/elite/ - Erotic Literature

I’ve recently come to realize that I’m a huge fan of “hyper-consumerism” scenarios, where society at large becomes large, where systemic corporate obesity at the hands of omnipresent fast food markets and technological convenience making people too indulgent and lazy to want to do anything but sit around and grow fatter and fatter with each passing moment… Idk, seems cool.

I've been liking the idea of advertising becoming increasingly sexualized but only featuring women that are at least skinnyfat

>>11171 The Machine Stops by EM Forster is one of the earliest classic sci fi stories and could easily be adapted for this.

>>11174 It makes sense that in a fattened society, or at least a society on the brink of embracing fatness, the old beauty models would still slightly hold

>>11171 Somebody wrote a really great story in that vein years ago: https://www.deviantart.com/football123/art/Consumer-491327755 The promised a sequel, but never delivered.

I believe this is the story you're looking for? https://curvage.org/forum/index.php?/forums/topic/26447-the-munchies/#comment-338307

Still holding out hope for all 3 parts of "More 2 Love, More 2 Gain" by Big Chris.

>>11032 That's it! Thank you!

Does anyone have the trainer by uncle jack ?

Does anyone have "The Arrangement" by Da Games Elite?

wow, you and I have very similar tastes. among other like-minded takes, That "the doctor" story is awesome. one of my favorite shorter-length stories. There are a bunch of really good stories unfortunately created by (I'm guessing) homosexual men, however since the content focus is fattening and not really gender-specific genitalia-based actions, I take some of these stories and with search and replace, switch the pronouns and some nouns which makes the stories quite palatable to me. I made a zip archive with a few documents that are collections from tumblr, some gathered deviantart etc I quite like stories where the gainer is treated like a pig- basically works out to the non-con theme, or if consensual adds an intensity that I find very stimulating. first and foremost, checkout the author Lardfill- who wrote a bunch of really good stories that-after I gendermodded them- would be right up your alley. oh man, it's funny, I was thinking "in terms of shared favorite story types, all this guy is missing is the mini-blob/captured fairy style, then I peered at your image.. I like the sound of that story you're working on. I started writing and have a few hundred thousand words across a bunch of stories that I've yet to release. I'd be interested in collaborating with you on your story (or whatever). if you'd like to, post some means that I can hit you up, here's the gofile with the zip archive. I wrote most of this posting 24 hours ago and was going to add more files to the zip, but I'm trying to just post the file. if you're (or whomever, I guess) interested, there can be more in the future https://gofile.io/d/JpYmap

>>11071 Could you link the two stories. The doctor and the step mom one, I tried looking for “the doctor” but couldn’t find anything. Thanks

>>11191 This is the doctor one. https://www.deviantart.com/theobscurefa/art/Doctor-s-Orders-276962365

>>11071 This one ticked my right boxes. Involves death feederism and sisterly and her friends gaining (pretty dark later on) https://fantasyfeeder.com/weight-gain-stories/view/title/the+fattest+sister/author/Fatterandfatterandfatter

Bumping for more. I love this kind of content. Maybe tangentially related but anything with women being force fed/grown to be milked like cows.

>>6269 >mfw reading blue ribbon

anyone have this https://www.clips4sale.com/studio/31090/29902057/evil-witch-fattens-you-to-eat-witch-sydney-screams-wants-to-fatten-you-so-she-can-vore-you-1080-mp4

>>10139 this thread needs a big-time bump

Here a sadistic ritual to fatten up a guy for a amazon tribe https://www.deviantart.com/kronoentra/art/The-Captive-God-BHM-XWG-1194610435

https://www.deviantart.com/shavip/art/Mass-Harvesting-15k-SciFi-XWG-996068320

>>10031 unfortunately don't remember the username of the person who posted it, so searching on wayback's been a crapshoot (can't give a complete url)

Can you make a story based off this text doc?

>>10027 update, but I did end up finding it on the wayback https://web.archive.org/web/20160117042131/http://stuff-z.deviantart.com/art/Home-Alone-and-Stuffed-446256769 As I guessed, the character's 15 which is more than a little questionable to me now, but like I said, I was 14 at the time, so I didn't really gaf. Always cool to find something you have fond memories of years later.

