain without consequences (physical, emotional, social, etc) and the push towards these sanitized and saccharine depictions suck so much. Especially since the comic is as safe as it gets

>>249611 This. Weight gain without consequence is pointless since it doesn’t have any impact on the person. Many stories and comics treat it like a purely cosmetic change which is boring as hell since there is no story to tell. When there are changes, its just characters getting horny about it or others finding them hot which paints it as a purely good outcome that is also boring since it’s a tale as old as time. Comics and stories need something to drive the plot otherwise they arent worth telling.

>>249424 Now all the pieces fall together for me. She never actually looked as skinny as she was drawn. Maybe there was a better way to communicate that, then show a side-by-side of her vs. her perception (thinking specifically of her at the gym). Still good for me when the girdle popped.

damn i guess the ending really broke the salt community in half huh?

>>249597 Salt supporters are a lost cause, trying to prioritize story over the good shit. He's never going to get back to his peak if he only posts these feedback posts on his Patreon.

>>249597 is it not common sense to ask for feedback via a completely anonymous way versus one which the results are made public, especially comments, all of which affects your collected data? what a retard. So many things are obfuscating the data he's collecting and biasing it. It's unusable.

>>249633 So his patrons wanted more story and you think they're wrong. There is a silent, non-paying majority that the moment he posts the pages public, he's just going to go straight to the moon then since he appealed to those who doesn't pay him money? Really don't think so.

>>249592 sorry if im trying to get people there moneys worth

>>249608 thats fine. everyone has their preferences

>>249618 the problem is just that artist dont know how to balance story and fan service. A good example would be Spellsx who does. He shows a sstory between characters while also making it hot

>>249623 I think it started with the comic of the 2 girls on the beach and the newest just made things worse

How do I contact BWS to get a commission. I want to put the Panty and Stocking brainworms into his mind like I did with Axel.

>>249598 Are you stupid?

Doesn't help that Salt has chub fags like this on his Patreon who discourages bigger sizes instead of showing support for what they want.

>>249623 The poll above you literally proves otherwise lmao >>249633 "why does he pay more attention to his actual customers than randos pirates on bbw-chan?" >>249634 Why do you need it to be anonymous exactly? Why can't you express your opinion properly on the comments publicly? Unless your comment is "it was hot piece of shit" it's not necessary >>249656 He opens comms every few months on Patreon >>249665 You know this for a poll right? Comments don't matter. 1 is the one who won

>>249633 Imagine taking feedback from your paying customers

>>249667 >He opens comms every few months on Patreon Once a year, not every few months. >why does he pay more attention to his actual customers than randos pirates on bbw-chan? Obviously not here, dumbass. He used to make feedback posts on other socials as well.

>>249440 >comicalweapon Salt can lose both of his hands in an accident and still draw better than that affront to God, you're just a faggot who cannot count page numbers.

>>249679 >Why isn't he asking for feedback on his public platforms where the first page dropped the same day the epilogue did on Patreon? Are you fucking stupid?

>>249667 >Why do you need it to be anonymous exactly? Why can't you express your opinion properly on the comments publicly? Unless your comment is "it was hot piece of shit" it's not necessary "If your opinion is X it is not necessary." Are you stupid?

>>249691 All they mean is "It was a hot piece of shit" isn't constructive, which is the point of Salt asking for feedback. If you are actually looking to help Salt be better and don't just want to be shitty, you should have no reason to need your comments to be anonymous

>>249694 >"It was a hot piece of shit" Not every customer will be able to provide constructive feedback. By alienating those customer reviews you are biasing your data. >"Please be honest" He wants us to be honest but wants constructive feedback. Not going to lie he's asking a lot out of the average patron to not only be honest, have their opinions exposed to people other than the creator, and be able to form that in a constructive manner. You should be able to just ask "Did you like it? Here are some options to express how you felt." Then change your product from there combining feedback with commentary. That's part of the business.

I think Salt's stuff should be completely banned from the site if all it does is attract unhinged pyschopaths.

>>249742 >Not every customer will be able to provide constructive feedback. By alienating those customer reviews you are biasing your data. There's a poll. Pick the choices on the poll then. >He wants us to be honest but wants constructive feedback Obviously? As any reasonable human would expect >Not going to lie he's asking a lot out of the average patron to not only be honest, have their opinions exposed to people other than the creator, and be able to form that in a constructive manner. I have no idea why this is such a problem for you, most people don't care. It literally doesn't matter. Your comment will be ignored by everyone unless you behave like an absolute idiot (as in "It was a hot piece of shit")

Geez, guys, was that beach stuff comic so bad to you all that you resort to just being psychotic and spend time on nothing but mountains upon mountains of complaints that don't even go anywhere near BWS? Can't we just have opinions to ourselves and deal with typing it all in another thread? All that we're concerned about, is getting access to someone's gallery because we like archiving their art. Like, geez, chill out every now and then, it's not like any of these pieces of art is anything serious.

