>>246748
Thank you so so much for the kind words, I'm so glad you got to enjoy at least some of the comic and when you needed it the most! Hope they or others can continue to do translations, I've gladly approved anyone whose reached out to ask if they can. Maybe I can do some auto machine translations at some point hopefully, sorry sorry no hablo espanol :(((
>>246850
>too text heavy...Story takes up too much priority in your works
Hmm, that's one of the things tho. If you see a lot of text on the page, the in-between panels got cut out. So the more text heavy it gets, that's more story thst got cut out (visually) and filled in via dialogue. Some panels could really be pages and pages when the girls bicker with each other or something like that in a traditional manga. But as fun as that is, unless it's a food fight or fattening flurry belly blasting fight, off to dialogue bubbles it goes 😜
In Moonlight Snack, a lot of the pages have every inch that isn't full of fat girl full of text because that comic moved at lightspeed. It's a bit about pacing, good script, and budget for commissioned comics affects it too.
For sizing stuff, I do work within a range somewhere after immobility but before 'blob'. I'll keep the feedback in mind to try to do some more size variance.
>>246851
>I feel like most girls reach the same weight cap and when someone does it just moves onto the next one.
Depends on what the plot is going for. I did a short comic called Rune Factory: Cow-girl Grow Contest where the plot is each round based on their eating a different girl grew the most.
Then Dungeons and Fatties, the plot is all about taking turns. The most typical cartoon plot where personA gets hit, personB laughs at them, personB gets hit too. So much fun with that silly structure 🧨
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