/elite/ - Erotic Literature

Can anyone update songbird kemono? It's been a while?

Furthering the request for songbird 567. Its been about 2 months sinces last updated.

Throwing in a request for bs writer. Been almost 4 months

bro peak just dropped https://www.deviantart.com/stc9892/art/Undercover-Blubber-SSBBW-Immobility-Part-I-1252354897 i need the kemono updated for part 2 and 3

Could someone also update adiposerex?

anything that includes mainly bottom heavy weight gain and struggle?

>>11074 Yes! Femboi/feminization stories with a major booty focus- https://thechangingmirror.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=10158 https://thechangingmirror.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=8913

I can’t find any slob and horrendously fat femboy stories…. Please anyone

https://www.deviantart.com/kcenneckennek/art/Roll-On-Down-the-Highway-1216782315 All I do is fat femboy/catboys

Oh hey! I wrote those. Stories with similar themes on my FF profile.

I'm interested in this kind of thing too — curious to see the responses. Most of my stuff is fairly dark but these are love stories, of a sort: https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/The-Mad-Ones-1-965938229 https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/Muffins-1-of-2-June-Story-800800919 https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/1110868468 This one starts as a romance but (spoiler) then gets dark: https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/Elle-s-Belly-1-994020564

>>12205 What kind of dark might I ask? so long as they've got intimacy then do share even if they are dark, like I said anything is welcome.

>>12208 (spoilers) There's some foul play and implied death feederism. But o/a it's a love story.

>>12202 >>12205 I never feel especially comfortable self-promoting, but what you're describing is basically the core of what I try to write. So, sharing time. https://vicepeddlerscorner.neocities.org/stories/AA/toc >Step into the relaxed waistband of a young professional man who's recently escaped an abusive feeder relationship, now sporting some extra baggage physically and mentally. A new job in a new city should be just the thing for a fresh start, but sometimes the slate can't truly be wiped clean... >~107k words >Content Spoilers (highlight): >Strongfat BHM protagonist / POV, SSBBW love interest, enemies to lovers (sorta), (mutual) stuffing, (mutual) feeding, significant weight gain, mild-to-moderate embarassment/humiliation, gamer/nerd characters, mild responsible drinking / drug use, mild slob / messy eating, moderate BDSM or psychosexual themes, self-acceptance, growing confidence, professional success, psychological healing / reform arc, bisexual women, exercise/fitness themes, videogame violence, mild family drama/reactions, mental illness (sorta?) tl;dr some mildish psychodrama, but the core relationship should be pretty wholesome

https://www.deviantart.com/panchromatic567/art/The-Weight-of-Affection-REQ-USSBBW-1265697149

a very far future with tech high enough that fairly rapid weight gain and very rapid weight loss are daily factors. Horribly calorie heavy foods are mass produced by replicators and feederism, hedonism and emotional eating are encouraged, it's easy to eat 10 k calories a day without effort. The young are kept on ai restricted diets but the moment they're off them, it's typical to put on two or three pounds a day. Most people are borderline immobile blobs ... Most of the time. Going out of your luxury apartment without looking super model perfect is seen as the ultimate taboo. Most people don't need that because luxury space communism means what little work there is to do is done from home. Holographic interfaces represent a person's ideal self, so everyone recognizes each other as thin. But everyone needs to go outside for something or another every once and a while. Future tech, bordering on magic can lipo and tuck the typical quarter tonner down to size with a few hours of surgery but that's... Annoying. Everyone's apartment is set up for the super obese, resizing everything when you're just going to get fat again by the end of the year is boring. So most people use temporary, hand wave nano tech bullshit to become thin for four or five hours. Just enough to handle real in person meetings. The short would be a domineering low level exec who's got a date with a big client only for a software glitch to reveal her real size in public...”

If anyone can, I would like a story about Esna from Ever Oasis getting a large feast in her honor, and while she's not sure about if she can eat it, the residents of the oasis encourage her to eat the whole lot and she gains a LOT of weight.

I’d like to see one of Himiko toga from mha using food as a coping mechanism/ deterrent for blood, which leads to MASSIVE slobby weight gain. Like room filling to mountainous blob of slobby fat

Does anyone know of writers who are taking commissions and will write health issues and realistic bathroom struggles?