>>249747 BWS-chan when?

>>249747 Don’t act like you don’t keep coming back to this thread to read the schizo sperg-outs

>>249720 barrage of verbal art

>>249747 Based as fuck. That thread is as batshit insane as Kip's thread

>>249747 yeah I think it’s gonna be moved to gen soon enough if people don’t stfu

>>249747 This thread should be merged into the Schizo thread just like the Civil Discussion thread got merged into that shitting hole. Kip thread also. Any thread anyone dares to speak within, straight into the Schizo thread! Discussing anything of substance here is forbidden.

>>249749 You have obviously never designed any sort of data collection in your life. All of these variables affect data. Patreon polls allow you to see others' responses which affects your own or may incentivize you to go back and change your previous answers. >Obviously? As any reasonable human would expect There's nothing wrong with wanting that. Getting it is another issue. People are stupid. You prove this. >I have no idea why this is such a problem for you, most people don't care. Salt has 3,437 paid members. Screenshot shows 1,474 votes. At best 43% of patrons responded. Realistically only ~15% of patrons responded. 50 comments on the post with all those responses show that people do clearly care about it. In the subconscious people are definitely choosing in their mind "hmm, maybe I don't want to make my opinion public for all to see on a porn site" and choosing not to leave a response. Making an anonymous form avoids all of that.

>>249402 >>Losing Control >3/10 Shit taste. Arguably his best besides Zelda.

>>249747 No one cares?

>>249776 Ending your sentence with a question mark makes you look like an uncertain faggot who can't even commit to his own opinion.

>>249817 mad?

>>249747 People just need to start posting more fucking art Shouldn’t have to scroll past 20-30 comments without being able to jerk off

>>249767 >You have obviously never designed any sort of data collection in your life Whether I did it or not I hardly doubt anyone would actually do that to gather feedback for a fat fetish comic. Pick the choices on the poll and write a little review if you want, it's not that deep or serious. >Salt has 3,437 paid members. Screenshot shows 1,474 votes. At best 43% of patrons responded. Realistically only ~15% of patrons responded. 50 comments on the post with all those responses show that people do clearly care about it. I assume you have never used Patreon then. Most users are the casual type, they don't care about liking posts let alone leaving comments even when the artist is specifically asking for them, they don't care about voting on polls even when all users are allowed to vote, all they do is check the art every few days and that's about it. By the way, the post has barely been up for about 24 hours... >In the subconscious people are definitely choosing in their mind "hmm, maybe I don't want to make my opinion public for all to see on a porn site" and choosing not to leave a response. Making an anonymous form avoids all of that. No? Again, why the hell are you so fixated on this? Why do you think your own particular perspective applies to everyone? You're acting as if Patreon is a social media where you have to put your real name and picture for all to see or some shit and that every single user will read it

>>249823 I should buy Salt's patreon if I actually want to be heard, then. >>249826 It's funny when people tweak over small shit. All I said was no one cares, if you were confident in your opinion, it wouldn't matter what I said anyway.

>>249947 Another boring piece.

>>249948 Honestly yeah kinda lame

>>249948 >>249955 Can't blame Salt, it was a sketch that was voted on to be upgraded.

>>249957 Yeah we can. Upgrading it is his one chance at bringing as much life as possible to the sketch. If it still looks boring after it's been upgraded, then that's a failing on his part.

>>249947 honestly this is the one i really wanted and didnt think would happen, a def banger in my book. Salt's still got it

>>249665 Does anyone know which one won?

>>249991 Sumi

>>249959 I agree with you overall, but you'd be surprised at how much of a piece is set in stone early on in the process. Having a weak sketch will result in a weak final piece.

