>>288969
I do screenplay and script tune ups as a side job on top of writing for a YT channel. That is to say, yes, I can, and I'm certain I could do better with the given story. Not exactly a high bar though.
That being said, if LTAF or anyone else is interested; Disc is anonymousanonymoose
>>288972
There's potential in the main trio.
>>288981
>>288983
You just answered yourself lmao. Likely just some weight loss/workout pills or something of the sort that made Tessa bloated and lethargic. She doesn't remember anything that happened, and I highly doubt Tessa would agree to take drugs that would wear on her like that. So Tania likely drugged her.