I have three story plot ideas that I’ve used as prompts for A.I., which I actually absolutely hate A.I. and the fact that there is pretty much zero fat hourglass stuff that is actually an hourglass and not just have big boobs but the butt is bigger. Anyway, small rant aside, here is one of the prompts that I use (also note that it is loosely based on another story that I found near the top of the bursting thread, but I think it’s different enough for a story of its own, but do let me know if it’s not): An 18 year old business woman wearing a suit with black skin and blue eyes, thick body, and big boobs, Ivy, enters a restaurant, Le Fleur, that is usually reserved to the rich and wealthy and is secretly a place that on rare occasions takes a young and not so wealthy person to fatten up until they explode at the center most table. The restaurant ultimately fails to explode Ivy as she simply gets bigger and fatter until she outgrows and destroys the restaurant, unaware of the restaurant’s thwarted scheme to kill her. Ivy’s boobs are the biggest with her butt being the second biggest part of her, especially after she grows larger and fatter than the restaurant. Due to Ivy’s immense, immobile, fat body suddenly taking the place of the restaurant, the police arrive and arrest everyone involved in the exploding person scheme after hearing what happened. Ivy is labeled a hero for exposing and technically stopping the restaurant’s crimes and is continued to be fed despite only finding out what happened after the criminals were in jail.

https://www.deviantart.com/whitewomanspotted/art/Beautiful-Fatty-Dangerous-Allenby-Gundam-WG-1254823232

>>7924 Only 2 years late to the party... https://www.deviantart.com/angelsie/art/May-All-Blessings-Find-Their-Way-To-Your-Waistline-1255649444

>>12196 Great stuff! Love ultra-fat Miorine, it suits her.

>>12196 GUND-ARM bariatrics is one of my favorite niche sub-tropes. And I love the way you protray Miorine as spoiled and needy without her being a full on brat.

>>12206 It helps that G-Witch is a great story for post-series weight gain. In addition to the ever-present temptation of the bariatric stuff, things are very cozy by the endgame: not a lot of people died, there's not a lot of trauma, a lot of characters got a happily ever after ending, especially Suletta and Miorine. It's a perfect set of circumstances for characters to get fat once the anime's action is over.

https://www.deviantart.com/sizzlinlizzy/art/Bounteously-Bound-to-the-Bed-637224851 >>10905 Kemono. Although it's pretty mid. The writing is good quality, but it doesn't do anything for me.

>>10894 Anyone have any advice for writing this kind of stories? Or what you like to see?

>>10933 Wish she'd come back and make more god-tiwr stories

>>12098 So from a physical standpoint, try to imagine how it would feel to be in bed 24/7 and what that would do to your joints and muscles. Imagine how it would feel to make simple movements in bed (sitting up, rolling over, lifting a leg, etc.) given this, while also having hundreds of extra pounds on your body. From an emotional standpoint, even the most committed feedees can get frustrated with their weight or worry about their health somewhat regularly. Being in bed 24/7 can also be quite boring and monotonous, as you can imagine. Whether or not another character(s) offers emotional comfort depends on the type of story you are writing. Remember that unless there's some kind of unique circumstance, even immobile fatasses tend to have friends who come by occasionally to chat or help out. Oh yeah don't forget these people regularly eat over 10k+ calories per day like it's nothing. Often times, food is one of their only sources of pleasure. (Remember that being immobile tends to boring) The immobile character should be able to casually eat through a family's worth of food for a meal like it's nothing, but also be choosy enough to eat what they prefer.

https://www.deviantart.com/panchromatic567/art/Rebeca-s-Fat-Prison-USSBBW-slob-manipulation-1247767953 mother-daughter incest, be warned

Question for bros here, how much "set-up" do you expect/tolerate in a story? How much non-fetish content at the beginning you can handle. Obviously longer stories, or ones with a more detailed plot may need some time to set the scene and build things up, but how much is too much? Do you need allusions to future weight gain to keep you hooked, or do you need the story to dive straight into fat/weight gain? Can you stomach pages of story entirely devoid of fetishism if it's to set up the scenario?

>>11865 For me it all depends on the skill of the writer. I can tolerate a lot of non-fetish content if they've got the goods. That said, if I feel like they've shoehorned fat stuff into what should have been a non-fetish story then I'm not so cool with it. Send that shit to your college literary magazine. I'm not here for that.

