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Evangelion wg fics Anonymous 10/15/2022 (Sat) 19:11:15 No. 5203
looking for evengelion fics especially zerpz's fics though open for any others as well. here is a copy of zerpz's twin moons https://pastebin.com/7dtCuLzC
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>>6056 >Anyone has FC-Punk "Asuka & Shinji, The Fat Couple"?? We never did get this. I didn't even know it existed until I stumbled on it during a completely random Bing search.
>>8548 It's on Kemono, brez
>>8719 What's his name on there? I tried searching and couldn't find it
>>8947 Just "FC Punk" Here's a link https://kemono.su/patreon/user/6827110
They deleted the shinji topic in bhm, does anyone have all the stories posted there?
im a dumbass and dont know how to post here
>>9113 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ncwdi2f_yTKCTdn_A0TmWc59uevdbAmrx_SpQhS9UzU/edit?usp=sharing I only have up to the Asuka chapter
>>9150 two of the last ones are still in my history https://rentry.org/77hop https://rentry.org/otx7bw6g
>>9179 Wasn't there one with Mari, which was supposed to be the formal ending to the "storyline" of all the Rentry stories?
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>>9181 I actually managed to find it. Combined with the links everyone else has posted, this should be all of them: https://rentry.org/caaai
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>>9150 >>9179 >>9181 >>9199 Okay, so: in the aftermath of what FC has collected, there was one more story, the Mari story that finishes everything off. I recall the author saying that he wanted the Mari story to be the climax of the whole thing since it thematically ended things off. The story where Shinji is getting his nails painted seems to have been an "extra" story, not part of the "storyline" of Shinji gradually succumbing to Kaworu's pampering and fattening. Mostly because he just doesn't seem to be as huge as he is in the Asuka story or the Mari story. And also the Mari story says "The (Very) End" at the end, while the story of ultra-feminine Shinji does not. I think the story of Shinji getting his nails painted represents "bonus content" that is not essential to the overall storyline of the Rentry pastes from that thread. I think that thread's proper "storyline" ends with the story where Mari appears at the end. So if you wanted to collect it as a complete whole, you'd end with the Mari story, and the story of Shinji in the pink muumuu getting his nails painted would be bonus content.
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There needs to be a story where Kaworu fattens up Shinji and marries him. Imagine him waddling down the aisle in a tent-sized wedding dress with the veil bunching up around his fat ass. I was actually reading FC's story "Bridal Weight" the other day and it occurred to me that Shinji would be a great protagonist for a story like that.
>>9113 Excellent news, everyone: I've managed to find an archive of that thread. https://a.architect.coffee/bhm/thread/2036/ It not only has EVERY link to EVERY story, but they're all in chronological order, which helps with putting the overarching narrative together in a coherent fashion.
>>9530 Great! Someone should make a new thread in BHM for Shinji
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>>9543 Sadly, the entire reason the original thread got deleted is that there is apparently a cabal of junior moderators going around getting threads about underage male characters on /bhm/ deleted. It's why the original MHA thread got deleted, too. Frankly it drives me up the fucking wall. I'm sure they're organizing on a Discord somewhere, and the fact that they seem to have the backing of /bhm/'s mods makes it even more infuriating. It's not even the exact nature of what they're up to. In theory I have no objection to banning threads about underage characters. But if there's one thing I hate on the internet, it's junior moderators. A bunch of snitching busybodies. I bet they all volunteered to be hall monitors in school.
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Writer of the Shinji Rentry stories here. Thanks for all the hard work you guys did recovering all my stuff. And thanks especially for that archive that has all of them. Very handy. I've mostly retired from writing Shinji and I won't be pursuing another big-ass story arc. As others have noted, the particularly storyline of Shinji getting impossibly huge culminates in the final story where Mari appears at the end, and then walks off, leaving Shinji doomed to Kaworu's clutches forever. A Bad End, but one he brought upon himself with his own greed and thirst for consequence-free affection. Turned out to be not so consequence-free after all, didn't it? But I do still occasionally get random ideas for stories. In particular, two have come to mind over the last few months, and I wrote them out, so I thought I'd share them here: https://rentry.org/txf7ysnb https://rentry.org/pvb7h4om First one has sodomy and toilet stuff, second one does not. Second one might actually be my favorite I've ever written; I think I did a good job on it.
