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Giantess/Size difference stories Anonymous 08/01/2021 (Sun) 02:50:13 No. 2681 [Reply]
I'm really interested in stories where the female is taller compared to the male character. Sizes like ~5ft male to a ~6ft female or even larger like a ~10ft female to even a greater than ~50ft female. Content where the male feeds the girl or the girl grows and he gets overwhelmed by height/weight.
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>>2681 Pretty much anything by this author. Usually there are multiple females and they tend to grow different sizes, and that's always fun. https://www.deviantart.com/chrollo94238 I used to be really into their works but then somewhere around 2021 or so they just dropped off the face of the earth. Their Twitter was taken down, too. I really hope they're doing okay.
https://www.deviantart.com/omega1535
>>2681 Aw dude. You need to get Devotion to Growth by Mollycoddles. Absolutely what you're after. Look on kemono if not dA.
>>10127 >check out 3 >cuckoldry No, and fuck you. Does anyone do mini-GTS?
>>10125 Quality stuff, shame he's posting less frequently nowadays

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GDPDLLNFFE GDPDLLNFFE 01/11/2023 (Wed) 01:01:22 No. 5955 [Reply]
J'ai détecté un livre pour enfants nommé "Mr Wolf a très très faim" Il s'agit d'un loup qui est vraiment très gourmand. Il a faim tout le temps. Du lait, du pain de mie, du poulet et des spaghettis, rien ne l'arrête, il a un sacré coup de fourchette ! 1, 2, 3. Hips ! 4, 5, 6. Croc ! 7, 8, 9. Miam ! Et quand arrive l'heure du vrai festin, son ventre trop lourd lui joue des tours ! Je me demandais s'il y en avait d'autres là-bas. Une division de >>>426
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anybody>>5961 does anybody have any screenshots of inside the big pig book?
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I feel bad for any anon that's incapable of reading beyond the level of a kindergartner fr fr This thread is fucking sad
>>9878 I wish. But there's to fat bat, pudgie budgie, blimpy chimpy, thick chick, and other overweight members of the animal kingdom.

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Fat Scat Anonymous 05/13/2023 (Sat) 03:51:22 No. 7127 [Reply]
Interested in stories of fat people pooping/messing themselves. Male or female is fine. Can be pantypooping, diaper-messing, having to shit out in the woods or in a port-a-potty, anything as long as there's crap involved.
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"Mistress Becky's New Slave" by William S. Burroughs 1486 words
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>>10147 Wait. Is that by THE William S. Burroughs? Naked Lunch William S. Burroughs?
>>10149 Something tells me no, besides Burroughs being dead and gay.
>>10149 >>10153 Obligatory. Must always escalate the scandal. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgCs6OXIE7A
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"The Ass-Slave of Darlala" 1528 words In the scintillating depths of a demonic lair, Darlala, the irresistibly seductive demon queen, finds her human obsession in the muscular peasant Tomas. His fate is sealed as he succumbs to the allure of her monstrous, ever-expanding ass, a monument to gluttony and lust. Imbued with immortality, Tomas becomes her devoted servant, trapped in an eternal cycle of feeding and pleasing her insatiable desires. This tale of dark temptation and unbridled carnality takes readers on a journey through the seven deadly sins, as Tomas' humanity is slowly consumed by the relentless power of Darlala's sinful embrace. A feast for the imagination, "The Ass-Slave of Darlala" will have you questioning the nature of desire and the limits of human obsession.