>>11865 A person can take their time to set things up but if you're gonna hold off on it for one or two uploads, you better go out of your way to fill in that void with talk of fat background characters or something because that's like putting out a dozen comic books but none of them have any fights. Also you shouldn't need much time for set up but a lot of people seem to think you need to unload everything in one go, when you only need some context, with the rest being able to be spread out among the weight gain.

>>11369 >>11370 >>11374 A good way to ground the size of an character without using weights is to use their clothing size (3XL, 4XL, etc.) instead, but this requires the writer and reader to have familiarity with plus sized clothing. (For context, most of the popular SSBBW models like Boberry or Jackie, who weigh around 600 pounds, wear something around 6XL pants.)

>>11865 If you're worried about this as a writer, one trick I use is non-linear storytelling. Show them a bit of where we're going to provide excitement for how we get there

>>8608 Oh, also, there's some stuff in there I never ended up publishing at all - mostly half-finished ideas, but one or two completed works as well. If anyone feels like completing or riffing off of them, feel free. I really don't mind.

>>8608 I just wanted to say, you are a pretty damn good writer. Thanks for all the stories you wrote. See ya when we see ya.

Bump

>>8600 >>8608 o7

Bump

>>10758 i jerk myself awake and try moving away from the holy sister of battle, my hand leaving her stomach, letting it bounce on its own after losing the support from my hand. pain deterred me from moving a lot, i let out a grunt, seeing how my wounded body barely let me even salut the sister properly. she quickly leaned forward and extended her hands to signla me to stop moving. -"wowowow! easy there! you dont want to reopen your wounds." she says. her face reflecting consternation at my broken state. -"where...am i?" i ask the sister hospitaller. i try to lif my head further but i only manage to catch a couple of spiraling buldings. we are probably at the shipyard, the only place resembling a city in this agri world. the -"oh crap!" i cant believe i cursed in front of a sororitas. -" im comm officer rogelio slador of the fifth regiment of the planet makador!" i try saluting again. this time im succesful. -"well." the sister had a soft voice, yet it had a sense of gravity that could command respect. -"i am sister alexandra pigritas, from the order of "the emperors chosen maiden" in the hospitaller division" she gave me her profession and order...i've never heard from such an order. -"it's very nice to meet you roger~," she said, play in her voice. -"well...its an honont to meet one of the emperor's finest!" i decided not to question it was an honor to be in front of a sister. but to be honest, i couldnt help' but stare. she was absolutely massive, her size was obcene. i've only heard governors and other aristocrats reaching such sizes but even then only in stories. from where i was i could almost feel the heat she emanated. -"something catched your eye, roger?" she asked. she had a playful smile in her face. she laughed while closing her eyes. -"what? uh- no! of course not! well its just that its my first time seeing a sister!" that was a half true. i've never interacted with them but i've seen a couple boarding aquilas whenever they came to our ship. but i could just tell her i was at awe of the sheer enormitie of her body. -"sure~. " she teased. this felt surreal. sisters were never this firendly. we stayed silent for several awkward moments, her entire body swinging or kjiggling every time the transport made sudden movements . sometimes i would feel her exposed flesh against my body, her warmth seeping even though my clothes. after a while we finally reached the landing site. the pilot alerting the emperor's maiden. she approached me and without much warning she grabbed my stretched by the handles near my head and with the she walked outside. i'd like to say this was a nice trip to the main improvised hospital but it wasnt......not in the conventional way. she was pretty, her face was gorgeous and her demeanor divine but her body was just too different. she wasn't my type of girl but that trip in the stretcher awoke something within me that i never though even existed. her stomach completely smothered me. my face was against the lower portin of her stomach, i was only capable of breeding thanks to the rail on the bed. it covered my eyes, my nose could only smell whatever perfume she used combined with her sweat, my mouth could only taste the somewhat salty kjuices that transpired from her skin and my chest could sense the weight placed upon it combined with the moisture from the aformetioned sweat. i didnt want ti to end, i felt blessed...touching a sister of battle...even if it was one so rotound as her...maybe it was because she was fat that i felt blessed. when we reached my designated position she finally moved to the side, her stomach sliding through my face until it liberated my head and went to my chest and stomach. i inhaled as much air as i could, no longer drowning in blessed skin. the sister noticed this while checking serums and iv's she needed to plug in me. -"wait! you....! im so sorry!! i should have known i was smothering yopu! i swear it was an accident." she looked regretful. consternation painted her face. -"to be even approached by one blessed by the emperor