>>25 I’ve pitched this to at least two different writers but it never got picked up so I’ll try here I guess… This one’s more like a food allergy expansion where it involves force feeding and hopefully sex. There’s a loving married couple who celebrate another valentines but this time a weird reaction towards the one piece of chocolate inflates the wife’s belly slightly. This leads them to go to their immediate doctor to get a check up. The doctor explains how she’s recently developed a chocolate allergy that inflates the body’s fat percentage. Causing swelling. He urges her to stay away from any products involving the ingredient. Her husband less worried about it, had an epiphany. Something woke inside him feeling aroused by the idea. The doctor gives them 5 emergency doses to counteract the swelling for the year in case. He explains since this is a new special case, they won’t be allowed to make more until at least a year from now. Once reaching home, the wife unwinds and tells her husband to get rid of anything having chocolate and to keep it away from her since she’s known to be unable to resist her favorite dessert/flavor. The husband then approaches his wife while hiding a large 8 sliced chocolate cake behind him. The wife instinctively smells the cake from afar and nervously asks what’s he hiding. He proposes the idea of exploring a new kink. Showing her the cake, she hesitantly declines until he opens it and adds chocolate flavoring whipped cream. Story goes through different sexually driven scenarios where he fattens her up instantly during public or at home or even during their friends’ around. Eventually it goes too far one day, his wife becoming too swollen and fat, pleading him to slow down. Until they realize they’re on their last dose. People can decide wether she blows up after inhaling more chocolate and crushed the last vial or getting her back to normal but with a bittersweet ending.

Random pic that I want to see a story based off of

>>7478 Oh yeah, and thanks for reading by the way! I'm glad you liked the story.

https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Sheena-484930901 I used second person POV in Sheena, yjen I continued it with its sequel Rebecca (TW, https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Part-2-734986312 -1-734984781/scat)https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Part-3-734988201https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Rebecca-Final-734988729 There's also an on going spin off called Samantha is also Second Person, to carry on the theme.

>>7458 I'm back with two sequels to this story. It was originally going to be one, but the third part gets pretty dark and I figured I was better off keeping it separate. Let me know what you think! https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-Chapter-2-XWG-Immobile-973357945 https://www.deviantart.com/springbokkx/art/Your-New-Roommate-Chapter-3-XWG-Health-Issues-973358674

This is decent, rest of their stuff might not be exactly what you are looking for but same general idea https://www.deviantart.com/weisco/art/Feedee-wg-encouragement-The-perfect-feedee-963845526

these ones were rather nice https://www.deviantart.com/songbird567/art/Guilty-Pleasure-Glynda-Goodwitch-879863999 https://www.deviantart.com/songbird567/art/Guilty-Pleasure-Glynda-Goodwitch-Pt-2-1041235857

>>10628 honestly, I love mxm too, but if there are cute things and femboy. https://www.wattpad.com/story/322668806-the-angel-and-the-devil https://www.wattpad.com/story/322877757-random-weight-gain-one-shots

>>10628 Go to the eva thread on this site. There's a guy there doing primarily Kaworu x blob Shinji

>>10689 actually if it was with femboys it would be even better tbh

>>10628 https://archiveofourown.org/works/47643061/chapters/120083287 this is good but it sadly isn't being updated anymore

>>10920 oh my god tysm this is SO GOOD

>>10762 Turns out code sharing sites don't have content filters lol Here's the different versions of chapter 9. Heavy on the intox kink. I prefer the final few, but still have some improvements to make. Claude has been spending too much time describing events at the beach, despite my repeated requests for more club content. Ch9a https://pastecode.io/s/3s41t5q5 Ch9b https://pastecode.io/s/undp38kc Ch9c https://pastecode.io/s/xmcayhhf Ch9d https://pastecode.io/s/hce8xunf Ch9e https://pastecode.io/s/a4aay0uz Ch9f https://pastecode.io/s/2sy3nt8j

>>10762 Big ups from op, like I said, anything helps bro much appreciaton!

