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>>13194 I personally love to she Shouta get huge and also get fat and slobby. As I think it be cute as he try to deny it.

I love this genre tbh but there's so few stories. Idk if incest ruins it for any of you but there was a great story on the old chan about a son being fattened up by his slim mom against the wishes of his fitness nut dad. I believe it was called "mommy's boy". It was promising but only ever got a few chapters. Absolutely love the Miss Patty series... wish it continued.

>>13194 Bump

>>12415 Took some digging around Wayback, but I found it, but it either wasn't finished, or wasn't entirely archived. https://web.archive.org/web/20161107064926/http://bbw-chan.net/elite/res/3137.html Looking through Wayback using the old .nl and .net extensions is also a good way to try and track down older stuff.

What do you guys like in these sorts of stories, in terms of feeders for the shotas? Moms? Sisters? Grandmothers? A third party, like in the Miss Patty series? Maybe a servant, if the boy in question is rich/royalty?

>>13492 All of the above. Stepmother is good too if written well.

>>13492 You forgot babysitter or older student.

>>13492 You could also add the teacher or a friend that makes them gain weight unknowingly.

>>11155 Hah, looked at that guy, thought some of it sounded familiar, and sure enough its the "Pigdawg" guy, aka Shangas. He's a prick, though admittedly a prolific one. Used to write on writing.com , I RP'd with him but he quickly became kind of insufferable

>>13492 >Maybe a servant, if the boy in question is rich/royalty? Come to think of it, are there any really good "spoiled fat prince" stories? You'd think there'd be a bunch of them, but I can only really think of one off the top of my head, and to me, at least, it wasn't very good.

>>13512 There was one on FF about a queen fattening up her Prince, it was OK. Think it's scrubbed now though. It was called Royal Indulgences iirc

>>13521 Hmm. We might need to rectify that. Surely "fat, spoiled prince with legions of servants and doting king/queen parents" should be fodder for a lot of content? Short stories, vignettes, and such?

>>12420 Hell yeah, kind of gives a big size difference dynamic too. I love it when the ssbbw dominates the shota too.

We need more fat shota storys

>>13785 me too i want to write some shota stories but idk how to start writing.. i really want to write one shots or full stories

>>13788 Just start typing, Anon. Find something you'd like to depict, and depict it. I was actually inspired by >>13523 and I'm currently writing a spoiled prince story. Will have some slob elements. I'll post it here when I'm done.

>>13785 >>13790 well just in case of being a larper and sharing a little bit of a planned story... I really find cute this little boy, look at his face, he's perfectly good to this kind of stuff and well one idea that i want to explore thanks to a user of X its that well He got depression from the pain and mourning of the death of her mother so he ask Shinjiro how to make him feel less sad... so this stupid guy show him a videos of fat girls being feeding and the young Ken amada starts to feel something inside and having his first erection, so he start to consume this kind of stuff but sooner than later he starts to do something more, something more profund, so he ask to Shinjiro to start to feed him and encourage him to make him fat... (yeah i know its kinda shitty but i like this scenario and for not being so worried i planned to do some rough sketches, just to not being so hard to read. what do you think?

>>13790 I can't wait to see your story of a fat slobby prince

>>13842 You're in luck, Anon. I finished it just the other day. Here it is: https://rentry.org/wkz373ne

>>13846 This is absolutely incredible! Do you plan to do more writing or have in the past? As I love to see all of it. Definitely love to discuss for fat slobby shotas with you

>>13846 Elbert was very cute but I could help but imagine you writing a fat slobby boy like him who eas even younger.

>>11132 Agreed, GOAT dynamic. I know of a few. -Momma's Boy which was posted on here or the old site. About a mother fattening up her son and driving his fitness fanatic father crazy. Unfinished of course. -"Philip's Room" by rrrtree on Fantasy Feeder. Not explicitly shota but older woman, dumb young doughball dynamic is there. -"Royal Indlugences" was also on Fantasy Feeder but since deleted. A queen doting on her son the prince. Unfinished again but a good start. I really wish there were more stories like these. If you know any, let me know.

>>13860 Have you got a link to mommy's boy?

>>13860 Can you link these?

There aren't enough deathfeederism stories

>>13863 >>13865 I was hoping some of you brainiacs could figure out how to retrieve them. Momma's boy was posted on the old bbwchan, on elite, in an incest thread. Maybe 4 years ago, idk. Royal indulgences was posted on fantasy feeder maybe 10 years ago. Don't know who the author was.

>>13791 hey, wanna rp about this?

>>13492 Less grandmothers but thats more an age cutoff as I tend to aim more for some form of lewding.