is an honor! i feel like the emperor himself sent an angel to look after me!" i tried calming her. -"im still getting used to all...." she grabbed her stomach and shook it with one hand, her other hand signaled the rest of her. -".....this." she finished her idea. -"uh...what do you mean?" i ask. trying to feign ignorance. her shape did intrigue me but i could never ask...not directly. she laughed, looking at me with her sweet eyes. -"lets not play dumb, officer. im probably the fattest woman you've seen in your life." she was being blunt and i for once was glad. -"well...its true that you are....bigger than other sisters but...i could never question a sororitas."i answered sheepishly while we were talking she hauled her inmense body around, connecting me to machinery and fluids to me. her body ocassionally smothered parts of me. she felt like a soft boulder or the best weighted blanket ever. -"the sisterhood of our chosen maiden was founded shorlty after the age of apostasy. it is during that time that the emperor himself declared that the Ecclesiarchy could not have any men employed as soldiers. the high priests and nobles circumvented this by creating the sisterhoods. it is said, the emperor was furious and planned to dissolve the orders and the Ecclesiarchy as a whole but it was our chosen lady...the empero'rs maiden that stopped this descition. the orders sent each a representative to plea for the emperors mercy. one sister looked different from the others. she was...stout...robust. not fat of course, she could perform her duties in the ring of honor just like any other sister." as she was explainign me the story of her order, she bagn focusing on my wounded leg. i dont know if it was my exitment over meeting a sister, her soft doughy flesh rubbing against my crotch sometimes as she worked, the adrenaline of combat, the joy of being alive or my newborn fetish but my little friend began to get stimulated. i tried to control myself. -"but she was big enough her armor reflected her size. as they stood in the gates of eternity, the chosen maiden could feel the scorn, ridicule and disdain in her sisters eyes but she remained firm. when the gates finally opened, the emperor manifested, as if he stood from the golden throne. he looked at the women of the Ecclesiarchy with scord and dissapointment until he saw her. she was the first to enter...no matter what other orders say." she made an annoyed expression, looking to the side with a frown before resuming her work near my crotch this time she was facing my wound while i was facing he rback, and what a back, not a single inch was left uncovered by the wave of fat rolls that connected to her breasts and her belly, melting down into a huge ass. i could see her crack, poorly covered by the loincloth. -"there the emperor struck conversation, they talked for days, the emperor showing her the palace and its gardes. its there where they fell in love. the emperor worshipped every crevice, every fold and every bulge. she secured her sisters place as the armed forces of the Ecclesiarchy and so they were safe from his wrath. however...the emperor wasnt done with her. days turned to months and so, he treated her to all sorts of delights, she gorged and grew as did the emperors love. she grew and grew until she couldnt fit into her armor or even most clothes. the emperor pampered her and its in those months that the emperor decided to grant her many powers, afraid that he was soon to be perpetually bound to the throne, his wounds from the arch traitor manifesting before the sister. and so, she left. a hulking woman covered in sweet blubber. the sisters outside were astonished, even horrified but the emperor granted them the strenght to fight thansk to her." she finished suturing my leg, she stood up and looked at me, letting her belly rest on my lap. -"how come we've never heard of you?" i asked. her belly once again rubbing my crotch. -"well, other orders are not...very fond of us. and the inquisition tried to exterminate our order 500 years ago. it took the sisters of silence and the adeptus custodes to get them to back down. now...we live in secrecy. hidden from most to protect our order and the legacy of the emperor and our chosen maiden. quite the story huh?" she laughed. -"y-yeah...it was aaaaugh.." i moaned. i ran to cover my mouth. to even have such thoughts of one of the emperors chosen! -"oh!....blessed emperor im so stupid!! did i hurt you?" she asked, taking her stomach from my lap and revelaing the bulging member in my crotch. -"oh....oooooohhhh." she stared at me for a moment, her face reflecting some knowing, one her voice shared. -"dont worry. thats perfeclty normal. not completely expected but...welcomed...you know...my order has some very particular practices. to replenish our numbers we sometimes recruit male members. i haven't had some action in some time, so im a bit rusty. but i still need top make an audition if you catch my drift." her finger traced my torce, playing around my nipples before going down my exited penis. -"you interested.? -"wait what?!....im not sure im following sister." i 'm panicking. was this really happening? i barely wetted my beak in thse past few years. hold on, that's the wrong worry! this is too irregular, if a commisar found out, im as good as death. -"you know..." she began massaging my member between my legs. -"if you want me to spell it just say the word. i can play like that too." she gave me a wink. (sex scene tomorrow. maybe)