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Tips, Tricks, and Advice Anonymous 11/18/2024 (Mon) 23:30:47 No. 10040 [Reply]
A thread for aspiring writers to ask for advice, as well as for veterans to share their own.
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>>10054 I enjoy the process of writing, plus practice makes perfect so it's never "wasted." But I've written myself into dead ends after 20, 50, 100k words and it does bum me out. Another topic: Like I said, my stuff is long and plot generally takes precedence over sexy stuff. I've tried to write straight-ahead fetish stories but it rarely works out. I am who I am lol. The point is that sometimes I feel pressure to include a certain amount of actual fetish material if it seems lacking. Like, it's been 3 pages... I should stick some fat in there.
I need advice on how to come up with plotlines that revolve more around character drama rather than purely fetish content.
Try going for the regular parts of life for content. For example: Say the plot of a story is that a female university student is on a scholarship for running but gets injured leading to weight gain. There are plenty of details that can be filled out for drama and content. Life is a constant and complex thing after all. Roommates or housemates are common and give opportunities for interaction, same with friends, classmates, rivals, family or the coach. These characters might at first bring gifts of food or offer assistance at first allowing the weight gain to start. But later could change to comments and concerns of about the main characters weight gain. Or supportive and wanting the main character to be happy if this new lifestyle does that for them. Which can lead to arguments between the main character and them or the supportive characters versus the those against weight gain. Eating is important for life and gaining so how does the main character do so: -Who are they eating with? By themself, with friends or classmates who, as stated above, can talk with the main character. This talk could be reminders to take it easy to heal, suggestions for things to do to pass the time while healing that the main character now has time to try, comments about weight or lifestyle changes. -What are they eating? Are they sticking to a meal or diet plan for their athletics that is no longer filling them up because of snacking? Or they feel like treating themself to desert for a change or new offer or encourage larger food portions. -Where are they eating? Relates to Who but are they eating alone in their room, at a cafeteria or food court at the university, or somewhere else. If somewhere else maybe they see something that interests them in a nearby store like more comfortable, and baggy or stretchy, clothes, video games, TV series and movies or even books or comics / manga. -When are they eating? If the main character usually eats with friends on the track team then being injured means they are no longer going to practice so their daily schedule is is different. This could lead the main character to eating at a different time and meeting new people who are supportive of being heavier. This could also lead to eating more as perhaps the main character would snack during practice and burn it off but now they are snacking and not exercising. Chores such as laundry or getting rid of garbage can lead to interactions with roommates or housemates. Classwork and projects as well though with friends and classmates. Does the main character have a job or end up getting one to support their growing eating habits. Have the main character join a club for a TV series or movies, gaming of some type or other form of entertainment. Also don't forget about events such as concerts, expos, and more that the main character could go to.
I crave a story of Vi from Arcane being a swollen and uncomfortably full 600lb hamlet, getting caressed and fed by caitlyn, and scolded whenever she passes gas short hair hamlet bitches are hawt, i need that yuri in my life alternatively, Caitlyn getting toyed by Vi and getting reasured of her sexyness where fat lesbians at
>>10071 The standard advice is "write what you know." Riff off situations that happened to you, or that you've observed, and same with the characters. With my own stuff (which is very character-driven), I have to be able to imagine the characters and the action clearly, like a movie in my head. Otherwise it feels flat and fake, plus the writing itself takes much more effort. When it works it's like the stuff writes itself.

Extreme pear thread Anonymous 12/14/2023 (Thu) 15:26:24 No. 8198 [Reply]
Share stories with the biggest of big asses. Bonus points if they look thin enough up top that their full size comes as a shock! https://www.deviantart.com/chubbadubdub/art/More-Than-Meets-the-Eye-592519741 https://www.deviantart.com/chickenshack/art/The-Girl-Behind-the-Counter-1-837271991 https://www.deviantart.com/itsqwet/art/POV-The-Secret-Hot-Tub-Fatty-872626420
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God I wish more of these existed
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May from more than meets the eye
>>9517 What?
>>8198 I don't know how well-known this story is but it's one of my all-time favorites: https://www.deviantart.com/beghostwriter/art/Mega-Meaty-Mimi-852112579
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39921599/ / https://d.furaffinity.net/art/containsaforbiddenword/stories/1609434662/1609434662.containsaforbiddenword_pear_in_the_dead_mall_part_1_the_colossal_clerk.pdf (direct link) https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39934472/ / https://d.furaffinity.net/art/containsaforbiddenword/stories/1609519365/1609519365.containsaforbiddenword_pear_in_the_dead_mall_part_2_dinner_date.pdf (direct link)

Writing Request Thread Anonymous 09/09/2024 (Mon) 14:22:13 No. 9683 [Reply]
Hello! I wanted to ask for some writing ideas! Nothing is too weird! If I don’t know the fandom or characters you want me to write about I’ll respond back so you can give me another idea! If your idea involves males or alt stuff like vore contact me on deviantart at: ItsWarriorPrincess I am really excited to write some nice little stories so please request away!
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>>9683 How about a fattening prison scenario with a prison that fattens up criminals to make them docile and harmless.
>>9683 hot spy femme fatale gets captured by the villian and fattened into immobility by his new device, reduced from fit comando to a several ton blob, then she gets rescued and has a special suit made than can compress all of her sweaty flab so she can continue to work in firld but it tends to mulfunction from time to often at time at the worst moment >The suit breaks down while you are sprinting though a hallway >The guards turn a corner to find a bloated mass of blubber completely blocking their path >just glares at them and tells them to get her out, quick
>>9719 >>9724 >>9729 On the kidnapping/prisoner tip, a psycho fetishist kidnaps and imprisons multiple young women. He gives them a choice: eat what I give you, get really fat and I'll set you free. Or refuse and die. Of course most of his victims take the first option, and so we meet a group of them who are at various stages of fattening. One gains to where she's starting to have serious issues and so the psycho sets her free — though some of the other women think he killed her anyway. It becomes a conflict between them. Our MC decides to go for it, asking for extra food and forcing herself to eat as much as possible. She gets so big she's on the verge of immobility and the psycho finally says congratualations, I'm setting you free. But then the psycho leads her to a room full of hyper-sized women on life support. There's subtle evidence of other women who've already died there. The psycho pushes her down onto a bed and hooks her up. Et, fin.
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I love the idea of time travel or time paradox that involve weight or fattening up, can anyone come up a story based of the image
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Just saw this on Twitter: https://x.com/RadioGenoa/status/1859603668317634815 And now I want to request a story about a fat female politician who gets called "fat" by somebody on social media and she fumes about it and tries to ruin their life. All the while acting like the fat, bloated hog that she actually is.

