/bbwdraw/ - BBW Drawn

>>315114 more so he's trying to subconsciously one up his past self and drag out his shithole series to deranged lengths and put more drive into the text than the gains as part of some delusion that he's NOT a failed writer and instead now bleeds his life away making middling quality chubby girl comics for the past 120 years until either his hands/heart mercifully give out on him

i was talking about this one , i cant find it anywhere only have this blurry one

>>315142 Holy cake

>>315142 Clothed version is better

>>315145 Christ if that's not bitterly sobering. What do you think made him this way? Did someone make an unflattering remark about his writing in like, 2010, and he just never let that go?

>>315150 Naked one is better both because of that and her hair being down

>>315140 cheers to good taste

>>315145 >kip schizoposting is so severe it goes into completely unrelated artist threads This is why I still come to bbwchan, you just can’t get autism like this elsewhere

Would be very sad if Salt made Breaking the scales into the same story but backwards (Brooke loses, Olive gains)

>>315205 exploring scenarios of contrast is what id like to see from this series most, rather than weight gain or loss i.e. showing how agile and able olive is becoming and comparing her to the slobby, lazy, greedy and dormant brooke has become, maybe with some contrast flashbacks about how fit she used to be for good measure

Brooke Brooke Brooke

>>315254 Turned out better than I expected with the redhead, gaining weight, but still pretty annoying that she’s smaller than she was at the beginning of the series.

>>315321 You realize the comic isn't over, right?

>>315330 I know the strip isn't done yet, but this just makes me kinda sad. Olivia worked hard to lose her weight (Even though she never shed it all off), but ended up relapsing because of Brooke. It's obvious Brooke feels like shit because of it and is avoiding Olivia to at least stay out of the picture to personally prevent her from falling into bad habits, but so far, this just feels sauceless. There's no sexual tension, no fun sequences of events, no (provocative) wardrobe malfunctions/practical fatness issues. I'm just watching a girl relapse because she's trying to help the same friend who got her out of that rut but subsequently fell in (But worse). And maybe that's not for me. Perhaps that's why I really wanted Breaking the Scales to be about Brooke and Olivia delving even deeper into their (new) lifestyles, because there's something there. More extreme size contrast, blob/slob (Brooke), conventionally attractive (Olivia), potential body shaming (Bookending the initial reason as to why Brooke got Olivia on her journey), mild fat to fit (I know, wrong audience, but still not something BWS has truly done). We've already seen mutual gaining done in a really good comic (Couple Stuff) and fit to fat with loss of athleticism (Losing Control, which was less melancholic; and Tipping the Scales). I'm going on on an autistic critique of an internet fat fetish porn comic, which itself is pathetic, but I do feel like the people giving Salt six figures deserve better.

>>315330 omg brooke in a skirt and button down, neeeeeed

>>315335 It's been a downer comic so far, and it's more than halfway done with 6 pages to go unless Salt does his thing of adding more pages. Still holding out, hoping Olivia will not only gain all of her old weight back, but also surpass Brooke.

>>315330 I sense they will catch eachother cheating on their diets in that fastfood place... Both letting themselves go is gonna be hot as fuck...

>>315338 Yes, that’s what I’m hoping for. We WANT Olivia to relapse, she didn’t need to lose weight in the first place!

>>315335 In this case you simply wanted something different, which is fine, but no need to go "well this sucks because it's not what I wanted out of it" (which is always the same discourse around these comics lmao). While it's indeed more mutual WG and about "losing control" this is pretty different from those previous comics so far. I personally like the gloomier tone and the fact that they're aware of their problem and actually attempting to lose weight while still slowly spiraling downward, I just hope we get more pages

I used to think Lilly Satou was Undertaker33's OC when I was a kid.

>>315339 Nah that's basic as hell, I'd rather the ginger become a strongfat and develop a personality

>>315338 >Still holding out, hoping Olivia will not only gain all of her old weight back, but also surpass Brooke. Followed by the third comic in the series, "Breaking the Coffin", where Brooke finally becomes thin again by starving herself out of grief after Olivia dies of a heart attack

>>315380 0/10, Sorry anon but you just don't have it

>>315429 No I think it's a great idea. Clearly being MORBIDly obese isn't enough for you faggots, so why don't we take off the kiddy gloves and bring in the CPAP machine? Weren't you begging for them to get fatter and unhealthier just 5 seconds ago? Don't you fantasise about them being "too fat to live"? Or maybe we should have an ACTUAL happy ending that's not "I love being a helpless blob who can't wipe my own ass!" where they both lose weight. But BWS is too much of a spineless pussy to commit either way.

>>315335 Stop the moral garbage, you just wanted a different fetish out of this, I personally hate the contrasting bullshit and love them both unintentionally bringing out the worst in each other. As a patron this is what I signed up for. (Yeah I read your bitching on patreon too)

>>315438 im hoping for a good ending with this anon i came here to fap not to feel

>>315330 okay now i'm desperately wanting a comic of just Brooke trying to get out of her car and having to lean, shake it side to side with her mass just to tip it over enough for her to kind of get a foot out

>>315437 0/10, deathfats are for post-wall hags, you will never be straight

>>315335 Dude, I'm all about the morality and all, but Olivia lost weight because Brooke insisted upon it, and is regaining on her own too. It's not like she begged Brooke to help her get into shape, and it's not like she's a wreck about having regained weight. Good rule of thumb: if the supposed victim isn't upset, you shouldn't be either.

>>315540 >but Olivia lost weight because Brooke insisted upon it No, Olivia lost weight because Brooke bullied and abused her into doing so, stealing her food as well. Olivia later picked it up and kept up with it on her own later, but the start wasn't her own doing.

>>315541 Some of you take these fictional, comedic fetish scenarios too seriously

>>315545 It's that I don't like mean-spirited, depressing themes in fetish art. Brooke sucks, and has done nothing that warrants liking her. Salt's writing to try and make her sympathetic was the most basic kind of writing.

>>315555 >Brooke sucks, and has done nothing that warrants liking her. What has she done that's even that bad? She was hard on someone who had expressed wanting to make changes in their life. Sure she doesn't look the best, but she isn't evil. >Salt's writing to try and make her sympathetic was the most basic kind of writing. First off, it's not written in a "feel bad for me" kind of way, it's written in a "this is why I got so fat" kind of way. It didn't feel like she's demanding sympathy. Second, even if it were written that way, what's wrong with fleshing out a character to be sympathetic? There's nothing "basic" about it

>>315555 >It's that I don't like mean-spirited, depressing themes in fetish art Some degree of friction is actually great for this fetish and can make content even better. Part of what makes weight gain interesting is that the person keeps gaining weight despite all the incoveniences that come with it, like they're so addicted to food and set on their habits that they simply can't stop it no matter how hard it gets to keep up. In this case though, I'd hardly go as far as to call it "mean-spirited" or "depressing" though >Brooke sucks, and has done nothing that warrants liking her. Salt's writing to try and make her sympathetic was the most basic kind of writing I don't this is the case at all. Also, I don't think she needs to be "likeable" as a character

>>315437 Death feederism isn't sexy. If the sickly characteristics of obesity are what specifically turn you on, why don't you go try picking up chicks in the hospice ward of your local hospital?