>>10765 Thanks, let me know what you think. Was gooning while writing some of this so the story might get a bit far-fetched in places. Haven't read over the whole thing yet.

https://www.deviantart.com/alexanderthecrepe/art/THE-FEEDER-DIARIES-ENTRY-2-STUFFING-WEED-SLOB-1178681718

>>10806 This rocks

[Okay...But only because I’m a good sport] Hisao winced at the outcome of the match that had taken place. It was an absolute brilliant strategy that she hardly saw coming, who knew that Canada had such tactical value? [Looks like I’m the master at taking risks now, Hisao! Now just like we agreed to!] Hisao paused for a second as she was somewhat taken at exactly what he had to do next. He swallowed his pride and stood up to take his lumps like a man, a guy is only as good as his word after all. [Shizune, I have no idea how we let it get this bad...] Hisao furled his brow at what he had to do. [But we did agree to it] Before him was a no-shit birthday cake, fit for 24 guests. All for her because she had the audacity to ignore North America during his conquest of the world in her game of risk. He began properly with a knife and fork starting from a corner. Shizune was so gracious as to provide a gallon of milk to accompany him but it had soon gotten to the point where it was obvious that Hisao couldn’t carry on. With nearly half a gallon finished and ¾ of the cake gone his prim composure had gone sloppy as he had slumped back in his chair. Frosting had gotten onto his sleeves as well as his belly which was now almost screaming from inside his uniform to be let loose. [I don’t think this is gonna work, anymore, Shizune] Hisao exhaled and relaxed as he slumped even further down his chair. [Don’t think you’re getting off so easy, Hisao] Shizune marched over towards Hisao with a stern, almost militant stride. [Sit up! Back straight! Chin up!] Hisao jokingly complied, half surprised that her use of JSL was able to impart that much force and half because he was nearly comatose after eating nearly an entire birthday cake to himself. [Hands at your side, you!] Hisao further complied with her orders, again half joking as if she was acting out her risk game in person like some prestigious general. Not realizing what exactly her plan was. “Wahaha~!” Just as soon as he had assumed the position Misha had sprung into action, grabbing his arms and quickly binding them behind his chair with zip ties. “What the hell are you doing?! It was just a stupid bet!” “Wahaha~, you should’ve considered the ramifications before going up against Shiichan, Hisao, You had lost even before you began and you should realize what you were betting on!” [Cry all you want, doughboy, because there isn’t a means for escape] Shizune had planned this out which seemed particularly cruel since there was no way Hisao could directly reply to her without the aid of Misha. He also had pondered what exactly she had meant when she called him “doughboy” only to find out shortly after when she had straddled him and began to undo his shirt buttons and his belt buckle. [My, my, you let yourself go, Hisao, maybe I should’ve worked you harder when I had the chance] She knelt down beside him started prodding and playing with his distended belly. While it was a relief to be free of his belt and trousers that were all but cutting into his midsection, he now had to deal with what was happening between Misha and Shizune. “Oh wow, Hiichan, I didn’t know you had it in you” Misha accompanied Shizune on the opposite side accompanying her with the bizarre bellyplay. “Hey, damnit, Misha, Tell Shizune to knock it off! This tickles!” “I still feel room for more, Hiichan, you’re not going anywhere until you complete your wager” [Since you’re incapacitated I think you’re gonna need a little assistance then] Without hesitation, Shizune stood up and grabbed some silverware and a napkin off the table took a small stab at the cake, taking a taste for herselh. [I don’t know what you’re complaining about, Hisao, this is pretty delicious] She then proceeded to take a piece and ferry it over to Hisao’s mouth who offered resistance at first. “You aren’t going anywhere until you man up, Hisao, you best get to eatin’!” Hisao, who was already nearly comatose from earlier begrudgingly surrendered and let Shizune feed him. Piece by piece were led into his mouth by Shizune distending his gut further and further. For every groan and churn that came from Hisao’s mid section Misha was there to massage it down trying to notionally free as much room in his belly as she could. Eventually all that was left was scraps of frosting both in the box that the cake came in and on Hisao’s exposed, swollen midsection