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She is in Deviantart and patreon Caliwriting /cali93 11/02/2024 (Sat) 13:00:28 No. 9943 [Reply]
Does any of you have her patreon and share her stories in here, Thank you
https://www.deviantart.com/cali93/art/Deal-With-The-Enemy-Chapter-1-630242031
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Role Reversal Anonymous 02/07/2021 (Sun) 05:16:23 No. 1771 [Reply]
Looking for stories where the "thin" girl suddenly gets fat. Preferably stories where there is a chubby girl as well in the story. Extreme weight gain also preferred, but not a must.
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This thread needs to come back
Check these out: https://www.deviantart.com/snr6424/art/Backfired-Part-1-FWG-178432139 https://www.deviantart.com/ladderwall/art/Lisa-and-Amy-Prologue-And-Chapters-1-3-497902973
anything new?? massive turn on for me, huge interest in this type of literacy.
>>9882 https://www.deviantart.com/mistermahi/art/Field-Day-1095362739
>>9882 Hey guys, I have read this story recently https://www.deviantart.com/bswriter/art/Fit-Friend-Fat-Friend-WG-Role-Reversal-1074080292 wrote by BS Writer and I loved it. The only problem is that the remaing part of this story and its spin-off "Sam the Ham poundering about her pigginess are on the Patreon of the write. So, to sum up, can someone share them if it is possible, please?

Massively obese POV stories Anonymous 08/08/2022 (Mon) 16:21:38 No. 4686 [Reply]
Does anyone have any stories told from the perspective of a hugely obese or immobile BBW talking about what it's like to be such a size? Like dealing with their appetite and the 1000+ pounds of fat on their body
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Here’s a sad one https://www.furaffinity.net/view/45940353/ It’s part of an episodic series
>>5645 Could you copypaste it here?
https://www.deviantart.com/heyboi607/art/Useless-Fat-Blob-867591036
https://www.deviantart.com/stc9892/art/Mel-Lays-Down-SSBBW-XWG-866482839 This one's very good, as is this author's standard.
Does anyone have this sequence of images?

Dominant Feedee 11/16/2022 (Wed) 05:25:22 No. 5471 [Reply]
Any stories where the person being fattened is in control, and abusive/mean to their feeders?
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Instead of making a million overly specific threads for different types of dom feedees where only one or two stories might exist, lets keep dumping anything we find. A short description or tags might help. My contribution, copied from another thread: Molly is a jealous girlfriend to Nate who does everything for her. Shes seems oblivious to how fat shes gotten sometimes, but eats a lot of different realistic amounts of foods when they go out on dates, but keeps telling him he needs to avoid getting fat: https://www.deviantart.com/mrtrazzorr/art/Molly-and-Nate-911746689 https://www.deviantart.com/mrtrazzorr/art/Molly-and-Nate-Part-2-912260583 https://www.deviantart.com/mrtrazzorr/art/Molly-and-Nate-on-Valentine-s-Day-952613433 https://www.deviantart.com/mrtrazzorr/art/Molly-and-Nate-Part-3-917271251 https://www.deviantart.com/mrtrazzorr/art/Molly-and-Nate-Part-4-945528444
Hey look, that's me!
>>7135 I was going to say. Even when she's a physical wreck, bedbound and unable to control her bowels, the gaining girl rules her feeders with an iron fist. It's pretty hot.
This one doesn't really have any abusiveness in it, but it has a dominant gainer. It's about a vampire queen who's being fattened up to improve her sex life. She start's getting bossy and more sexually aggressive and demanding with her maids the more she fattens up. https://www.deviantart.com/jakotsufan88/art/The-Tower-Chapter-1-913868938
Xposting a call for suggestions I made in another thread which seems equally relevant here. >>9861

Interactive stories Anonymous 04/20/2024 (Sat) 20:21:21 No. 8821 [Reply]
Post 'em here, or make your own.
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>>9645 >>9631 Well, helped me procrastinate for an hour.
>>9655 How did you do it
>>9695 Look for a json file with an array of objects with the keys "verb", "noun", "result", and "notes".
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Check out this masterpiece https://forum.weightgaming.com/t/insatiable-hearts-v0-21-0-a-monsterfucker-weight-gain-twine-game/23882
Sarah Goes to College, The Trials of Mass, and Abducted Plus are all pretty good and can be found on weightgaming.