>>9682 Hey I totally adore these and all your stories really. I was wondering do you write other wg fics? Like have you done other storys for male or female characters beside Shinji as I love to see them! I totally adore your wg and slob stuff so much and love to see if you got anything else
>>9705 Thanks for your support, Anon! I haven't written much, but I've got a few more Rentry stories. There's an Avatar one starring Azula, Mai, and Ty Lee: https://rentry.org/32w52 And a short Overwatch story about D.Va: https://rentry.org/vsx6u
>>9710 Absolute top tier writing. I adored these so so so much. I look forward to see what else you write in the future.
Anybody have any good Ritsuko weight gain stories? Feels like in comparison to Misato and the pilots she hardly gets anything. I do like how in several stories she's a feeder. But it would be nice to have some stories where she herself gets fat, too.
>>9838 Writer of the Shinji stories here. Speaking of Ritsuko, I've been coming back around lately to her occasional presence in this universe. Readers of the original story arc will remember that Ritsuko gradually made some appearances as the story went along. My idea is that, after Kaworu abducted Shinji from Tokyo-3, NERV and SEELE's plans kind of collapsed all at once, and the various other characters of Eva scattered to the winds. Some of them wound up with Shinji and Kaworu in California. Ritsuko is among them, but it turns out she's a fatty lover herself, so rather than try to rat the two of them out, she tags along with them out of a perverted delight for how obese Shinji has become. She makes an interesting third wheel and I've grown to like her perspective being added to scenarios. So I've written two new stories where she plays a prominent role. Here's one that emphasizes something even the anime itself loves to point out: that Shinji has a really, really small penis: https://rentry.org/mktc2znr And here's another one, addressing something people have probably wondered at in the past: just what's the deal with Shinji being incontinent? How does he feel about it? You might be intrigued by the answer: https://rentry.org/rorfg2td Anyway, Ritsuko's a lot of fun to include in these scenarios. I may be inspired to write more with her in the future.
>>10015 Another amazing story! Keep it up. I adore your writting style and just everything about your storys. Love how much you degrade Shinji! Love all the slob elements so much. I can't wait for your next story. Also any way I could possible chat with you and or discuss story ideas? I just love your writting so much. I could drop my discord or something else if you want.
>>10015 Great stuff, really liking the emphasis on his dependence and docility, very fun aspects to explore - especially how willing and happy he is to be made into a helpless hog
>>10099 Oh, yeah, he's delighted by it. As I've said before, Shinji really just wants effortless affection without having to make himself vulnerable. That's his entire thing. Kaworu gives it to him, and so Shinji allows himself to be molded by Kaworu into his ideal plaything. Shinji is completely happy to be made dependent and docile; Kaworu has tamed him with love and bent hm to his will. Shinji is happy to be a fat, incontinent pet because he's awash in Kaworu's love at all times. He wallows in Kaworu's affection like he wallows in his own feces. Thinking about Evangelion fics more broadly, I suspect you could potentially do something similar with Asuka. Asuka is more like Shinji than she'd ever want to admit. She, too, craves affection, because it was denied her at a young age just like it was denied to Shinji. And she, too, is afraid of opening herself up and getting hurt, because she's been hurt in the past, most pointedly by her mother's suicide. I think you could easily put Asuka into a situation similar to Shinji, where she's a kept and fattened pet, docile and domesticated. The thing she lacks is a figure like Kaworu. Kaworu is really perfect for turning Shinji into a kept fat pet, and Asuka doesn't really have a character like that in her own storyline. She doesn't have anybody who shows up to offer her endless affection and love with no hard work for her to do in return, and no strings attached. If you could conjure up a character like that for a fic, I think you could use such a character to get Asuka roughly where Shinji is in these stories. With Rei it's a bit different because Rei is the opposite of 'abandoned,' the way Asuka and Shinji are. Rei has been part of a plot, a plan, a scheme, her entire existence. Her entire time at NERV, under Gendo and Naoko and Ritsuko's thumbs, she's been merely useful, doing what she was told rather than what she ever wanted herself. So my suspicion is that a really in-character Rei weight gain story would involve her gaining weight of her own volition, doing so as a free choice of her will, rather than being caressed and pampered into it like Shinji and Asuka. For Shinji and Asuka, being fed into obesity is an act of submission; for Rei it would be an act of defiance. I can imagine a story where she finds out about the world of feederism and decides to give it a try herself just to make a free choice on her part.