>>10767 PLEAS!!

>>10767 -"oop! hold on for a sec." she casually stood as if her weight didnt slow her down. leaving my side she went somewhere for something, what that was i couldnt tell. i looked around for a bit, moving my head to see what was around me. the sight was surread, several obese sisters were tending the wounded. their size varied but some were twice the size of alexandra. many of my comrades were in the stretches and makeshift bed while the sororitas walked around, even my commander. wait, my commander!? i stared at her with eyes wide open, her wounds were as severa as mine but she could only express what i interpret as abject terror in her face. i was glad she was alive, she was a hero but she had that expression on her face. i wonder what she's thinking. -"commander...pssss....commander!" i tried drawing her attention. it worked! she turned to face me. -"comms officer....slador, right? what the hell is going on!?" she asked. i looked at her confused. -"we were saved, commander! by the sororitas no less!" i said. joy clear in my voice, hoping it was contagious enough to make her realize we were safe. -"i've never seen sororitas like these....im willing to bet they arent even sororitas!" she claimed. the audacity, how could she even question the servants of the emperor! sure they had a different figure but one could tell when they were in prescence of the rightgeous. -"why would you say that? i know they look a bit different from the sisters we're used to but they saved us!" i exclaimed, trying to get my commander to see reason. -"i know but you expect me to believe these groxes are the emperors "chosen maidens"? its all a lod of..." -"roger im back~." alexandra came, curtains in hand. -"i wanted to make our special moment a bit more private." she began setting up a protective barrier of opaque curtains that stopped light from coming in. as she moved, her blubbering form bumped with my bed constantly, causing it to move and termor. she has to grab my stretcher so that it doesnt crash against my commanding officer. who looked at me with scorn and desperation. im glad she wasnt a commissar or else she would probably shoot me just because. as she fininshed covering us with the curtain she takes a quick look at my officer, giving me a feel of her enormous rear. such a funny thing, her being so big i couldnt see her proper. only feel her enormous mass against my face, her enormous buttox a wall of flesh. -"im sorry, commander. i require your officer for a rite of my order." with that she finally closed the door of our makeshift room. -"what was her deal, is she your commanding officer?" she asks. -"y-yeah. she the lieutenant of our division." i explained with an affable smile. -"she was making a face....maybe i'll ask sister gulanica to check on her." i could tell there was a bit of worry in her speech. -"now then...lets start our rite..." she smiled. she started teasing, grabbing my hand and placing it on her enormous chest. they were like sand bags, blessed by a little nub at the front that hardened until it poked through her clothes. she slowly traced her hand from my chest to my crotch, slowly unbottoning my regiment garments until my penis was out in the open. she began playing with it, her dexterous chubby hands enveloping my meat, moving it side to side and moving up and down in a gentle rythmic manner. she leaned forward, her soft stomach pushing against the strecther, swallowing its corner while her breast was in my face. she unbottoned the smooth piece of what i think is the armor's secondary skin and with that her warm tit melted into my face, i knew what i had to do. i began liking, kissing, even biting, until i found a little button, her nipple. i sucked her ample breast, eliciting quiet moans from the sister. it felt like a dream. she began to stroke faster, all the pent up emotions i've been carrying threatening to pop my lid off in her blessed hand. i tried resisting, biting into her bussom with a bit more force before sucking. -"ow! gentle...they're sensitive." she tells me. -"im so sorry!" i exclaim with force, leaving her enormous breast to fall to the side while i look at her with earnest regret. i abused her holy body and i felt the need to atone in any way necessary. -"wow, hey. dont get so worked up about it....what im i saying, you're a member of the guard, of course you would." she looked a bit frustrated. before i could express regret for killing the mood, she leaned down, her stomach falling from my resting place while her breasts pressed against my chest and crotch. she kissed me, tongue and everything, wrestling my own for dominance inside my mouth. i bit her lip in a genlte manner as she stopped her assault on my lips to look me in the eye. -"this is a sacred rite of my order but...its still just us having fun. dont worry, there's no way you mess this up bad enough for me to leave." her voice was like a song that caressed my soul. she lowered the stretcher using a lever, i was witness again of her enormous stomach asit reached her knees, the legs of the bed compressed. -"lets get to the main course." seductive as she is, those words could make me lose my cool and act like a fumbling idiot. she lifted her leg and put it on what will soon be our bed, she lifts her stomach as she gets up. it was a bit of a hassle but in time she finally got on top of me, her legs sprading while she was on her knees. she sight was glorious, her stomach could almost reach me, its contour finishing where my neck starts. while she was up there she unbucled the rest of the secondary skin and left her triple H cups to fall and hit her stomach. with a gentle plap, they announced their freedom. while she was doing that, i noticed that her folds hid a black string that went all the way down to where her loincloth was. she was wearing a thong to help cover her loins when the piece of cloth was insufficient. when she was finished with her breasts, she reached down, using one hand to move her stomach from the way, her other hand raching her nether and moving the thing to the side, leaving her pussy in the open.