Found Momma's Boy: https://pastebin.com/Mvu3R840 https://pastebin.com/VFZPsymx https://pastebin.com/KnTYbcAn https://pastebin.com/6DrTumFn https://pastebin.com/6JLqP5gF

>>13905 Sheesh, this was sadder and less fun than I expected it to be.

>>13905 Only the first link works.

>>13207 When you said that I thought of a different one, on fantasy feeder - Apron Strings https://web.archive.org/web/20180210215034/http://fantasyfeeder.com/stories/view?id=184615 He's 16, so you might not call it full shota

>>13915 That is promising, wish I could find the whole thing

>>13916 All the chapters are saved, just opens a new tab each time you click the pages at the bottom

>>13919 How? It doesn't work for me.

>>13919 >>13920 Doesn't work for me either. Any clue what I'm doing wrong?.

not too long ago i found a few shota blueberry stories on archiveofourown all made by the same account, one of them had the reader climbing up the berry boy and getting a blowjob from memory. can’t seem to find any of them now though, anyone seen these?

>>13921 >>13920 Okay, this is very weird - that's page 1, and every other page is... for some reason on another archiver, which is the one that worked like that (the buttons do work here, but I'll link, seeing as I tested them) - I'd gotten them confused, possibly because it doesn't have the first page. Ah well, got a re-read in https://archive.ph/Duumd - page 2 https://archive.ph/ANIb7 - 3 https://archive.ph/f4XLS - 4 https://archive.ph/Acf3p - 5 https://archive.ph/pabNL - 6 https://archive.ph/pT7J6 - 7 https://archive.ph/yfpPE - 8 https://archive.ph/hZ2wx - 9 https://archive.ph/C9ZOL - 10 https://archive.ph/83iih - 11 https://archive.ph/3xgas - 12 https://archive.ph/qMxt4 - 13 https://archive.ph/VkrSx -14

>>13905 Good stuff

>>13927 Thanks for the help. This was overall a nice read, but unfortunately falls into the same trope in many of these stories that I dislike, namely depicting an older boy character and making him dumber and infantilized as the weight gain progresses. Just once I would like to read a story with a male teen character that actually talks and behaves like one. I can understand why the author would want to show the teen becoming more immature as he is spoiled, but an immature teen behaves very differently from a toddler, which is how many of these stories write these older characters. These writers were definitely teens at some point, so it can't be too hard to imagine how they would behave if they were spoiled with endless food.

>>13931 Nothing here has come close to Miss Patty IMO. Maybe because it realistically depicts her feelings on the situation. How secretive she is and afraid of being found out but can't resist her attraction.

>>13936 Speaking for myself, it's also hot how she basically gets away with it. She takes care and covers her tracks to such an extent that nobody suspects her fattening of Brandon is deliberate. It's very devious and that adds to the hotness for me.

>>13936 >>13940 Yeah I think it's hot for the same reason, but it has the same problem where Brandon loses too much IQ by the end of the story. It would be way hotter if he was more "aware" of what was going on and acted more like a willing accomplice.

>>13931 Fair, yeah it works in what the story is going for but I totally understand wanting the main character to be more in line with their age (even if immature) than being made totally childlike. One place i do remember now for some good stuff is writing.com's Your Fat Family - most (in)famous for the Susan branch and its slobby ends, there's a few okay paths for Greg Jr (13), and in the Mary (toddler daughter) branch she has a friend Dan (5) who has some really good chapters. There's also a short but neat branch for Billy, a random cousin. I recommend the archive viewer (https://107.189.28.249/ ) over actual writing.com for reading, seeing as how shit that site has become

A related dynamic I really like is shota feeders. Innocent/unaware is fun, but especially evil or malicious shotas feeding and corrupting their older brothers/dads/teachers/etc is top tier. I like the dynamic so much I can even enjoy the occasional mom/older sister fic, which is saying something.

Could you post links to any stories you have like that? Specifically of shotas fattening up a sister/mother? I haven't read anything like that and it sounds fun

>>13955 Could you post links to any stories you have like that? Specifically of shotas fattening up a sister/mother? I haven't read anything like that and it sounds fun

>>13959 I don't keep close track of the M/F ones, but pixiv is usually a good bet. They have a lot on Japanese, but you can use Google translate on them: https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=8490157 https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=28472907 There are also a handful of English authors there (slob warning): https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=15700369

>>13931 yeah. there should be stories where the teenager is horny the way teenagers can be

I've come across stories before with the following plot: a mother is feeder, she fattened her husband, he's very fat. The son makes fun of them or says it's unhealthy, the mother decides to punish him by locking him in the basement and force-feeding him. Has anyone preserved such stories?