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BBW Harem Stories Anonymous 01/02/2021 (Sat) 00:44:19 No. 1583 [Reply]
Any stories about a thin man and a bunch of fat women?
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"Roll change" has the man end up with two fat woman one tall and one short
https://www.deviantart.com/anonymousfa/art/Unreleastic-WG-for-a-Realistic-Hero-s-Wives-935994288
https://www.deviantart.com/crudeatoms/art/The-Full-Weight-of-Her-Office-849747698 https://www.deviantart.com/crudeatoms/art/The-Full-Weight-Epilogue-852466974
https://www.deviantart.com/stuffedwaves/art/Slobbi-Slobbi-Literature-Chub-Part-1-840825799 https://www.deviantart.com/stuffedwaves/art/Slobbi-Slobbi-Literature-Club-Part-2-843168390 https://www.deviantart.com/trmtum/art/DDLC-Huge-Hungry-Harem-Part-1-843292874 https://www.deviantart.com/trmtum/art/DDLC-Huge-Hungry-Harem-Part-2-843568801 https://www.deviantart.com/trmtum/art/DDLC-Huge-Hungry-Harem-Part-3-845096451 https://www.deviantart.com/trmtum/art/DDLC-Huge-Hungry-Harem-Part-4-Finale-852239385 Be forewarned, these stories do have slob elements
Damn a fucking year has passed and no one has posted a new story? That's sad

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Permaberry stories 08/04/2024 (Sun) 15:14:22 No. 9468 [Reply]
Hope non wg stories are allowed. Post stories about folks who have to deal with the everyday life now that they are big blue blueberries. I’ve seen a few of these kinds of stories, but they are few and far between
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>>9600 Hmm, not sure, but I do like expansion scenes where the girl is getting stuck in a tight space.
>>9600 Idk about the panicking part, but I do like the idea of her swelling to the point where she can’t move around on her own (i.e. crotch has lifted her off the ground and/or she’s become too heavy to move under her own strength) and then her be all “Well fuck” and forced to bide her time until someone comes back to help her. Like she’s forced to try and entertain herself due to her immobility, like scrolling on her phone, thinking back to how she became like this, idly sloshing around the juices inside her out of sheer boredom, that sort of thing
>>9473 Wow... been taking a work-life necessitated hiatus for a long while and I'm speechless that as soon as I pop back in to test the juices, someone linked my story. I have the whole rest of this outlined and all-but imaginatively/creatively visualized in my head, but the writing part -- if it's to remain "actually good" takes soooo muuuuch tiiiime.
>>9646 I’ve found that doing a small side project does wonders for regaining focus on my main projects. You could try something similar. Maybe an unrelated blueberry story on the side?
https://www.deviantart.com/drinkapus/art/It-s-Permanent-A-Blueberry-Story-907153431 Sounds like this fits the bill in some way.