Anyone remember a story where a female Inquisitor was sent to investigate possible cult activity and was pampered by the locals who were actually Slaaneshi cultists? The Inquisitor was completely unaware of this and slowly began to enjoy the endless food being offered to her.

I'm not sure if m00nliner still lurks here but I wanna say I loved the story with the T'au and especially the idea of a EC marine keeping slaves to be fattened. I humbly beg for a follow up that focuses on that sororitas in the beginning who is being fed cake. Good stuff.

P,S: this is also a >>>/bbwdraw/124085, except instead of pics, its stories.

>>4642 Same. When the grammar is wrong, I can't get past it. That steals the focus away from the story itself.

>>>/bbfurries/80422 If you don’t mind furry stuff, someone swapped the genders of a submissive snorlax and his (to her) ariados owner. There’s another story in there where they tried to edit the cock out of a futa snorlax but it’s not as good. Posting to bump and revitalize this thread.

>>2799 Where is the picture from?

Can people make story requests?

https://youtu.be/M1bvjJXcI6Q?t=158 Chick has a full on meltdown when her gown doesn't fit and blames the store. Measurements show she gained 6 inches around her waist....thats a good 40-50 lbs

>>6951 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mcR36PK2z2g

>>7120 Fuck that’s hot

>>6884 Not the full story but part of it: https://www.deviantart.com/mrwrong1/art/Three-Wishes-4-734673846?ga_submit_new=10%3A1520627917

This vid is basicially the standard for weight gain denial. The full episode inadvertently showed her original measurements. She had a 42 inch waist initially, so that's about a 48-49 inch waist in the vid. When you talk about a realistic way to portray denial, people should use this vid. The combative scoffing, inability to take responsibility, relying on her sister to defend and vouch for her. "I'm within 1lb, wearing all the same clothing" Mind you, she came in an extremely flowy sundress. The denial leads to delusional thinking which leads to about as embarassing a moment captured for eternity on public tv. Favorite part is when the sister at 4:38 unprompted states "I just don't understand how it could possibly be THIS far off". Almost tongue in cheek, she seems to be holding in a smirk, Marissa mutely responds with a "I don't either". Considering they cover the alteration fee and make it seem like she's not in the wrong, it wouldn't shock me if just continued to stuff her face.

>>11410 I automatically assume any long or plot-heavy story is gonna tank. I do it for myself anyway, so Oh Well. But my short, stroke-friendly stuff usually gets 5-10k views and 50-300 faves, depending. (Mind you, my numbers are skewed because I used to draw comics and I think a lot of those watchers automatically click on anything I post.) However I have one story I wrote last year that has nearly 800 faves and I have no idea why. It's more "to the point" than most of my stuff, but you'd have to read it to know that. I have no idea why it went "viral" (by my modest standards) but there we are.