It seemed no matter what Hisao just couldn’t win. Shizune was on his case like a hawk stalking a mouse. If he wanted to go somewhere, she would know about it. It didn’t help that Misha was following her every whim, meaning Hisao had to deal with a second pair of eyes to keep Shizune up to date with his whereabouts. There was nothing much Hisao could do about the situation, if he was somewhere Shizune wouldn’t want him, she’d find him and make sure he was in the student council room like he should be. Eventually he was inducted into the council as the official “Doughboy”, as she put it. If Hisao wasn’t eating, he wasn’t doing his job. For weeks on end she’d had Hisao take part in impossible challenges, mainly taking her head on in some kind of contest that Hisao would only win if the planets aligned in his favour. Of course, he lost every one and paid the price, forcible feeding of stupidly large meals his punishment. He would never leave the Council’s headquarters unless his belly was packed with food and his face splattered with the remains of his meal. However, today Shizune was giving him a little mercy. Hisao was given free roam to bring in whatever food he desired today, no challenges or contests, just him getting to eat what he wanted. Of course, he was still eating and this was something he’d rather not do, but he knew not to go against Shizune’s wishes. “Hey Misha.” Hisao merely said, clutching two plastic bags filled with food. His breathing was slightly laboured, having to carry around those bags was pretty tough considering he had little to no muscle to speak of. Both girls took note of the tired out boy, watching his hefty stomach rise and fall with heavy breaths. “Heya there Dough- I mean Hicchan!” Misha replied, quickly remembering that only Shizune had the honour of calling him that. She’d made it very clear Hisao was all hers, though Misha was allowed along for the ride. “We have your spot all warm and ready~” Misha gestured over to Hisao’s seat, instantly recognizable by how beat up and worn it was. Given how fat Hisao had gotten, the already aged chair had suffered, needing a few repairs so it was able to support his weight. [Do enjoy your mercy day, won’t you doughboy?] Shizune signs over, simply smiling as Hisao plops himself onto the old chair, each individual creak and strain audible though the room as his plump rear squeezes in. [I’ve got plenty up my sleeve for you next week] Simply nodding, Hisao settles himself down, moving back slightly so to not let his belly press into the table. Finally, it’s time to sit down and time to eat. Reaching into the first bag of the two, Hisao takes out a rather hearty club sandwich, loaded with plenty of balanced fillings. Even on his off day, he knew Shizune would be breathing down his neck to make sure he ate plenty of his fill. If it wasn’t big enough, she’d no doubt make up for it tomorrow. At least it was a chance for him to get a decent meal in. Most of these food punishments were just junk food, having that forced into you daily wasn’t going to do him any favours, so Hisao strived to make sure his own food selection was balanced and had some decent nutritional value. The room was quiet with nothing but the soft chewing of Hisao’s mouth, enjoying his large meal. It was a nice change of pace to eat for himself, even if he was still eating an obscene amount like the hog he’d become. Moving onto a large bag of pretzels, he savoured the flavours in his mouth, actually having the time to taste something instead of having it forced down his throat was rather nice too. All the while, Hisao couldn’t exactly enjoy himself with all this. Turning his head, he saw Shizune watching with intent eyes, those sapphires of hers watching as he slowly chewed and swallowed his current mouthful, confused and staring at her. [Go on] The straightforward and quick way she signed that was rather intimidating to him, causing Hisao to move on with his meals, taking out one of several bentos so he could get a start on them. From there, he kept on going, eating away and trying not to let Shizune’s constant watch over him get the better of him. The feeling of fullness wasn’t as apparent as it was when he was getting food forcibly shoveled into him, but it was still there was he moved onto the next bag. Putting a hand to his soft belly, Hisao rubbed it a little as he pushed a the last of 12 meat buns down his mouth. Feeling a buildup of gas inside, Hisao was about to cover his mouth, only for Shizune to snap her fingers, getting his attention. [Just let it out] With a single small nod, Hisao lay back and belched. It was long and freed up some room inside his belly, rather glad he was able to do it without any problems. Shizune merely smiled as he continued to eat, more food disappearing into his stomach as he ate, his rather large shirt straining. Laying back again as his paced slowed, Hisao was really starting to feel full, his stomach filling up to the brim. But he knew he couldn’t stop, Shizune would have none of it. Forcing a slice of carrot cake past his lips, he swallowed and heard a tiny little clink onto the floor. Looking about, he saw Shizune licking her lips at him. That’s when he noticed a popped button on the floor, laying before him. Seems his shirt wasn’t good enough for the stuffing, one of the buttons flying off from the pressure, leaving Hisao with a window of creamy pale belly skin free to look at. Shaking it off before anything else could happen, Hisao scarfed down the rest of his food quickly, finally stopping as he burped again. No doubt, he was stuffed. But he didn’t feel like he was going to burst at any moment, he just felt like a good lie down would help. Thankfully the day was soon ending, Misha having been excused as Hisao heaved his flabby body up, putting the button in his pants pocket to sew back on later. Just as he was about to leave quickly, he felt two soft feminine hands clutch onto his belly, grabbing rolls of fat as it squeezed the round tummy. Shizune was having a fun time feeling just how soft his belly was. Hisao knew she was doing it to see how much fatter he was, like she was a witch and he was just a fat little Hansel for her to enjoy. Moving about to him, she traced a finger onto his belly before she started signing. [Impressive doughboy….you’ve gotten to be a right little gluttonous boy, right?] She smiled sweetly. [I wasn’t too impressed before that button pop. Seems you did get yourself enough to stuff your fat gut to the gills. But that doesn’t mean I won’t have anything special for you soon enough….] Letting him go, Hisao waddled out of the room fast as his thick rubbing thighs would allow, Shizune waving slightly as he decided he needed a long lie down on his bed. And a pizza from Kenji.