Writing Tips Romantic Writing Advice 07/04/2024 (Thu) 00:43:58 No. 9294 [Reply]
Was hoping for some general tips on writing romance. I’m mostly focused on FxF mutual gainers but I have plans for other types. My main issue with a lot of WG relationships is how degenerative and surface level they can feel. I understand why, but I’m the guy who enjoys happy relationships and think they elevate the erotic taste of WG. I want to be genuine, maybe not wholesome, this is still a kink and I have slob love for it to, but I don’t want relationships to feel superficial and loveless. I want them to have personality, chemistry, and then pair that with the hedonism of the kink. That’s what I want to make: something rich (for a self-fulfilling fetish work) that still has big gassy women. tldr: Asking for advice for writing a fleshed out relationship while keeping the kinks balanced.
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>>9403 Just write, once you're in the zone and the characters are clear in your head that stuff will come to you.
Noted. I have written up a basic rundown that I would not mind to get second thoughts on. The vast world known as simply The Whole World was rife with indulgence and pleasure. Nations featured rarely, resources were plentiful, and a sedentary grip was tight in the people. It was then, the gods of this world, who had watched waiting for any chance of change and growth, took matters into their own hands. Acting individually, each with different intentions good and bad, they all sent their power into the World, curses and bounties on the land, afflictions upon the people, and monsters with a hungering affliction. Despite all being different and from the same gods, the people of the World called them all “Treasured” plagues and beasts. Monsters and “illness” would somehow fatten the populous. The landscape would be weighed down, reducing plateaus to swamps. New foods, between powerful, sickening, and tasty, appeared. Despite having an influx of food and drink, the monsters forced the growing population to flee their gilded homes, overun by new beasts. The Treasured had different afflictions across the World, with different races developing and changing beyond simple differences in origin and skin tone. And any who wish to act must contend with a world that will force their runs to become waddles and their stomachs to never be quiet again. The Whole World had been smothered by too much of a good thing. Our first lead is a quickly bloating adventurer, Callah, who has attempted to strike out and find the source of the Treasured and end them, though she has struggled greatly. She then stumbles into the Hollow Lapis Academy, a former palace converted into a grand library on all things Treasured, overseen by the supporting cast and second lead, Ada, a woman who has been slightly mutated into an off shoot race due to Treasured imbalance. She has her issues with the Treasured as well, but seeks to understand them before rash action. Seeing this as her best chance of staying safe while furthering her mission, Callah joins the academy, with the story that follows focusing on her, Ada, the academy’s members, and other faces looking into the Treasured, adventuring and fighting, growing closer together, and growing further out as they decide which way this world will go. Thoughts?
>>9408 Been thinking about this post for a few days and I feel compelled to weigh in. It sounds like you've got a pretty clear picture of the world you want to play with, which is great! It also looks like you've got a rough outline of your main characters, which is also good. Since you're asking for feedback, I'd suggest focusing your brainstorming on two things: character motivations and a satisfying end-state for the story. Questions to consider for Callah: - Why has she decided to leave her (presumably) comfortable and safe home life behind and adventure through a very dangerous world? - Has she been cast out of her community for becoming cursed? Is there somebody back home that she's trying to save? - You mentioned multiple gods, perhaps she's an adherent to of somebody who isn't the "fat god", and she thinks the fat-related curses are abhorrent? - Why is she convinced that the Treasured can even be destroyed? How firm is her conviction? - Is she old enough to remember how the world was before? Even if she isn't, how does she feel about the world she has to fight through? For Ada: - How does she feel about becoming a mutant? Is she open-minded enough to embrace the changes or does she feel like a freak?

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>>9437 Thank you for the feedback. I’d like to respond to these all actually, they help with creative juices and I have plans for some already. In order -Callah hates what the curse has done to her body and family, upset with the state of her flabby and gassy form, as well as many people in her life such as family. She just wants to get back to the thin ideals she heard of in stories. Her home is also far from cushy. Supplied food in a round about way by Treasured, but nothing more. She hates being babied or overly sedentary moments too, prefers activity, which again, is harder as a fatass. -Not at all, most people in this world have been cursed one way or another, being fatter or hungrier or gassier or whatever. It’s just a way of life for her. To an extent, she’d be trying to save her home town from the curse of living like this, but this is primarily for herself. -Yes she is quite upset with some of these gods when she finds out about them, though it takes a bit for her to learn of them and their plans. -Pure spite and grit. She does learn from her investigations with Ada and crew that they may be defeated, but at the start, it’s just out of desperation. -No, but she has heard many stories of the glamorous and noble life of the past. This just makes her hate the wild and disgusting world even more. -Ada has learned to embrace the changes overtime, now completely fine with who she is. Despite her self-love, there are those who scorn her in this world, something that keeps her away from any stable parts of society outside the academy. A core part of her character is being someone who accepts themselves in a world that may not. -Exactly that. While most are mindless beasts in one description or another, Ada has seen good in some factions. Her studies into the gods that made them have also let her see more of their purpose, and thus judges them far less harshly, though isn’t dumb and knows which ones should be dealt with. -Ada knows the Treasured all come from the gods, and each god’s type of Treasured varies, with some that may genuinely better humanity, others that try a trial by fire approach to make humanity change for their own good, and those that are just pure monsters with no good. These grey areas are the biggest source of tension between her and Callah, though the two grow to understand their sides more. -I didn’t skimp on body horror ideas! Some people, particularly those who cling to the past while under their curse, can transform into bloated monsters. Other types of curses can turn people into Treasured mutants, like Ada to both lesser and greater extents. -It’s grey area again. Some are just set on whatever their god commanded them to do, some are plain kill beasts, but a handful of groups are smarter. Be it through trickery to herd masses to an ideal, some benevolent in methods, or even those who comprehend what they’re doing could be wrong. -The ending is the biggest thing I want to make stick. I was planning on the kind of angle you mentioned, an Elden Ring style specifically, with all the people there chasing the Elden Ring so they can make their ideal world. The difference here is that it’s all the *gods* there throwing out their Treasured to “evolve” the world out of stagnation (or keep it that way for some) and by the end, Callah, Ada, and friends will be the ones who decide what kind of direction the world goes in. Can’t say much more, but it’ll be big.