>>10115 I definitely enjoyed the parts where he was still a little mobile and continent, but Kaworu encourages him to be lazy and let go - it combines three of my favourite fatty tropes: 1) wilfull laziness/choosing to be "worse", 2) comfortable dependence, being perfectly happy being taken care of, and 3) that being matched by being spoiled rotten. Obviously you've written Shinji as perfect for this trifecta and it's great. I think if it wasn't Kaworu, I've seen a few fics that take Rei's mom aspect and run with it, which is also great - her instinctual need to protect Shinji has her fatten him to uselessness, where he can't be a pilot - other making him useless, like babying him, to the author's taste. And yeah, for Rei to gain, unless it's a scheme for some plot (see PDC's "the pilots and their mechs need to be Hungry), more obvious route for gaining is rebellion
>>10151 Well I've dabbled a bit with him still being relatively mobile, and not having completely lost control of his bowels. I think I mentioned earlier that the "main story" of Kaworu fattening him to immobility is over, and so I've kind of been dancing all around the various stages of his growth in what I've written lately, sometimes with him smaller and more mobile and more continent, sometimes with him larger and less so. I posted this a while ago but try it on for size, it's a bit more of what you like: https://rentry.org/pvb7h4om
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>>10151 >I think if it wasn't Kaworu, I've seen a few fics that take Rei's mom aspect and run with it, which is also great - her instinctual need to protect Shinji has her fatten him to uselessness, where he can't be a pilot - other making him useless, like babying him, to the author's taste. Links to these? I think I'd love some stories of mothering Rei fattening and babying Shinji.
>>10168 Well, I checked some usual suspects (stories I've liked and saved etc.) there's not anything, maybe I'd just falsely remembered something that had been talked about. It's a good combo I think >>10159 Oddly enough that one (I've read before, overall fine) doesn't really scratch the itch I was after - the quite early one where he thinks he could get up, but Kaworu encouraged him to not strain himself so he pisses... more than the mobility/lack thereof it's the willful laziness that gets me. As said though, this is just me specifically
Continuing to hypothesize about what flavors of weight gain fit certain characters, it occurs to me that with Misato, if you wanted, you could add a certain self-destructive side to her getting fatter. Bring in things like slob and health issues in a very overt way. Misato has a fundamentally self-destructive nature. She thinks she's "dirty" and deserves to be dirty, because there's a part of her that thinks she shouldn't be alive; that she should have died during Second Impact, and didn't deserve for her father to sacrifice his life to save hers. You could imagine a scenario where she rather morbidly decides to eat herself to death. She figures she doesn't deserve to live, but she can at least commit suicide in the most indulgent and luxurious way possible. She's already used to indulging her appetites, it's easy for her to slip into gorging on sweets and treats and processed food. She'd probably welcome the failure of her health and fitness and take a morbid pleasure in the slow collapse of her body. You could potentially do something similar with Asuka, but I think Misato's the much better fit. When Asuka stops feeling the will to live, she withdraws herself and deprives herself. It seems much more in character for Misato to respond to losing the will to live by going on the mother of all hedonistic benders and deciding to eat and drink herself to death.
ton of eva BB stuff right here if anyone is interested. https://www.deviantart.com/bruhfunny1234/art/Misato-s-Blueberry-Misfortune-1137281932 https://www.deviantart.com/bruhfunny1234/art/Ritsuko-Catches-the-Blues-NGE-BB-expansion-1139712598 https://www.deviantart.com/bruhfunny1234/art/Rei-s-Delicious-Experimentation-NGE-BB-Expansion-1141423325 would lvoe critique or thought as this is my first time writing erotic works.
Shinji writefag here, I may be settling into a new groove with him. I'm finding myself really enjoying writing him as Kaworu's pampered gay pet. Fatter and more decadent and more homosexual than ever. It's like he's completely lost, like he's forgotten that he ever might have even wanted to do things the "hard way" like at the end of the anime or the end of End Of Evangelion. It's fun writing him as fully Kaworu's creature, actually begging Kaworu to take total control of his life. So in that vein, here's some stories of this totally-captured Shinji doing the three things he does best: Eating https://rentry.org/zi749k83 Shitting https://rentry.org/8r9yxeex Getting fucked in the ass https://rentry.org/ddeom328 Hope you enjoy.
>>10177 https://www.deviantart.com/sir-wales/art/Rewrite-of-Evangelion-SSBBW-Slob-Health-Issues-965097554 This story is exactly what you're seeking.
>>10225 Love this so much keep up the amazing work! If you do any stuff thats not eva post it to or link to it as I love your stuff so so much.
