>>159454
>>159455
well take this from the perspective that I'm mainly into early->mid stage blueberry expansion art. I'm not a huge orbfucker as it were, so I'm not gonna be your main audience.
You've got the actual style of the comic really down pat and close to how they look inside the webcomic, which is absolutely admirable. In particular your Kanaya is pretty damn close.
That however is kind of a double edged sword- the HS style of typically all-black outlines or little outlines at all doesn't lend itself well to defined shapes of inflation, or really anything other than the immediate "circle" shape of stomach/body inflation. Now, if you plan to work on stomach or body inflation primarily that's not a huge deal, but that's just my observation.
The random sparkly objects on the corners of the edges, the unorthodox backgrounds, and the general visual style being akin to a instagram fan edit I feel like distract from your overall art, and make the image feel "cluttered." (but I also think in a roundabout Proustian way it reminds me of some annoying homestuck fans who I used to hang with around 2020-2021 that I kinda despise now, so its really no fault of your own it gets my goat)
All things being equal however, I can equally see that clutter being a good thing- its visually interesting, and gives the viewer something to enjoy or connect to the art other than their own base sexual enjoyment of it. It gives you a really unique identity. I can't remember your name on DA, but I could at the very least see one of your works out in the wild and go "oh that's absolutely (blank), I've seen their stuff everywhere recently."
Frankly, I'd rather you keep that unique identity than let my own critiques smash down your spirit.
And like I said, I've been looking at homestuck inflation porn for the last 7 years I think. a lot of that was from the initial wave of popularity in the early 2010s. There's been a huge trough where barely any was made, so frankly, its refreshing to see new art made with new techniques and a unique sense of style.