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It’s been a minute, but progress has been slowly moving. Mostly figuring out the general flow for the story, how things should escalate, interactions should play out, so on. Along with that, some other hefty gals to fit the themes of acceptance and self-recognition in the story. Part of me wants to ask for more advice here, but I have a hunch I won’t get many responses. So instead of that or wasting another thread, is there some other place to ask for writing advice on topics risqué as this? Genuine writing feedback and advice would be harder on mainstream places when it’s still about XWG kinks, is does anyone know of boards or websites that are more focused on storytelling advice for those I could check out? That being said, if people are still interested in my story or willing to give feedback or advice here, I’d gladly take it!

Wholesome WG Stories Anonymous 05/19/2021 (Wed) 20:53:23 No. 2276 [Reply]
Let's take a step back from demanding slobs and gross gluttons for fat girl stories that make you feel warm and fuzzy. I'll start: Amy's Breakfast, probably my favorite story ever https://www.deviantart.com/feed-her-more/art/Amy-s-Breakfast-134324073 The Sweet Sarah series: https://www.deviantart.com/novicefa/art/Sweet-Sarah-Pt-1-724653223 And this masterpiece of a series as well: https://www.deviantart.com/moderation1243/art/Invisibile-to-Undeniable-625982079
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Wrote one today that's kind of wholesome? Kind of an unintentional mutual weight gain "A Night Of Pleasure" Chapter 1 A long hard day at work led Tyler home. He grabbed his keys and unlocked the door. Dropping his suitcase by the doorway. "Brenda," he called," you up sweety?" "Be out in a second darling~" She replied in a hawty south London accent. What emerged from the hallway was an immense mass of tanned, middle eastern blubber. Tall and incredibly obese, Brenda tipped the scales at eight hundred and fourty and had no intention of stopping. She heaved herself onto the couch, still dressed in her pink nighty, eagerly watching her husband. If he only knew how impossibly in love with him she was. They met on an online dating site years ago. She was a modest 350 pounds back then and had always been rather portly. She ate a lot and was tired of denying her inner glutton and liked girls that ate. They found thar beyond the mere sexual quirks, they actually had quite a lot in common. They first met IRL at a plus sized bash and they couldn't keep their hands off each other. They checked into a room and slept together, his head nuzzling her back. They'd never slept so peacefully. Two years later they were married at a court house. She'd blown up to five hundred pounds and could barely move in the tight fitting purple satin gown he'd bought her. But thar was the point. When they'd gotten to the hotel, she threw him on the bed and had her way with him. It was her day too after all. Four years later, through numerous eating regimen (and enough weight gain powder to fatten even the skinniest woman to immobilitiy) she now sat, a mountain of achievement and sexual bliss personified. Tyler sat down beside her and kissed her passionately. He could taste the hunks of her favorite ultimate devil's food cake between her beautiful plump lips. "Got you a present today." "Oh?," Brenda replied being catty," Well I have something for you." She pinned him down with all of her eight hundred pounds and buttoned his shirt and began kissing him everywhere. Sensing the moment, he massaged her engorged body with his finger tips. She moaned deeply. "Mmmm," she whispered, you said you brought something home?" He nodded, groping the immensity of her ass, sending shivers down her spine. He went to his briefcase, opened it, and put it down on the TV tray beside her. It was a large metal belt buckle with an even larger glass tube inside of it. She couldn't help but laugh, "Not a sex toy I hope? You're the only pleasure I need lover." Tyler laughed too,"No, something better. Stand up for me." Brenda heaved herself up off the couch and waddled over. Lifting up her arms, she let Tyler put the buckle around her waist and shivered, "Bit cold isn't it?" She muttered. Within moments, the buckle extended around her waist and the tube inserted itself into the depths of her belly button. "Well, enough theatrics dear," she laughed,"what's it do?" From the briefcase, Tyler grabbed a remote with all kinds of dials and switches, "Anything you can possibly imagine." He whispered in her ear. "Oh," she purred, "I can imagine a lot of things."