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>>10265 Thank you, Anon, that's very kind of you to say. You know, it's funny: when I go back over to 4chan, and participate in the Eva discussions there, I'm reminded all over again of why I keep writing things like this. There's no escaping an honest analysis of Shinji and Kaworu's relationship that concludes it would be bad for Shinji in the long run. Stunting, infantilizing, amplyfing Shinji's self-centerdness and tendency to refuse to take risks. It's all right there in the actual anime. If you add in the detail that Kaworu has a fondness for fat guys, then everything that's happened in the stories I've written becomes an easy extrapolation from canon. One of the reasons I like writing these stories is BECAUSE they build so naturally off of what's actually in the anime. I don't really have to make anybody OOC, least of all Shinji himself. It really feels natural that if Kaworu had taken Shinji away from Tokyo-3, and kept him as his own somewhere, something like these stories would have occurred. Assuming Kaworu was a fan of fatties, of course. If I have one regret, it's that I haven't inspired too many other writers of similar stories. I myself was inspired by FC-Punk's Shinji/Kaworu content, and it would be nice if there were someone else around putting out weight gain and slob content featuring these characters. Many hands make light work, after all.
>>10281 Well if you ever want some one to talk to and discuss idea with I love to. As your story have 100% inspired me and I have some ideas you may like. I can give you my discord or another way if you want. Just reply back to this and I will reply back with it attached
>>10281 Actually FC punk has done a lot of small Shinji prompts recently in his server like this. Like quite a lot.
>>10313 On that note: https://www.deviantart.com/fc-punk/art/Kaworu-and-Shinji-Drabbles-1147694431
>>10316 And one more for the road: https://rentry.org/h8e8rivn
>>10323 This is so so good! Please keep up the amazing work! Love to see any of your new storys shinji or not.
>>10562 I wrote these a little while ago: https://rentry.org/z8ey4zfz https://rentry.org/g2d5ibcz https://rentry.org/eys4z5a6 One thing I've really enjoyed exploring in a lot of these newer stories is just how happy and content Shinji is with his extremely unusual situation. He's extremely obese, completely incontinent, incredibly homosexual, and almost totally helpless. But he's having the time of his life, because he's completely surrendered to being cared for by Kaworu. Being Kaworu's kept pet fulfills him profoundly, hence why his attitude is so delighted and saccharine. It's easy to write him as almost childlike, like he's regressed into a childish simplicity because he's just so totally helpless and he loves it. It feels very appropriate and in-character given where he's wound up.
>>10617 Curious, are you going to introduce Misato into this? I would imagine she would be just as corrupt as Ritsuko regarding the new Shinji
>>10637 Misato I've struggled with for a number of reasons. One of them is somewhat sentimental, I must confess. I think Misato represents a kind of healthy path forward for Shinji. I always have, as long as I've been an Eva fan. Maybe somewhat romantically but not even necessarily so; rather, just as someone who cared for Shinji and rooted for him to succeed. Obviously their relationship is a lot more complicated than that, and Misato's no perfect person. But she represents a positive force in Shinji's life, I feel. This makes her a bit out of place in this scenario, because under Kaworu's spell Shinji's life has taken a turn for the worse under the themes of Eva. As I've mentioned, Shinji's life as Kaworu's fat, gay pet is a rejection of the themes Neon Genesis Evangelion tries to assert. Eva says that you have to learn to reach out and connect with people even when you risk rejection and getting hurt. Shinji has retreated into the risk-free, effortless affection Kaworu gives him, and has been molded into a creature of pure appetites and fully released inhibitions. The Shinji of these stories is a failure from the perspective of what Eva as a show is trying to say. So Misato, who's integral in Shinji's journey to becoming the kind of person who can breach the Hedgehog's Dilemma, is out of place in a setting where Shinji has rejected the Dilemma entirely. At best, I can see her appearing like Rei appears in the story where she does: appearing to be stunned and dismayed at what's become of Shinji. But Misato wouldn't agree to leave Shinji in Kaworu's clutches like Rei ultimately does. She'd fight. So in the interest of writing simply easy fetish stories, she's more complicated than I'd prefer to tackle in stories like these. Also, you mention she'd be corrupt like Ritsuko, but I don't think so. Misato has a core of purity to her that Ritsuko is revealed to lack. Ritsuko is easy to corrupt into going along with Shinji's ruined state. So is Asuka, because of the disdain for Shinji that she always has in her back pocket. Rei can't be corrupted like that, and neither can Misato. So, at best, Misato would be a one-off appearance, I feel. The third major reason I haven't thrown Misato in here is because of the "lore" around these stories that I've half-heartedly committed to. By taking Shinji away from NERV, Kaworu has upended both NERV and SEELE's plans. Without Shinji, Unit-01 doesn't work, and so Instrumentality can't happen. This has probably caused a kind of collapse of both NERV and SEELE, and the characters we're familiar with have scattered to the winds as a result. I've had a half-baked idea that some unfortunate fate befell Misato as a result of the collapse of SEELE and NERV. That's another reason she hasn't shown up yet. Honestly, there's part of me now that wants to write some separate weight gain stories with Misato as the star, set in this same continuity. Maybe with the collapse of the world she's used to, as a result of Shinji's abduction, she'd get rather fat and slobby herself.