>>11415 This is pretty good advice. I've found the same - anything that is made to be short seems to take off, and anything long tanks. You're right, you've got to do it for your own enjoyment Still bewilders me though that sometimes the algorithm just makes some things take off and others vanish with no explanation

Hey there, I think I can answer this one. From my experience, it feels like there are two paths to getting a decent number of reads (at least on DeviantArt). Path 1: You write what other people are looking for. If you hang around in fat fetish community for long enough, you tend to pick up what clicks with the masses. Writing stories about girls getting fat in college, or writing stories about popular IPs/the flavor of the month waifu, are good ways to get attention. On that note, fanfic readers will definitely stick around for a deeper plot if you keep fatness relevant. Path 2: You stand out from the crowd. This is much harder, because it usually involves being a good writer while also having a few extra skills under your belt. However, going down this path means you have a lot more freedom to do what you want and get read. Typically, ‘standing out’ means that you know how to write and draw well. People are far more likely to take a chance on a writer who can draw, and if your story quality is good, they’ll stick around for future stories and pics. ~~~ Overall, it’s tough out there, but there are definitely readers looking for stories. Along with the other stuff I mentioned, be sure to follow the other basics. 1. Finish stories that you start. 2. For multi-chapter stories, post your chapters on a schedule (Ex. Every Mon/Wed/Fri until done) 3. Respond nicely to comments you get. 4. Try and boost your work on the weekends. 5. Try your best not to compare yourself to others. 6. Keep posting for a long time. 7. Have at least one long-running series if possible if you’re doing original work. ~~~ And that’s everything I’ve got. My handle on DeviantArt is Zero-CZ by the way. Good luck everyone!

>>11429 1) did u take down your father/daughter story 2) can you reshare it here

>>11457 I regretfully have to say that DeviantArt deleted "Perfection" due to the content. I'm so sorry. I wasn't given a warning or anything. I never delete any of my stories because you never know who wants to reread content. About 6 years ago, my USB drive corrupted, and that's where I kept a chunk of my very old stories as backups. Perfection was among the files lost so I don't have a copy. Again, I'm super sorry for the inconvenience.

>>8316 Hey, glad you liked it! A part 2 is a possibility, but if you wanna make it a certainty, you can always commission me ;)

>>7812 I dont remember the name, but homestar123 has 3/4 parts of a secretary story thats exactly this with plans to do the last part when their current story is done. They also did a few parts in the CYOA polarisdreamer organized a bit ago that was great. The path was daughter gains, then realizes she gained.

>>7812 https://www.deviantart.com/reallynicegains/art/Erika-s-Fatal-Feeding-Health-Issues-WG-903552953 the absolute best of this mini genre

>>7812 Anyone have the one where the main character is nearing immobility and says she regrets reaching that point? There's a part in the story where she legitimately can't get up, and is brought into her bedroom knowing it's the only place she'll ever be again (and gets stuck in the door in the process)

This author uses regretful weight gain a lot in their stories. https://www.deviantart.com/zattbatt/art/Brianna-the-Blimp-1019783514 https://www.deviantart.com/zattbatt/art/Tremendous-Tiffany-1010591800 https://www.deviantart.com/zattbatt/art/Big-Brooke-984141876

I’ve recently come to realize that I’m a huge fan of “hyper-consumerism” scenarios, where society at large becomes large, where systemic corporate obesity at the hands of omnipresent fast food markets and technological convenience making people too indulgent and lazy to want to do anything but sit around and grow fatter and fatter with each passing moment… Idk, seems cool.

I've been liking the idea of advertising becoming increasingly sexualized but only featuring women that are at least skinnyfat

>>11171 The Machine Stops by EM Forster is one of the earliest classic sci fi stories and could easily be adapted for this.

>>11174 It makes sense that in a fattened society, or at least a society on the brink of embracing fatness, the old beauty models would still slightly hold

>>11171 Somebody wrote a really great story in that vein years ago: https://www.deviantart.com/football123/art/Consumer-491327755 The promised a sequel, but never delivered.

I believe this is the story you're looking for? https://curvage.org/forum/index.php?/forums/topic/26447-the-munchies/#comment-338307

Still holding out hope for all 3 parts of "More 2 Love, More 2 Gain" by Big Chris.

>>11032 That's it! Thank you!

Does anyone have the trainer by uncle jack ?

Does anyone have "The Arrangement" by Da Games Elite?