Started working on a Metorid fic where Samus needs to go into hiding on an unknown planet to evade the Space Pirates. While there she ends up gorging herself on worms that seem to have the suicidal tendency of crawling into her stomach (light vore, I suppose). I'm also toying with the idea of gasses on the planet that make Samus hungry and having more parts of the ecosystem be edible.
I've already done two scenes, and while maybe its a bit early to seek feedback, I figured I'd post it here. I'm not very knowledgeable when it comes to Metroid. I've played all the 2D games to varying capacity but most of my knowledge about the lore and backstory comes fan discussions. Any corrects in that regard would be very appreciated.
[Scene 1]
A violent explosions echoed from the other side of the Federation ship. Samus stammered for a moment, crashing backwards onto the floor with a loud thud. Her body felt unnatural... uneven. She got up from the floor and quickly made a mental note of the fact that her rear felt slightly heavier than normal. She moved on from this thought quickly. Though her body had lost a bit of its composure, her mind had not. She new what was going on and she knew what she had to do. The Bounty Hunter started running for the docking bay as an answer to question she hadn't even asked yet flowed through her mind. "Damn Space Pirates..." she muttered as she crossed yards in seconds. She would be proven right almost immediately as one of the mantis-like aliens dropped on her from above. This time Samus managed to stay upright, wrestling the unruly bug from her back, ripping off its frail limbs and spilling its green blood as she did so. She threw the creature's dying body at the wall as she picked up the pace again. This time, though, as she closed in on the docking bay, Pirates crawling on the walls all around her, a different thought intrusively butted into her calculating brain. She realized again that her body felt slightly heavier than normal. At first she chalked it up to the space station's artificial gravity, but no. This time she innately sensed that her body mass was greater than normal. This was in addition to an increase in the difficulty of running and breathing. These were all subtle alterations, but once she noticed them, she couldn't helped but obsessing over them. "Have I gotten... fat?" She though as the personality of a confident bounty hunter cracked into that of a teenage girl.
The invasive thoughts dissipated as another explosion sounded while Samus approached the dock. A dock which was blocked off by Space Pirates. She punched some of the star slime out of her way before quickly boarding her ship and launching away as the sound of explosions got closer and closer to her. Smoke and bright lights filled the docking bay as Samus's ship exited the crumbling starship. "Whew." she sighed relived as she sulked back into her chair. "That was a close one" Samus straightened herself up and she attempted to get a visual on the habitation ship. "It seems they're focused on the ship..." she muttered while pulling up a map of nearby star systems desperately looking for a place to hide. "ADAM, I need a planet to hunker down on as I wait for this situation to blow over. I've searched all the local star systems and none of the planets on them seem like a good match". Samus took a moment to breath as she looked out into space. ADAM was taking a while to respond. Clearly it had a lot of data to process. Samus' cosmic concentration was broken as he attention was drawn to a half-eaten granola bar sitting on the control panel. "So that explains it..." she said, thinking back to her awkward feelings on the space station. "I gotta lay off these things...". Samus prepared her arm to throw the bar behind her... "Oh, to hell with it" she said, quickly shifting her arm's position towards her mouth, proceeding to gobble up the rest of the snack. Suddenly, ADAM came online. "Gravitational anomalies in this sector seem to suggest an as-of-yet unidentified moon surrounding a nearby gas giant. It could be a good place to hide" "Bingo!" Samus shouted, clenching her first. "ADAM, set course to that moon" she said...
[Scene 2]
[Samus has fallen down. She is sitting on her ass in a shallow pool with her legs spread out]
...Samus' expression soured. She was about to make her way back up, but then she saw a peculiar creature surfacing. It was a strange, worm-like creature. It almost looked like a long tube with a body that was a dark, murky shade of green and with ends that looked like bottle-caps, which were only slightly more vibrant. The leach-like creature also happend to have a shell like structure covering half of its body, with the other half being entirely smooth. Samus just sat back and watched the bizarre sight as it slowly emerged from the water and then crawled up her leg. It almost looked like a snake in motion, but a snake wouldn't pulsate or ungulate. Soon enough the creature crawled its way on Samus' chest. Samus didn't start paying attention again until the creature stared working its way down her throat. At first she was disgusted but then she realized that the worm tasted exquisite. It was to die fore. It tasted like the most wonderful assortment of pastries all being eaten at once. Once she realized this, she started aiding the creature, slurping it up as if it were a strand of spaghetti. Once Samus worked the thing down her throat, she grined. "That was, *BWAOOOPH*, delicious... I need more!" and thankfully for her she didn't have to wait long, as two more emerged from the water with an even more directed trajectory. One climbed up her leg like then first, however the other crawled up Samus' vaginal region, tickling it slightly from the outside of her Zero-Suit. Both creatures, however had the same destination. This time, Samaus didn't try to fight, she simply let the worms do their thing, and she loved it. They tasted so good. "I think..." she huffed, her bloat stomach pressing on her digaphram, "...I'll call them Suicide Worms".
[A few scenes later, Samus tries to get back to the ship while being assaulted by hundreds of these things.]