>>9491 Chapter 2 From within the briefcase, which at this point seemed bottomless to Brenda, Tyler pulled out an immensely thick book. "It's the Slothworks DX-80 body defier," he said, passing it to her, "wanna look like a supermodel? Wanna be the strongest woman on earth? Wanna eat like a hog and still be razor thin? The possibilities are endless." Brenda soon had a sly smile on her lips. "Fatter, I want to be the biggest, fattest woman you've ever laid eyes on. Even bigger than those girls that you drew in high school that you showed me." Tyler nodded, pressed a button, and it started. The tube began processing a slimy, yellow liquid and Brenda's stomach began making noises that she'd never heard before in her life. Sickening noises that sounded like a camel pleading for it's life. Oddest of all, she began violently belching. All around her, Brenda's body surged, slumped, and pushed forward. Rounding out to improbable proportions and then even more impossible. Soon Brenda was too fat to even stand up anymore and violently smacked her two thousand plus frame on the floor, shaking the house as she did so. "More," she pleaded, moaning in heat, her voice deepening as she expanded further,"more..." Like bread rising, her body grew more and more voluptuous and thick. She'd never felt so sensual like this before. The verbose belching and typhoon of stomach noises grew more and more prominent as she widened. Soon, she couldn't feel her hands or feet. Not wanting to make her explode, though he was certain she would have been in absolute ecstasy if he did, he stopped her at eight tons. As the system cooled down, her body lurched forward mid-expansion and she let out a belch that nearly shattered the windows. Reaching down to her belly, he unhooked the body defier, listening sweetly to all the churning and groaning that was still taking place inside her. Tyler took his time looking at his handi-work and was quietly amazed at what he saw. "Sweetheart," she moaned barely above a whisper, still violently belching,"come to me.." Chapter 3 Tyler wasn't sure how exactly to satisfy a woman as impossibly fat as Brenda currently was, but he made it work. And boy, did she gush. Later he brought a blanket and threw it ontop of as much of her as it could cover and he laid atop her, as close to her face as he could get. "That was *belch* so *urp* wonderful," she moaned, mid-kiss,"I'd love to *urp* stay this way if you'll *huff* let me." Tyler shook his head, "I couldn't imagine the food bill trying to feed you. But we can still keep it around for special time." She giggled deeply," So naughty *urp*, well, I guess let's *belch* change me back before I get used to being your own *burp* sex pillow." Tyler slid down Brenda and re-attached the body defier, gently kissing her belly as it worked it's magic. Soon, her belly began violently churning again, but it was more of a slow release this time and not as nearly dramatic. In about ten minutes, Brenda was back to just being plain old morbidly obese (give or take ten to fifteen pounds). Tyler was about to pop it off, before Brenda stopped him. "Let's see what else this thing can do, shall we lover?"
>>9492 Chapter 4 Brenda, still belching, flipped through the manual. Playing with the dials, she figured out how to increase individual body parts, much to the delight of Tyler. She knew how much he loved the sight of her behind so she expanded herself until her bottom was big enough to expand over the sides of the couch. Reading further, she noticed the en masse "expander" and "reduction" dials and pondered a thought, "Sweetheart," she cooed, getting up and waddling over, forgetting that her breasts were still engorging themselves," what do you think it'd be like to start all over again? Drop a few sizes, let you weave your handiwork and turn me into a rotund heifer all over again?" "Well.." "Come on," she whispered, kissing him, "it'll be fun." "Oh, all right." She grabbed the remote, finally halting the breast augmentation and flipped the "reducer" dial. "See you in a couple of hundred pounds sweety." Brenda watched her all her hard earned blubber reduce in rapid succession. Her panties that were once too impossibly tight dropped to the floor. Her stomach still moaned, but not as before. Sort of like the inverse. She closed her eyes and thought of her first kiss with Tyler, their first feeding session, her first hundred pounds. It was bliss. But when she opened them back up, it wasn't so. She'd dropped to 150 and when she realized this, she gasped in horror. Tyler had tried to pull off the body defier, but in doing so, it had sent tremors throughout Brenda's frame. Individual parts swelling and then reducing. "Shut it off," she moaned, belching "I'm trying. You shouldn't have turned the dial so much. You're lucky that you didn't turn into a pile of jelly." "Don't tempt me with a good time Tyler Rogers." Somehow Tyler yanked it off but it attached to itself to his body instead. "Ohhh," Brenda purred, "tempt me with a good time Mr. Rogers.." Chapter 5 "I might miss being an obese blob, but turning you into one?" She cooed, "Now there's a thought that never entered my mind." With a press of a button and a turn of the dial, Tyler began swelling and turning round. While not as sensual as Brenda's turn, it wasn't without it's charms. Though having fun at his expense, she knew not to upset him too terribly. She stopped him at five hundred fourty. She detached the body defier and he groaned, collapsing. He woke up, hours later, chained to the bed. Brenda was feeding him fattening things that she often saved just for herself, hoping to make him even more bloated. "Funny," she purred,"who'd have thought you'd look so impossibly cute as a butter ball, lover?" "It's only fair," he belched,"I did do this to you after all." Brenda shook her head, "Tyler, I loved being fat, but more importantly, I loved being with you. Just having you turning me into a lard ass was a bonus. I'll turn us both back in the morning, but tonight, let's just have this moment, okay?" He nodded in response.
