/bbwdraw/ - BBW Drawn

Pix writes dialogue like he's writing for an epic screen play instead of a comic. Even for a novel it would be too much. It wouldn't be so bad if the things they say actually established personality/character, but they don't. It's just pages and pages of Pix talking to himself. It's not pacing, it's getting lost in a schizo monologue until he's like 'Oh this scene should probably go somewhere else I guess'

>>320636 Dont you hate it when the rumbles from your gameboard's stomach makes all the pieces get shuffled around

>>320728 does anyone actually jerk off to this?

yep fun is over, time for another 300 pages of text wall bloat see you guys next year

>>320728 I am very well aware that expecting good story telling from a fetish wg comic is absurd but I am feeling like log myu has too many moments where it relies on the idiot plot trope to make the story go certain directions. Myu doesn't like Maya and knows she didnt like her as a kid. Intact Maya is why Myu has became thin and has her eating issue. So why does she think it is now a good idea to go to the one person who put her in her biggest predicament in the first place. I know my is desperate for a feeder but this is pathetic.

>>320864 Myu's definitely being OOC for the sake of the plot. I feel like this is leading up to Maia rejecting her because she's actually feeding Myu's Linker that she abandoned ages ago. Either that, or it's going to be revealed that Maia was using her own Linker for the GKL, and can't feed her now that she's technically a competitor. Or maybe it's actually both, because Maia did mention the idea of a "fat Linker harem" before. She might have an entire Linker team, and Myu's going to have to gain to absurd levels just to even stand a chance. Either way, it feels like this is mostly being done to resolve some dangling plot threads set up earlier on. The whole love interest thing feels more like a way to get from point A to point b.

>>320912 I feel the rejection will come from Ilya since she's also involved with the linker if I recall and she may lust for that more than myu now

>>320936 Honestly I feel like that'd be a bit much for this comic. That would make Ilya look irredeemably shallow. Maia is at least upfront about her obsession with Linkers, but imagine being dumped for a glorified blow up doll version of yourself. That's not something a character can really come back from. Plus if Pix is committing to this asexual romance thing for Myu, that basically cuts off any sensible endgame for her unless... ...Oh shit, we're heading for a Zeka harem end, aren't we? Myu wants "romance" but no sex, while Nadette wants sex but isn't interested beyond that. It's the only option where every party involved gets to have their cake and eat it too.

>>320912 >>320974 Wow, difference in the level of detail is pretty noticeable when they’re practically side by side. Also I’m a little concerned about what is in that box.

>>320974 >>320981 My guess is a feeding tube. Hospitals use to force feed patients who cannot or will not eat.

>>321091 Myu would be the last one against that, though. She literally used a feeding tube while she was connected to her Linker.

>>321219 Yeah and it almost killed her

>>321219 Actually myu has been super against a feeding tube for a while (if I remember right even before the linker event) so it definitely could be one

>>321257 I lost all interest in this comic. Is there a reason to be excited about it?

>>321257 Log myu: why?

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>>321478 Well, that's an egregious way to bring up Myu's trauma—

>>321708 Okay, Lan, stop, you're making Myu uncomfortable—

>>321708 Ngl this scene is pissing me off, like, myu damn near felt like she died. Screw her trying to get fat! Currently, she is trying her damn best not to have a nervous breakdown and I'm frankly impressed she held on for this long! I don't need a whole arc dedicated to her going to a psychologist about it, but either don't include the detail of her being traumatized or add a panel where she mentions going to therapy for it. Look I'm not a storywriter, but there has GOT to be a better way to go about this than this tomfuckery. C'mon Pix, I know you know your story writing abilities better than Kip's, like... c'mon. That's not a high bar.

>>321909 please god just electrocute all these people expecting more lore and less weight gain out of these comics that keep clogging the fucking board. I beg of you, it's like a disease

>>321949 Look I'm not saying there shouldn't be weight gain in a weight gain comic, I'm not mentally stunted. What Bewilders me here is the direction pix is trying to take this. Like it's very confusing. It wants to be a WG comic, but at the same time, it's presenting itself like it's a story about getting over past trauma and acceptance. Like ok sure, it can be both, but in this case it seems like the story aspect is trying to take over the WG one. Personally I'm here to see bitches get fat. And tbh, after the 30-ish page lore dump we just had like 2 months ago, I'm not exactly keen on having another lore session right now. This trauma arc is just annoying me because, while realistic, this is not what we came here for. The pacing should be better. If pix wanted to do lore dumps, they could've omitted some stuff and let the readers figure it out, not included it at all or just weave it in better with fanservice. This isn't a log myu issue, it's a bad comicwriting issue. You're not writing a novel Pix, you're writing a comic. You have to trust the readers have some reading comprehension when making comics. TL;DR I agree with you, but the pacing issues are fucking killing me

>>322285 I hope there's some actual sexual tension later between these two later and they get on some tube feeding sessions with some belly worship and belly rubs, ngl. But it won't be the case, most likely. I hope I'm wrong.

