These two stories I wrote are based off of FaFComic's unfinished comic titled 'Hetty'. One is a detailed story outline for how I would finish the story. The other is fan story about Hetty and Jimmy spending an evening together, which includes a detailed sex scene.
For anyone who remembers, I posted these stories in the previous write thread. I recently decided to go back to them to change some details and to fix some of the grammatical mistakes.
I don't intend to come back to this comic ever again, and I plan for this to be the last thing I ever write about 'Hetty'. If anyone has any feedback for either of these stories, I'll be glad to hear it.