Extra Credit with Shizune. The words rang in Hisao’s head over and over, Misha’s instruction to him before leaving the council room haunting him over and over. Hisao was getting pretty huge at this point, taking the crown as fattest kid in class from Taro, all thanks to Shizune’s watchful eye and calorie heavy regime. Hisao couldn’t remember the last time he had a proper meal, though he could remember eating two wedding cakes and 5000 yen worth of take out food. Even getting uniforms was becoming an issue, Hisao having to rely on Shizune to get his custom size in exchange for letting her feed him as many chocolate bars as she wanted. In his slow heavy waddling stride, Hisao fumbled into the girl’s dormitories, thankly Shizune’s room was on the ground floor. Stairs were currently proving Hisao’s biggest weakness, even a medium sized staircase enough to make him pant for air. Even with elevators it was rather awkward to share one with another person, lest Hisao crammed himself in the corner in an attempt to stop his grand belly from brushing against them. Standing outside of Shizune’s room, he took a deep breath before opening the door. Naturally, he was greeted by Shizune, though for once she wasn’t wearing her uniform. Clad in a more casual outfit, being a white vest and shorts, not to mention clearly not wearing a bra, the deaf/mute grinned as she gestured over to the table beside her, revealing what appeared to be a three course meal. Given how this was Shizune, it was a three course meal which would probably constitute as a buffet. [Uniform? Disappointing, I was hoping you’d dress more appropriately for our date] She signed, confusing Hisao. [What do you mea-] Hisao’s sign was cut off by Shizune slapping his hands aside, poking him in the gut sharply. [Less signing, more eating Doughboy! I cooked this by hand, so you better eat every last morsel!] Poking him until he sat down, Hisao waited until he needed to be prompted. [Use your hands, it’s faster that way] She added, getting a little frustrated with him. [Shizune! I re-] Getting fed up, she took a handful of potato skins and shoved it into his maw, Hisao forced to chew slowly before gulping it down. Grabbing him by the cheeks, Shizune gave a death glare. [Eat you fat fuck] Her signs were so sharp they could probably cut him if she tried. Gulping, Hisao obeyed his superior and began to gorge. First course, the starter. Classic starter dishes, the aforementioned potato skins, prawn cocktails,chicken wings with dips, spring rolls, the whole lot. Just as he expected, these were far from starter portions and looked more like party food portions, the way they were all piled up on top of each other. Hisao wouldn’t deny, these tasted great. He was surprised at Shizune’s ability as a cook, never expecting her to be the type to be skilled in the culinary arts. Then again, he never expected Shizune to making him obese, making the surprise somewhat dulled. There was both a strange resentment and enjoyment in the almost piggish manner Hisao ate. It was clear Shizune was loving it, sitting opposite to him and watching as he grabbed handfuls of finger foods before cramming them into his mouth, already coating his lips in a fine layer of grease. For Hisao, he almost found himself liking it. Cramming so many different foods into his mouth at once allowed for some vibrant tastes he’d never experienced before, prompting him to experiment with combinations along with the dipping sauces. Despite the overly large portions, Hisao made short work of the starter. Letting out a few small burps he licked his fingers and wiped his mouth, pleased with the starter. A few splotches of salsa and grease stained his top, but he didn’t mind too much. If anything it only made it better, fueling Shizune’s bizarre desires to watch him changing into a glutton. [Excellent work. Now it’s time for your main course] Shizune brought upon the next course, Hisao knew this was going to be completely monstrous in comparison. She wouldn’t rest until he was fit to burst, a feeling he’d gotten very accommodated to, but never quite getting used to the feeling. Brought to the table was the main course, a carnivorous assortment of large plump meat dishes, ranging from turkey to chicken to pork and gammon. All of the dishes were packed full of meat, no potatoes or vegetables at all to compliment them. And just like before, all of this was ideal for eating with his hands, just the way she wanted. Hisao dug into the huge meals, tearing off meat and skin with no signs of slowing down, thick juicy helpings consumed by the handful, only serving to add more lard onto Hisao’s already huge frame. It was almost like he was changing slowly as he ate, his manner of eating and expression making it seem like he was almost entranced by it all. All the weeks of gorging and gaining were finally getting to him, he had accepted his fate and was going to enjoy his new lifestyle to the fullest. This was certainly helped with how great it all tasted. Hisao wouldn’t deny he’d come to love a good slab of meat, and these were some quality cuts cooked to perfection. Every satisfactory moan or loud belch was a sign he was enjoying his meal, as if his grease coated hands and messy cheeks weren’t enough. His white shirt wasn’t so white anymore, the sleeves completely brown from how they’d dipped onto the juices of the plates, not that he cared at all. It tasted so great, all he wanted to do was eat more and more. Even Shizune was a little surprised at just how gluttonous Hisao was being on his own accord.