>>322286 yeah otherwise is just gonna be to another awkward stretch.

>>322473 I have a good idea. Let's ponder on this funnel for the rest of the year only for Myu to decide that it would be too fast and that she has to find a better fit for someone to feed her because ???

>>322484 I bet you still sleep with a nightlight and ask your parents if you can eat cake for dinner... There's this thing called 'foreplay,' where you build up to what you're going to do with words in order to make a heated situation more gratifying. It's something you use to break up the obvious parts of porn so that you can appreciate who it's happening to. Without any investment in it, the same sequence would never bore you, and you could just spend your time cranking it to that instead of whining about how this story needs time to simmer. But seriously, if you binge this story and pay attention to the fact that these "pages" are actually half the length of an actual page, you'd see that the pace is pretty steady up and down. You're just annoyed because you're impatient, and those of us with patience find your commentary on the pacing annoying; like whining about how you'd rather eat cold soup with raw chicken in it than soup with cooked chicken that had time to cool down.

>>322504 Oh yeah and the build up to Myu getting fed by Lan had quite the payoff huh? Pix does has his moments but at almost 800 pages,the pattern is evident. most of this scenes get stretched far beyond their own momentum. And the fact other artists in the medium are also following somewhat this model of stalling their long running comics, the fatigue is getting real.

>>322504 I'd be better off binging One Piece, because even if it's a slog each episode at least has a payoff. The reason these comics are a problem is that it takes a full on year or more to even get a single payoff, and they're DESIGNED that way. Also based on Pix's history with this comic, foreplay means nothing. Myu is very likely to turn down the entire situation and just waste everyone's time because that's happened over and over already.

>>322570 >I'd be better off binging One Piece, because even if it's a slog each episode at least has a payoff. Just stop right there. The pacing of LogMyu sucks because Pixiveo is slow at building up plot points and each page is released every few weeks to month. Making it feel longer. If you went back and read Log Myu from the beginning to now it wouldn't be that long, each page would take hardly a minute to read through. One Piece is long because it is the same shot from a different angle 20 times in slightly slowed motion without any pay off. >inb4 "oh but Luffy got his SSJ look alike form after 6000 episodes" Who fucking cares, the story makes no sense, goes no where, and takes literally takes months to watch all of when binge watched sequentially.

>>322605 If these comics are going to take that long, that's exactly why pacing matters the most. It's not just Pix doing it is the bigger issue. Artists are handing us 1/4 of a standard comic page and wasting both ours and their time. If you're only going to update it 1-2 times a month it has to progress something, not just give us the next paragraph in a singular conversation. If we want to talk end goal, if you put Pix's comic together it still doesn't make sense. The linker stuff is gone, lots of story points and characters are gone because even Pix didn't want to waste time on it. It's just a gargled mess and it took MANY years to get here. Even if a physical copy ended up on a shelf 99% of people that see it will be like "????" A singular pin-up, a simple B&A, or a sequence is much more valuable and easier to make. I know I'm bitching a lot about these comics but we HAVE to start phasing these long scam comics out before it gets worse.

>>322605 >Who fucking cares, the story makes no sense, goes no where, and takes literally takes months Motherfucker, thats Log Myu!

>>322605 If you cut half the total pages where you counted 2 Myu pages as only 1 traditional comic page. Log Myu is as long as some of the greatest comics and runs of all time. Nothing in this meandering mess of writing justifies its length and pacing.

>>322605 >Who fucking cares, the story makes no sense, goes no where, and takes literally takes months oh no it's illiterate

The log myu slog to me has been feeling worse since the secondary comic he is working on feels boring and uninteresting. If the second comic was better id probably feel more positive about waiting for the log myu comic to peogress at its current pace.

New LKCS!

>>323021 How come this comic can be this badly written? Is the redhead retarded? Or did Pixiveo AI generated conflict? Man i would even prefer for the other character to be trans and the redhead to distancing her self for that reason rather than what ever this is.

>>323028 Personally, I think it's actually rather well done. If you look at the last page, Kiyo with (even shorter) hair really looks like a boy, and it's clear Rumia has a hard time seeing inside of other people (her boyfriend, Kiyo at first). Only after interacting for years did she get some accurate reads on Kiyo (seen in the first pages).

>>323021 How was being a girl even a secret after all these years? Am I missing anything or is this just bad writing

>>323037 I am sorry but like the comment above me says, how come anybody with an iq higher than a roach is unable to realise their childhood friend is a girl? Is not like they got separated for long, it was only one summer! Is she blind? Retarded or again chat gpt is unable to write a good plot. Sorry I am really mad at this page

It seems someone forgot to add the page before, this is why I am so mad at this new page.

>>323054 >>323055 It's more retarded when you realize that there probably are likely instances of gender segregation like bathrooms or locker rooms for PE or sports so the excuse to not knowing is even lower.

>>323058 Forgot to say but I feel the cow dude who broke up with this moron is more relatable now. He's definitely better off without her.