>>9493 Chapter 6 The next morning, Tyler woke up in bed feeling strange. He didn't feel as nearly as heavy as he once did and that was a relief, though part of him did get enjoyment out of it. "Brenda?" He shouted down the hall,"you home?" There was no response. He found the key and unshackled the chains. He walked down the hallway and found Brenda raiding the fridge. She still looked thin. "Oh, good morning," she yawned, giving him a kiss, "you sleep well?" Tyler nodded. "Well, I've been up all night thinking. And you know? As great as that thing was, it's kind of dangerous. Imagine if either of us got stuck that way. Not that I wouldn't enjoy either outcome," she giggled," but let's just say that I want to blow up on my own terms. Is that fair?" "Perfectly," Tyler nodded. Brenda got up and attached the body deifer to her stomach, "We're gonna have one last turn lover, so get the most out of it okay?" Brenda tossed him the remote and took a large bite of the chocolate cake, savoring one last moment being thin, "make me large, Tyler Rogers, make me huge!" He turned the dial and embraced her, letting her fat envolpe his body. Chapter 7 Two months later Home once again, Tyler sat down his briefcase "Brenda, you home?" He shouted. He found a note on the mantle that read 'follow the rose petals'. He did as he was told and followed them into the bathroom where he found Brenda relaxing in the bath with sparkling fruit juice and soft R&B music playing. She'd grown since that day, roughly two hundred pounds thanks to the body defier. Luckily the bath was still big enough to contain most of her. "Good evening," she cooed, "fancy a bath?" She watched him longingly as he undressed and slid in-between her, nesting his body between her breasts and belly. She sighed and kissed him, savoring the moment. "I found out something today." "Oh?" He replied. "Yes," she smiled, "I'm pregnant" Tyler rolled over in the bath and smothered her with delight. "I'm going to be a father. You have no idea how happy I am." "You?" She laughed,"I'm going to be more of a literal cow than I bargained for. I'm the one who should be celebrating" They clanged their glasses together and kissed deeply, wondering what the future might bring them.
Emma and Jack: A Love Story Once upon a time, Emma got a job at Wendy's. She was a diligent worker with some concerns about her weight. Her manager, Jack, started to encourage her to eat from the leftover food inventory. In no time, Emma developed a habit of regularly eating these leftovers, significantly increasing her weight. Soon, her weight gain became so rapid that it even garnered Jack's interest. Rather than expressing concern or suggesting she leave her job, Jack, who unbeknownst to Emma was Jeff Bezos, proposed an audacious idea - move the entire restaurant to Emma's house. Thus, Emma's life became entirely revolved around food. Soon immobile, Emma depended entirely on her manager and the feeding machine he'd designed for her. Her habits soon began subtly altering her body. Every piece of clothing she owned turned tight on her as her body widened. Her once slender arms and legs started to fill with more meat every passing day. Emma's weight reached astonishing levels, all while she lay immobile in her bed. Bezos, intrigued by the experiment, provided her with artificial organs that could cope with her increasing weight demands. He even got a crane to lift her out of bed since by then Emma was completely immobile. Food was supplied directly to her enormous body through a specially crafted feeding tube. As her needs grew, Bezos paid a horde of people to keep her supplied with food around the clock. Such was the singular focus of her transformed existence. One day, she found herself unable to consume anything solid; even being fed through a tube became taxing. Jack designed a feeding machine that would blend the food for her completely, turning everything into a thick, easily swallowed paste. The days and nights merged together, a time when she did nothing but eat. As she swallowed, caretakers and admirers massaged her body gently, touching every part of her immense flesh. It almost seemed like they were pleasuring themselves at the sight of this feedee girl, immobile and powerless on her bed. When consumption reached an unimaginable colossal level, hitting an impossible, unthinkable milestone of a million pounds, Bezos and his team decided to engineer a new form of nutrients. Waste products, previously discarded, were introduced as a high nutrient source.

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