What happened on the last thread that makes this a take two? I remember seeing a Katawa Shoujo thread pop up but then after a day or two it was replaced with this one.

https://www.deviantart.com/undertaker33/art/KS-Shorts-3-Winded-Runner-883369502

Westmetal! https://www.deviantart.com/westmetal and clarkpalmed! https://www.deviantart.com/clarkpalmed

>>6353 https://www.deviantart.com/prophetofadephagia/gallery#content

>>9860 Dude, I was a member of NAAFA for years in the early 1990's, even went to the conventions. I dated people highly placed in the organization. They were gossip mongers. Yeah, it's Studio.

>>10403 Ok so you're saying Ned and Studio are the same person? You're blowing my OG mind.

>>10403 >I was a member of NAAFA I am Nintendo.

My first published wg story. Based on the gut-wrenching story by Inio Asano. I had this idea when thinking of good girlfailure and maybe thinking of some drawing comission but opted to do some art myself, so I supposed I'd start with the créme de la créme when it comes to losers and did something I really haven't seen (and wish to see more of!): Oyasumi Punpun fetish content... it feels like an extra layer of sin. Anyhow, I hope you like it, i'm still working of the other parts of this story (2-3 more chapters), so stay tuned if this is your cup of tea. I'll appreciate any and all comments 😁 https://www.deviantart.com/kharnthefeeder/art/Oyasumi-Punpun-Altair-WG-BBW-Downgrade-Slob-1186475781

Dose anyone kept a copy of "Repaid in full" somewhere?

https://www.deviantart.com/sophiawrights/art/Finding-Shape-Lila-and-Lily-1253119203 Here’s my vanilla weight gain story

https://www.deviantart.com/debulbous/art/Ann-Extra-Juicy-Slice-1253819712 Shilling my first story.