>>249959 I give you a story that's 90% written already. It's boring. It's your opportunity to make it not boring. You deliver the story now completed. It's boring. The failing would be on your part, right? The finished piece is just lining over the drafts rough lines and then coloring it in. I don't know what you expect that doesn't fall into re-draw territory. Different colors? It's not an OC, it's an established character in their default outfit. Screw 90%, it was 95% completed at draft stage. All of the characters design and colors were already established. So all Salt has to be creative on is the background, it's nice enough. Even makes a bit of a environment told story. So then it's down to execution on highlights or 'rendering' after the literal step of bucketing in the characters already decided colors. Which again, looks good to me. Literally done by greatest in the business. Really curious where you think the magic of making a sketch you think is boring suddenly come to life with color comes from.

>>249998 kill yourself :)

>>250213 peak

>>250213 I would think that Chloe must think she Will be thinnier in the mirror, but she look herself pretty thicc and chubby, did that mean Chloe is aware of her weight gain a bit?

>>250237 i mean she's like 500 lbs, she'd have to be beyond stupid to think she's skinny

Salt has drawn both MP40 from N*zi Germany, and Mosin-Nagant from the *SSR. When are we going to address Salt's support for authoritarian regimes?????

>>250264 Finally, the bipartisanship I’ve been looking for

>>250264 I really like the soft shape of that second one

>>250581 seems like a pretty normal mirror to me.

>>250581 well I've officially forgiven salt for the last comic because WOW

>>250585 One good artwork doesn't excuse the shittiness of his last few comics. Fucking sellout.

>>250581 She's fucking gigantic, amazing stuff

>>250581 Common Salt W Poor Sammy, we think you look great. Though outside the mirror, she is looking bigger than normal. This pleases me

I hope the next one is a Nicole drawing.

>>250595 Maddy is the one confirmed to have a piece this month

>>250581 normally i'd say we're back n track after that comic ending because i still yearn for the day i get a sammy in my life but then again, fuck em for these lackluster ass comics these past few months

>>250264 Self-censorship, taking the soycuck lifestyle to new nadirs.

YES! Now make her that fat canonically.

>>250581 Is he going to do this for everyone or..?

Avgh so blobby Volkish vnd rotvnd blob

I love how everybody forgave salt the second we got blob shit sammy

>>250654 Fuck off, blob hater

>>250654 Because Sammy fans are the most shallow of Salt dick riders.

>>250654 yes

>>250654 Sometimes he makes shit I can jerk off to, sometimes he doesn’t. You losers take this stuff way too seriously.

I wish he did this with his other characters.

Whatever happened to this girl?

>>250654 there's nothing to forgive nigga, it's just porn >>250738 she's someone's else OC

Just for fun. What are you guys predictions on what you think the next Feast For the Eyes project? (And nothing stupid too.)

>>250802 Maybe it'll be a Nat & Halie thing. Something light in story, but ending with Nat a bit bigger.

>>250802 The epilogue of the last one feels pretty much like a sequel-bait with Brie and the streamer girl. Personally I'd rather have a comic of already established characters than new ones, would be nice to have actual development for the main cast in years

>>250802 Sammy finally blobs out.

>>250802 Ideally, Compress to Impress 2 featuring the streamer girl from the final page using actual compressionwear to hide her gain while trying to keep up her stream act. If salt did that, it would redeem some of the stupidity of the first C to I, but I know he probably won't go that way. I'm sure it'll be something stupid.

''Update and Temporary Changes (Burnout Sucks) Hi everyone! I've got a few updates regarding myself and the release schedule of content that I wanted to make you all aware of. Due to a combination of IRL and work related matters (my drawing tablet breaking down being a big one), I've been hit fairly hard with burnout this month. I've been trying to push through, but have reached the point where I feel my work is suffering for it. I’ve discussed this with my assistants, and we've decided that it would be for the best to take this week off. This will not affect any posts or polls that are going out for the rest of the month, however for those of you on the $10 tier, I will be rescheduling this month's second Private Sketch Stream to Sunday the 30th at 4pm EST and posting the sketches on Monday the 31st. We have also decided that we will continue posting pieces 5 times every 2 weeks until I feel life has settled down again and work is going smoothly. I want to get back to posting 3 times every week, however I feel I shouldn't commit to it until I know I can keep up with it again. The final thing that will be temporarily changed is that Continuation and Prequel Polls will be for single character pieces only. Much like with the number of posts going out, this change will only last until I feel ready to allow multiple character pieces back into these polls. I'm okay with allowing multi character pieces in the Explicit Edits Poll for now, but if for some reason that changes I'll be sure to let everyone on the $5 and $10 tiers know. I hope you all understand why we've made these decisions. Thank you all for your support, and I hope to come back to working on drawing fat girls next week feeling refreshed and motivated!" - BWS' latest newsletter