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Author of the Shinji weight gain stories here. I have something else for you guys. Something different, though still on-topic to this thread. Something I've been playing around with for a while but have finally managed to generate a story out of. Let me know what you think: https://rentry.org/wpkwfyfe
>>10670 This is amazing! I adore your writing style so all your storys have been so good. I don't mind if there not shinji or eva related at all. Just keep up the amazing work
>>10670 Sounds like a setup for a double date
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>>10687 Ha, that would be something, wouldn't it? The two Angels and their fat gay pets. Might be fun, I might have to try writing that. Though I'm not sure yet if Asuka in this scenario is really lesbian for Rei or not. Shinji's completely gay for Kaworu at this point but Asuka may merely see Rei as a friend and caretaker. A surrogate mother figure, essentially, someone to pamper and tend to her in her obese dotage. Rei, meanwhile, is more attracted to Asuka's decline than anything, I think she enjoys Asuka being a fat wreck because she gets to tend to her. I did write up here >>10115 that I could easily see Asuka falling into exactly the same scenario as Shinji. The two of them are not so different, psychologically; Asuka's bravado from the beginning of NGE is all a facade, as we see, and she's as needy and desperate for affection as Shinji in her own way. I always knew, as a result, that there was a vector to her becoming a fat, coddled pet just like I was writing Shinji. I just needed someone to do the coddling. I needed a character who could be to Asuka what Kaworu was to Shinji in my stories. I couldn't figure out who it would be, who would be the best fit. It couldn't be Hikari because Hikari's tied to the "normal" side of Eva and would never go in for this sort of deviant manipulation. I thought briefly of maybe introducing a human form of one of the Angels, probably Arael given its unique place in Asuka's mental and physical collapse in the show. I don't know why it took me this long to realize that I could just use Rei. Granted, the two of them are not friends in the show, far from it. But Rei's a motherly character, as Shinji himself observes in the anime, and having a fat pet around to pamper and spoil seems right up her alley. Not to mention I can see her getting off on Asuka's slow physical collapse as obesity wrecks her health. My idea is that Rei is essentially pampering Asuka to death and really enjoying it, because it fulfills her motherhood impulse and also breaks the pride of the girl who always annoyed her. Also, she's got all the Angel powers Kaworu does, or at least Rei 3 has them. She's got the superhuman strength and the AT Field manipulation, which is quite handy for dealing with an obese, unhealthy, incontinent pet. It really does work out quite nicely. I will probably write more Asuka and Rei fics. And that double date is a fun idea. Between Shinji and Asuka, I wonder who would soil themselves first.
>>10694 I adore this idea and totally get what your saying! I think Rei is a little jealous she didn't get pamper and ruin Shinji and wants the do the same to Asuka. I don't think Asuka is gay for rei at all, as like you said Asuka see her as friend/motherly figure. Deep down Asuka probably wants a fat boy or a male feeder as her bf. I would also love to see Asuka mess herself first as she her blush bright red and try and defend herself as the other tease her would be so hot!
>>10694 Also personally I have always seen Asuka as a bottom and gut heavy girl as I love the idea of shinji have way bigger boobs than her, well hers look like moobs. As it's such a hot dynamic!
>>10694 I like the idea of Asuka still being a brat and trying to keep up her tough girl persona but she can't always, as she just loves being taken care of and loved so much. Unlike Shinji she is not proud of her terrible gas or bowels.
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>>10717 >>10718 >>10719 Thanks for your support, Anon. Here, have another story: https://rentry.org/26dtr5mh

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