https://www.deviantart.com/333blebleble333/art/My-300-Pound-Life-1305485157

>>9758 Samefag here, I found this yesterday. https://mega.nz/folder/E70VTZZL#eA7Ar7Oit0qJ_Ra_8xOV3g

>>9757 it's dead :(

Just bought this, wasn’t disappointed. Wish it was longer and made the voice warped when she hit 1000 lbs https://gofile.io/d/DkTPxF

https://mamastrassa.itch.io/the-speedy-weight-gain-pill

Beth’s growth hoodie

>>10309 Absolutely adore this idea a ton! I don't know if your into this but slob and gas kinks are something I love and I think would work very well here. Have Joker overtime give into more of the slob lifestyle and get more lazy. Plus all that greasy food must really mess with his gut, cause lots of gas. Plus of the app has some type of corruption aspect to it this would work even better. Just an idea

>>10311 OP here, thank you! I'm definitely planning on implementing some slob elements (belching, messy eating, etc) to accent the overall increase in gluttony. This is just a snapshot of the larger story I have planned, which involves the App having some cognition-warping effect based on some Metaverse shenanigans. I plan on posting more once I have more fleshed out, stay tuned!

>>10318 Well glad to hear that! Looking forward to see more from this. I personally love if there would be so farting there to as I just love that as kink to show gluttony. Joker/Akira/Ren is such a cutie and I need to see him as an obese slobby fat ass. Love to see who else you plan to make very obese.

Story universe idea: 2030 is the year that alien civilization is introduced to earth. There is a 100,000 year old galactic federation of a million planets, all populated with beings that are in the Homo genus. The colonists who founded the construction of civilizations on these planets were often brought together to build a society with a vision that catered to their sexual fetishes. The traditions, laws, languages, social structures, customs, history and lore all are shaped by this. There exists a kind of faster than light internet among all of these planets that earth gets connected to. Genetic nanobot technology has evolved to the point where someone can be transmogrified into just about any creature. Mind control technology is so advanced that anyone under the influence of it thinks, feels, and acts according to the controller's will. Example story in universe: Browsing the newly arrived galactic internet, an earthling discovers extreme fetish porn that turns them on. They become addicted to it and browse it obsessively. Advertisements on the site offer weight gain supplements and weight gain related medical services. The ads also offer many pets that have been genetically engineered to have human skin, subcutaneous fat, and huge flabby asses as well as other anthropomorphized features. An ad catches the eye of the earthling. It is from the porn site itself, offering a permanent spot in their brothel for anyone willing to sign over themselves to complete and irreversible sex slavery. The brothel is on a planet that legally allows this and even severely punishes any slave that attempts to renege on their slavery contract.

>>10340 Personally not huge on sex, but this could be a cool little world you’re building. The thought of an intergalactic sort of space tourism industry built around sexual pleasure could be fun to write, there’s probably some fun narratives you could write there, and it seems like an easy one to inject pre-existing characters into if you’re into that. As for the scenario you’ve got already…seems pretty standard, open and shut. Not much to add other than the bit of them selling pets being a little freaky. Like, are they “dog and cat” pets? Weird, genetically engineered flesh mounds? Actual people being sold? I’m a little unclear.

>>10176 Here's a few "how-to" articles that touch on tropes and such: https://www.deviantart.com/polarisdreamer/art/Tutorial-1-Writing-WG-Stories-900292823 https://www.deviantart.com/zero-cz/art/COM-How-to-Write-a-Pretty-Good-Weight-Gain-Story-462813254 https://www.deviantart.com/miss-fan-language/art/Writing-Tutorial-Weight-Gain-Fiction-718542290

>>9891 Have you considered lifting obesity tropes from the real TVTropes?

You should have called it wikifeedia, dumbass

This is awesome, actually. A fun little perusal and light dissection of tropes. Eager to see if this evolves in any way!

>>10190 >https://www.deviantart.com/zero-cz/art/COM-How-to-Write-a-Pretty-Good-Weight-Gain-Story-462813254 Sometimes a weight gain story is less a plot, and more of a collection of experiences.